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Posted: 14 years ago
its ok dear take ur time
congrats 4 the new thread
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi, nice track. i think you should end it 5or6 parts but, it's your choice. As, we all know you got cool ideas cooking in your head. keep on updating. Yeh!!!!😃😃😃😃 for pini!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smanchik

hi, nice track. i think you should end it 5or6 parts but, it's your choice. As, we all know you got cool ideas cooking in your head. keep on updating. Yeh!!!!😃 for pini!!!


thanks yaar!!! 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey pini really sry 4 too late comment bt give me ma sry back to me coz no sry no thnx...now dunt throw any thing to me it'll break ur comp or lappy...hehehehe 😆 back to comment...loved it yaar gr8 as usual...bt fully emotional part...m crying after reading dis cant see ma maaneet lyk dis... 😭 n loved maan's plan...happy dat dev n nt r wid him...update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

😊😊😊

Originally posted by: avani_9

Hey pini really sry 4 too late comment bt give me ma sry back to me coz no sry no thnx...now dunt throw any thing to me it'll break ur comp or lappy...hehehehe 😆 back to comment...loved it yaar gr8 as usual...bt fully emotional part...m crying after reading dis cant see ma maaneet lyk dis... 😭 n loved maan's plan...happy dat dev n nt r wid him...update soon...


What???? Sorry??

If u ever say this word again, 😡😡 (Just kidding) hehehe..

No worries yaar,

Thanks opzz nahiii... u r most welcome for the comment!!

Will update 2morw, i was really busy with an assignment. But i finshed it today and will be able to update by 2mrow!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

To All my readers!!

A big sorry for not updating this in a while!!

Will update the next part by tomorrow..

Be there to comment!

Love u all,

Pini...


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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 33:

NT and Geet was sitting on the bed. (Maaneet Room)

NT: Geet, if you want to get him back to you, if you want him to love you for ever like you dreamt. You have to act like I say.

Geet: To get him back, I can do anything Nt.. He is mine.. I can't live without him.

NT: Oki, he will surely gonna ask you to be with him until the divorce. He will give u as much as love he can. You only have to do is love him. Act like you are nothing without him..

Geet: NT, I don't need to act that. I really do love him and I am nothing without him…

NT: I know I know, BUT make sure that you will not remind him about the divorce, as he still thinks that you want that.

Geet: I will be able to make him understand nah?

NT: Don't worry Geet, you will. I am here for you, Dev is here. We all are here for you.

Geet: Thanks Bhabhi.

NT: What?

Geet: Oh Sorry, NT..

NT: yeah, that's like my friend. Ham bhabhi kham, dost syada, so I will call you Geet and you can call me NT… I really need a friend to gossip about my Hubby. Hehe

Geet: Me too, I also need a friend to share my feelings..

They heard a sound near the door. Both looked when they saw him. Maan was standing near the door with a slight smile on his lips. This is the first time Maaneet saw each other directly after that incident.

NT: Bro aap?

Maan: Han, mai… Agar tum donoki hubby criticising is finished can I have a word with my wife?

Geet: Who hum, ke.. app, yeh….


Maan: Geet, don't be too excited with me.. I am you husband after all. Don't you don't have to be formal by calling me aap,

Geet: (THINKING) yeh loo, he doesn't even remember what happened between us… He is acting like nothing is wrong…

Geet: NT yeah, deko..

NT: Shh Geet, apna moo bandh karo, can't u remember what I just said, don't remind him about the divorce. Act normally. Btw, I am going….. take care…

Maan: Are you going or not ??

NT: kya bro, I just took 2 or 3hours. That's not a big deal..

Maan: Han, that's not a big deal for me. But for that bechaara, who is still waiting for you near the beach house? Han? Kya use toh yeh bada big deal hai nah?

NT: OMG! I totally forgot. Geet, I will take your leave now. Dev must be furious.

As soon NT left the room, Maan closed the door and locked it.

Geet: Maa.. maa.. maan??


Maan: Geet, tume kabse bolneki bimari hai han? The Geet I knew was always blabbering.

Geet: Yeh toh hadh hogaya… Maan, muje koi bolneki bhimari nahi hai., I was just wondering what has got in to you so suddenly.

