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Posted: 14 years ago
Tumne toh sapno pe pani pher diya
Its FF so i didnt thnk who is frm whr i thought they came to arrest Dev but nahi
Chalega wit the evidence Maan hav Dev will be soon in jail for sure
Liked how Geet was strng n was cheerfull after all that experince wit Dev jus few minutes ago
Dev isnt a khuran awesum news that is
He is to not a human being also
Now toh evn NT will take him to court
Dev toh phas gaya
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Hey!
Loved the update!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
it was very very interesting.......................๐Ÿ˜Š
He may hurt you also, you have already seen the promo of what he can do
I think Dev did a good job of thrashing NT,
it reduced Maans work to tie up NT as well ๐Ÿ˜‰
since she has experienced the promo, she can better take care to see Dev is not escaped.........๐Ÿ˜†
did you like the fact that Dev is not a Khurana?
I liked it a lot ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Dev doesnt deserve to be a Khurana, ๐Ÿ˜ก
He holds no honour of it.........๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Maan diaogues in serial applies to Dev here - he has Beghairat khoon.............
not the honorary khoon of Khurana khaandaan๐Ÿ˜ก
Daya now knows every thing and has seen how low Dev couyld stoop
what will he advice Maan?
This part I am not so sure................
he may ask Maan to complain and give punishment of Tadipaar or give a coolie kind of job in far remote place with least source of communication..........n all...........or put him in imprisonment where he cant see anything and should be tortured 24 hours to make him loose his capabilities of thinking or atleast evil thinking................
now that it is clear that Dev does not hold anything as a Khurana
what will he do?
Before giving my consent on this, I would like to appreciate your work ๐Ÿ‘and deep study of making the point very convincing,๐Ÿ˜Š
I was wondered to see the proper paper work made by DM and her husband, ๐Ÿ˜ฒas if they knew it would require in future............๐Ÿ˜‰
Every fact of illegal connections of his father and reward for Pammi s work were well explained.........๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
As far as Dev 's take is concern.................he is a dirty man ๐Ÿ˜ก and would blame his mom for all what happened.
More precisely he cant do anything ๐Ÿ˜• coz everything is in papers, nothing verbal........
he cant even make attempt of calling it a false accusations....
But he may end up doing some cranky things and get nice beatings from Maan, Geet and NT also........................
now that his Shares have been transferred to Geet
what will he do? will he hurt her?
I think he would not try to hurt her.........as he experienced the outcome of that by One Tight Slap..........๐Ÿ˜†
He may try to act innocent and try to make smooth with Geet so that she can forgive and accept him as her husband............which is not at all possible................
Or he may also question, Y Geet is considered to have shares in her name, when she is not his wife or in any relation with Khurana............
i am not very sure.............but curious to know............๐Ÿ˜Š
what will NT do now?
she is the greatest looser all her plans going to drain
Ufff I feel so pity on NT.........๐Ÿ˜ญ
Duniya ko dhoka dene nikli thi, par khud ko duniya ka sabse bada dhoka mila..............๐Ÿ˜†
Well Dev and NT are not less than Rab ne Bana di Jodi..........๐Ÿ˜‰
However NT is an all time looser, ๐Ÿฅฑ
she would have got this even if she marries some other guy..........
coz her own character is not very good..............๐Ÿ˜ก
Hmmm so as she said, she may file case,
ofcourse she will be also punished............
Or simply she would divorce him and will begin to search a new Bakra.........
this time rela time bakra........๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Actually I wonder how she would have flet, when she knew that Dev's family would not carry Khurana s surname....................๐Ÿ˜ฒ
she would have confirmed that her Fox mind is nothing but a loosers mind and completely idiot........๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
I have wrote my feelings..............i know its lengthy may be boring too........
But i want good comments in return.....................๐Ÿ˜†
Great work!!!!!!!

finally some one who really appreciated my hard work
thank you Laxmi for taking pains in analysing the situation
I loved your comment
and for sure Dev would try to manofy Geet as she is the one going through the pain
but Maan and DM always being the ones ahead of him will do something that he may not be able to fulfill his plan
and as for NT she will sue him and make him suffer
though she herself is not right but in eyes of la her case is very strong
I am just searching for the punishments given to people like Dev
and once I get enough info will take a step ahead
thank you again
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Tumne toh sapno pe pani pher diya

Its FF so i didnt thnk who is frm whr i thought they came to arrest Dev but nahi
Chalega wit the evidence Maan hav Dev will be soon in jail for sure
Liked how Geet was strng n was cheerfull after all that experince wit Dev jus few minutes ago
Dev isnt a khuran awesum news that is
He is to not a human being also
Now toh evn NT will take him to court
Dev toh phas gaya

you are right Dev is Gone
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JayaR

lovely update shruti.....good to know that Dev is not a khurana heir.....and does not hold any shares or property.......now he should rot in hell......and this NT..... she is so cheap.....i change my mind...i think she should be punished equally.......

and i hope Maan safeguards Geet.....and i know he will do that......

