''MAGICAL LOVE'' SH-R-A FF(updt pg 15)

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lavanya_armaan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

yrr i just read ur ff in one go...

and it wasss amazinggg...vryy nice concpt...😃😃

lovedd it alottt...

Edited by lavanya_armaan - 14 years ago

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lavanya_armaan

@lavanya_armaan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

heyy all d vryy bstt for ur exmasss...

rockk them👍🏼

will b waiting for ur updats curiouslyyy

P.S- plzz dnt frgt to pm me d furhter prtsss...

wud loveee too read ur ff

Edited by lavanya_armaan - 14 years ago

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meeru_s_armaan

@meeru_s_armaan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

hey guys sooo sorry that i'm updating after sooo long...😭..finally xams r over..😃..so it's party time...yay!!!😆
so now time 4 update...was dying to updat guys!! finally i did it..😊.now enough of my chabar chabar.😛😆...here goes the part.😊..ENJOY!!😃

PART 3

ridhima: armaan..tumhn tumhara pyaar zarur milega...main hoon na...(smiled)
armaan:tumhen kese pata k men kya soch raha hun??
ridhima: mene kaha na...i'm an angel...i know everything...
armaan: to tum sach men??
ridhima: han..
armaan: to tum..

and here he goes...he fainted again...

when he came back to his senses he saw her standing again in front of him...smiling beauty...

his eyes popped out again...when

ridhima: don't u dare...don't u dare faint again(pointing her finger at him...scolding him like a teacher) ab tum faint huye too dekhna men kya karti hun...
armaan: (held his blanket in his mouth) kya karo gi??(cutely)
ridhima: men...men...han.i'l make u a monkey and will hang u in a cage in the zoo...samjhe??
armaan: ok teacher...
ridhima: han??
armaan: sorry...(pout)

ridhima smiled at his cute behaviour...

armaan: to tum sch ki angel ho??
ridhima: GOD!! bandar bna k dkhaun??
armaan: nai nai...i mean tum sch men mjhe shilpa dilwao gi na??
ridhima: OF COURSE!!(smile)
armaan: can u show me a demo...(cutely)
ridhima:ummm(thinking)...ok...

she snapped her finger and just then armaan saw shilpa coming into his room...

ridhima suddenly hid herself behind the curtains...

armaan: shilpa tum yahan??? i mean u were bzy na??(low tone)
shilpa: han bzy to thi...but then i thought that i've been very rude to u last night...to mujhe tumse milna chahye...tum..tum theek ho na ab??
armaan: hmm...men theek hun...

meanwhile atul came in...

atul: hi!! shilpa...kesi ho??
shilpa: i'm good..tum kese ho??
atul: men theek hun...anjali nai ayi??
shilpa:(giggled at his cuteness and love for her sis) nai..but she said hi to u...
atul: hi??? (excitedly) haye!!!(sighed)

and all of them laughed at this...suddenly shilpa got up..

shilpa: acha to men ab chalti hun..tum shaam ko shoot pe arahe ho na??
armaan: shaam ko konsa shoot hai??
shilpa: arey america wala new project??
armaan:hun???
atul: arey wohi jis k liye ridhima ayi he...
armaan: u know about it shilpa???(confused and shocked)
shilpa: han subha ek fax aur fone call aya tha...they told me about it...it was quite interesting so i accepted it...so u r coming na in evening??
atul: han han ayega..aur ridhima bhi aye gi...
shilpa: ridhima kon hai??
atul: wohi to is project ki head hai...kal he ayi hai america se...
shilpa: oohh!!
atul: wese armaan... wo hai kahan??
armaan: umm...bhai wo ummm...(after much thinking) han..she went to receive a call
shilpa: ok,...i'll meet her in evening...bye..take care armaan..
armaan: i will...(smiled)
shila:bye atul...
atul: bye...anjali ko mera bye bolna...
shilpa: hun??(confused)
atul: kuch ghalat kaha kya??(scratching his head) oh!! i mean hi bolna...hehe
shilpa: haha...ok atul..bye...

and she left...

atul: men bhi dekhta hun k food is ready or not?? i'm damn hungry yaar...ridhima aye to usey leke ajana neeche ok mere bhai.??
armaan: ok..

and atul also left...just then ridhima came out...

ridhima: so how was the demo??(smile)
armaan: wow yaar..ur too good...
ridhima: wo to men hun...
armaan: tum meri help karo gi na??

ridhima: men tumhari help karne he ayi hun...tumhen shilpa zarur milegi...
armaan:kya tum sach keh rai ho??
ridhima: hmm...(smile)par promise me k tum kabhi mere bare men kisi ko nai batao ge...
armaan: promise...
ridhima: so..friends??(brought hand forward to shake)
armaan: friends..(smiled and shook hands)

ridhima winked and flower petals showered on armaan

armaan:(took petals in his hands) wow...(smiled)
ridhima: friendship gift...(smiled)acha to ab chalen...??
armaan: shoot to shaam ko hai...
ridhima: oho dumb head!! lunch k liye..i'm very hungry(holding her stomach)
armaan: tum logon ko bhi bhook lagti hai??(innocent face)
ridhima: oh!! shutup...hum fairies hain to kya hua..we also feel hungry...
armaan: really??
ridhima: urgh!! ab apne tiny winy brain per zor matt dalo aur chalo...warna yaad hai na MONKEYS look quite cute...
armaan: umm...han han...chalo chalo...(scared and ran away)

all the three were having lunch peacefully when

ridhima: AAAHHH!!!