Maan: Matlab??

Geet: Matlab saaf hai. Tum do dinse meri baat nahi suni, or cheherabhi nahi deka. Ab aaj achanak, eaise… it is a quick change..

Maan: Ok, so that means to look @ my wife, I have to take someone's permission?


Geet: I didn't say that, I was just questioning you about your change…

Maan: What change…

Geet: Don't try to act smart Maan… I know you doesn't love me anymore or you.. you…

Maan came near and put his finger on her lips.



Maan: Chup,,, bil kul chup… I don't wanna hear anymore.

Maan: Kuch math batao Geet. I know, we have been through a very rough time. I know what u need and what are my desires.

I know what is going to happen in one month. But the thing I don't know is how to live without you. I am incomplete without you, and I know you are too.


But our destiny wants this. So will play this game.

Within one month, something will gonna happen and I don't know what is it look like and whether we will be able to handle that.

What I want most is now to be with you in this month, like nothing happened. I want to love you, I want to tell you how much u mean to me. Abh aur kuch math kaho…..

Maan was crying while saying these things. He tried his hard to control him feelings, emotions.. But he failed. Seeing Maan like this hearing his confession, Geet also started to cry….

Both of them were crying like there is no tomorrow.


……………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

Dev and NT was talking about them in the beach.

Dev: See how they love each other, but destiny is playing this cruel game with them..

NT: Han, bro found his true love for the first time and look, he is not able to make it…

Dev: So as Geet. She also found her true love, but..

NT: Plz god, don't play with their emotions. They are meant for each other…

………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

Geet: Maan, muje aapse kuch…

Maan: No Geet. No more talking. I know what are you going to say and plz, don't get that matter in here. I really wanna spend this month with you, without any arguments, fights and snap backs. Just love, care, friendship, khushi…. Sifr yeh sabh..

Geet: Ok Maan. As you wish. (Maan, I will make u understand that you are making a mistake. My love will surely turn back your idea of I want a divorce from you)

Maan: Ok, Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khuna, what are your plans for tonight?

Geet: Mh, nothing special, I think I will sleep early as I am so tired.

Maan: Oh really, need any help?

Geet: No thank you. I have my own husband to help me with that..

Maan: Oh! But I will be much more entertaining than him..

Geet: Achcha, toh… aap 9 baje mere kamreme aao. I will make an excuse to my husband. He is normally an office jerk.

Maan: So, this is your plan tonight ha? Asking someone else to come and join you while I am working? Not bad……

Geet: What to do, you are so busy with your work load. So I have to have an alternative hai nah?

Maan: Mrs. Geet MSK, the one and only thing you have to make sure is, you can't never be able to make the fool out of me, samje tum?

Geet: Oh ok, then… out down your work load and join me @ 8, so that u can punch that guy out….

Maan: U have become very naughty my darling..

Geet: I know, but this is the start….

Maan: Impressive…..

Geet: What??

Maan: Tum…

He Slowly took her hands and grabbed her by her waist.

Geet: Maan, what are you doing, someone will come..

Maan: So?

Geet: Someone might see us..

Maan: So?

Geet: Maan, let me go.. plz

Maan tightened his gasp. Now Geet can feel his breaths near her neck.


Maan: Geet, open your eyes, someone will come…

Geet: So?

Maan: Someone might see us like this.

Geet: So?

That's it…. He covered her lips with his warm, v shaped lips…

Geet slowly run her hands through his hair while Maan is busy with her dhupatta.



Precap: Some romantics 😳 after a long time and Maan punching out the guy who came to meet Geet @ night…😕


I am really sorry for the delay of this update.

I know it's been a long time since my last update.

But what to do, was really busy with some Assignments and Exams.

These days I have my mid-sem break until monday. So was able to update this..


Please, don't be angry with me..

Hit the like button if you loved this update and eagerly waiting for your comments and ideas.

Please don't forget to leave a comment after reading this!

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Posted: 14 years ago


thanks yaarooo!!! 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part Pini! But it took you so long to update!

Hope you update soon! It was really good! Can't wait for the next part!

Love and Hugs,
Kriya <33
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update ... the precap is interesting

continue soon

love
Sana

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