~scared of pleasure~ AR Fic Lst updt on 18 (28/03)

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

nice ss. loved it .
U portrayed Ridhima very well .Her turmoil ,her fear ,her nervousness .You described all with ease. Armaan is so caring ,hard to find some one so understanding nd considerate .
Loved the way he chose her comfort first nd was ready to wait,till she feel relax. Love session was awesome.
Plz add me in your buddy list . i have sent u buddy request .plz accept it.

love
ritu

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roshni mittal

@-wild-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: janu1610

nice ss. loved it .
U portrayed Ridhima very well .Her turmoil ,her fear ,her nervousness .You described all with ease. Armaan is so caring ,hard to find some one so understanding nd considerate .
Loved the way he chose her comfort first nd was ready to wait,till she feel relax. Love session was awesome.
Plz add me in your buddy list . i have sent u buddy request .plz accept it.

love
ritu

Hey sweety thnx for ur awsome comment s....................Welli am glad u like the part...well its my first OS and i was worry that if i will be able to write it properly or not but thnx to u all guys u love my os.

yes sweety i excepated ur request

thnx for the awsome cpment

love u

salina

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

gosh gal.............

sooo hot n passionate..........

loved the os alot...

simply amazing..

thnx for the pm..................

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Parneet

@ParneetS

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Hey Salina...:)
wowww the ending was def amazing...:)
it was a cute....romantic....hot n passionate part....
u gave lil too much info though....lol but it was pretty hot...:)

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cutiedevil1

@cutiedevil1

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

That was really nicee...!!! ;)

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arooshi

@arooshee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

wow!!!
awsome
what a story
I just loved it
who says u can't write about making love
u wrote it beautifully;it was not at all vulgar
in fact everyone shud know about it this way
sex education is not bad
loved to see armaan's care it was fantabulous
if everyone wud have been like armaan things wud have been so nice for girls
once again amazing
great job
love
arooshee

Edited by arooshee - 14 years ago

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danny0072

@danny0072

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

excellent part but why end so soon

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lakshmisalvadi

@lakshmisalvadi

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

😉 Hi Selina

Wow what a super hot OS yaar. superb. Liked it from bottom of my heart. U r one heck of a writter. Nobody can write like u. Fantastic. Keep going.👏 If u are not married. My wish is u should get hubby like Armaan or Maan both are hottys. thanks for PM. Keep writting more OS.

Love u dear

Lakshmi

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Medha

@Medha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

OMG Salina, that was such a lovely part! I loved it! The part was pretty hot. LOL. I loved Naina's teasing session. Armaan's anger was pretty justified! Epilogue was soo sweet! Loved it a lot! Thanks for the PM, and do continue to write more.

-Medzi <33