atul and armaan got up with a jerk...their forks fell down...having mouths filled with food...eyes popped out...

atul and armaan: kya hua????(together)
ridhima: MERAAA NAILLL TOOOT GAYAAA...(crying like a baby stretching every word)
armaan and atul: WHAT???
atul: uff these girls...(and continued with his food again)
armaan: girls??(shouted) is she a girl?? then why is she behaving dumb like them??? did i do right trusting her?? is she really OK?? i mean like REALLY OK???(he thought)

he was hell confused at ridhima's behaviour that how can she be really like a girl...he looked up...

armaan: only god can know these creatures called FEMALES...(he thought) ufff...(and began with his food again)

they were eating food whereas ridhima was continuously cursing her broken nail...blabbering something god knows what...

in evening, armaan came down after getting ready when he was heel shocked to see a sight ...his jaws dropped down...ridhima was sitting on the sofa with a face pack on her face...cucumbers on her eyes...her nails were getting filed and her toes were getting massaged with magic...

armaan: god!! i'll ask u once again...is she a girl??(he looked up and thought with confused helpless expressions)
ridhima: no i'm not...
armaan:hun??
ridhima: i heard that...what u just said...don't forget who i am...u MONKEY...

she was continuously reminding him every now and then what she can do to him...

armaan: what u called me monkey??(angry)
ridhima:(she snapped her finger and every thing on her face and other things,vanished) yes i did...so??
armaan: urgh...GOD!! help me..
ridhima: isi liye toh god ne mujhe bheja hai,..dumbo...
armaan: yaar stop insulting me...plzzz..(begging)
ridhima: whatever...
armaan: by the way..tum ye kya kar rhi thi??
ridhima:oh wo...actually uper se neche zameen par atey atey meri skin pollution ki waja se kharab ho gai thi...u humans kitna pollute kar dete ho environment ko..sheee!! toh isilye i thought to have some spa treatment...(smiled broadly)
armaan: agar koi tumhara magc dekh leta to??
ridhima: oho chill...kuch nai hua na??ab chalo..shoot pe nai jana...kitna boltey ho tum armaan..(and started walking towards main door)
armaan: urgh!!(cursed his luck)

they were walking out when suddenly armaan stopped...

armaan: tum ese he jao gi...change nai karna??
ridhima: wo men car men kar lungi...
armaan:(eyes popped out) KYA??? mere saamne...tumhen sharam nai ati...kesi baten kr rai ho...men esa wesa larka nai hun...(melodramatic way)
ridhima: oh shutup dirty mind...(she snapped her finger and changed into a beautiful sky blue choori daar) see...that's what i meant...
armaan: phw!! mujhe to laga k...
ridhima: han han...i know..ab chalen...

they were sitting in the car

armaan: wese mujhe nai pata tha k fairies bhi itni sharmili hoti hen...i mean churi daars and all...(smirked)
ridhima: han to tumhen kya lagta hai men malika sherawat ki bhatiji hun jo two piece men ghoomun??(angrily)
armaan: wese i don't mind...haha

ridhima got so angry that she snapped her finger and armaan's clothes vanished...he was just in his boxers...

armaan: AAAHHH!! WHATT THE HELL IS THIS??(putting his hands on his chest...covering himself)
ridhima:(laughed madly) u made fun of me na...so here u go...hahahahahaha...
armaan: plz gv me my clothes...plz..plzzz..plzzz...
ridhima: say sorry..
armaan: SORRY...plzzz mere kapre de do...

she snapped her fingers and his clothes were back...thankfully they wr in the car by the time and no one saw him like that...armaan cursed his bad fate again...and they drove to the shoot...

PROMO

reporter: so mr.malik...we heard that u and miss shilpa are seeing each other...
shilpa: no no...it's not true...we'r just friend

armaan's face lost it's colour..he felt heart broken...

shilpa: yes he is very much single...

just then ridhima interrupted...

ridhima: hey shilpa w8..armaan is not single anymore...
shilpa: hun??(shocked)
armaan:hun??(shocked equally)
reporter: really??
riddhima: yup..i'm his new girlfriend...(smiled broadly)

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love
meeru...😃

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nabiha (bia)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

wow amazing dear !
nice update !!
the whole part is rocking !!
love it !!
thanks for pm !!
keep writing !!

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

res *edited* great part! haahah i love riddhima! woow great promo! continue soon x

Edited by zARqaa_X - 14 years ago

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aditi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

i mean yaar..

i love riiddhima...

armaan ko usi ki medicines khila rahi hai...

hehehe...

loved t

cont soon

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fri42911

@fri42911

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

nice update.

please update soon and do pm me when you do.

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Hey Meeru...Welcome back dear...Love the update to the core...the part is just too hilarious...Riddhima and her magics,...too good😆...Poor Armaan...so helpless...woooh Promo is just too good...Riddhima...Armaan's girlfriend...yeeppiieee...try to update soon...Thanks for the PM..take care

Lots of Love
GEET

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shonadesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

hey Meeru
OMG u finally back
hw was ur exam?????
comint to part
it was awesome 👏
loved it to the core
that was hilarious...ridz magic too cool
i love ridz in this so much
ppromo is so cool
thanks for pm
plzzz continue son

Edited by shilpI007 - 14 years ago