๐Ÿ˜†so you changed your mind about NT
i liked it
though after reading that you are taking pity on her I thought I will change her and almost did it
but when I re read the update i said no ways NT can not be nice and I am not CVs of GHSP๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome part
i loved the part that Dev is not a Khurana
plz continue soon with ur other fics too
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

thanks for the double update...........

did you like the fact that Dev is not a Khurana?
i am very happy that he is not khurana............oh god i feel very happy that this b๐Ÿคฌ got wat he deserved............
when I was writing the update the series was going on the net as I missed the ep. I was seeing it online the scene was the one where Dev was lecturing Maan about Geet .... I was so angry that I felt like killing the CVs but then I thought I can do nothing there but can sure do something here๐Ÿ˜‰
Daya now knows every thing and has seen how low Dev couyld stoop
what will he advice Maan?
i think he will advice maan to take the lawful steps to keep dev away from geet and khuranas..........as he might hurt any of them.......
you are right
now that it is clear that Dev does not hold anything as a Khurana
what will he do?
well he is a brainless ๐Ÿคฌ...........so he will be doing something foolish and stupid..........may b he might act that he realized his mistake and want to prove himself again adn ask for a chance or something.........
ummm
now that his Shares have been transferred to Geet
what will he do? will he hurt her?
he might take the safe route in pleading and try to get back his share or he might hurt her but if he hurts her he knows for sure maan wont leave him
ummm
what will NT do now?she is the greatest looser all her plans going to drain
well she had discussed her plans wat she wants to do.......well she is fter riches only.........he might apply for divorce and forgery & dowry case on dev......or dev might try to turn the plate by asking her to help him clear the mess and they can together do something to get back @ geet....
NT Bechaari "dhobhi ka kuttaa ghar ka na ghat ka"

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Posted: 14 years ago
r u seriously watching the series still................
well i stopped after that farmhouse scene...........
it was irritating to me that geet can forgive some one like dev who has tampered her honor......after that i read article she will b moving out so i really got pi**** off with the cv that i stopped it............i normally do it when i think the scenes will just increase my bp.........and then when things falls into place i watch them and watch only maaneet scenes that i missed from net......from most of the ppl swearing all over the net i guess its really bad...........i think the cv's really need to back up with strong reasons for choosing this track......moreover gc was on break so all the scenes with dev it just irritated me to the core...........i am not sure how they r going to take this fwd...........will c if there was any positive comment from the episode then probably will start to watch again.............usually this kind of break up in geet they take it to the max of 3-4 weeks.......so waiting for the course to change.........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

finally some one who really appreciated my hard work
thank you Laxmi for taking pains in analysing the situation
I loved your comment
and for sure Dev would try to manofy Geet as she is the one going through the pain
but Maan and DM always being the ones ahead of him will do something that he may not be able to fulfill his plan
and as for NT she will sue him and make him suffer
though she herself is not right but in eyes of la her case is very strong
I am just searching for the punishments given to people like Dev
and once I get enough info will take a step ahead
thank you again

Well I am so glad you liked my comment.........Smile
Actually I could not help, the things were so good and well explained that i could not just end my comment saying good work.........๐Ÿ˜ณ
I intended you to know what I liked the most with my own good reasons.........๐Ÿ˜›
It was a real exercise to my heart n brain to comment,
you shall receive same kind of comment for all those interesting topics,..............
Seriously, I loved your job and depth in detail...........ClapClapClap
also considering the fact that you read and reply and also take pain to let me know of your reply,
pleases me to write more of my opinion towards the episode...............Smile
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the reply,
Hope you get a good info on horrible punishment to Dev kind of criminals...........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

r u seriously watching the series still................
well i stopped after that farmhouse scene...........
it was irritating to me that geet can forgive some one like dev who has tampered her honor......after that i read article she will b moving out so i really got pi**** off with the cv that i stopped it............i normally do it when i think the scenes will just increase my bp.........and then when things falls into place i watch them and watch only maaneet scenes that i missed from net......from most of the ppl swearing all over the net i guess its really bad...........i think the cv's really need to back up with strong reasons for choosing this track......moreover gc was on break so all the scenes with dev it just irritated me to the core...........i am not sure how they r going to take this fwd...........will c if there was any positive comment from the episode then probably will start to watch again.............usually this kind of break up in geet they take it to the max of 3-4 weeks.......so waiting for the course to change.........

you will not beleive that why I watched that particular ep.
don't laugh but while flipping th echannels I got a look of Geet packin her bag
and tell you she was looking BEAUTIFUL
just like an angle
and then I thought let me catch it online what is she doing so beautifully dressed and was thinking some thing good happened
and what I got
but nice for my FF I screwed him in anger
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Well I am so glad you liked my comment.........๐Ÿ˜Š

Actually I could not help, the things were so good and well explained that i could not just end my comment saying good work.........๐Ÿ˜ณ
I intended you to know what I liked the most with my own good reasons.........๐Ÿ˜›
It was a real exercise to my heart n brain to comment,
you shall receive same kind of comment for all those interesting topics,..............
Seriously, I loved your job and depth in detail...........๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
also considering the fact that you read and reply and also take pain to let me know of your reply,
pleases me to write more of my opinion towards the episode...............๐Ÿ˜Š
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the reply,
Hope you get a good info on horrible punishment to Dev kind of criminals...........

thank you dear readers like you are gems in the crown of IF

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