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Love in silence Part 14

Druv smiles:This is my only sister Shivangi.
Shivangi smiles:Namaste...
Suryabhan and Neha are petrified seeing her.
Neha thinks:How can she be Shivangi?This is Geet.

Neha meets Druv outside.
D:Why did you call me urgently?
N:To talk about an important matter.
D:What's the matter Neha?Your health...
N:Forget about my health.Is Shivangi your sister?
Druv finds it very strange:Why Neha?
N:Tell me the truth...don't try to hide it..
D:Your doubt is true.She is not my real sister.
Druv tells how he got Shivangi.
Neha is excited:It's such a sweet news.Maan will be so happy to know this.
D:Maan?Who is he?
N:Geet's husband.
D:Who is Geet?
N:Geet is none other than Shivangi.
Druv is surprised.

Druv runs to Shivangi.
D:Shivangi,there is a happy news.You are married.you have a loving husband who waits for you.Your baby has a father.Be happy.
She is nervouMaan:What?But i feel..nothing is ok..
D:Don't worry yaar...be happy...

Neha goes to the Kapoor house.
All are sitting in the front room.
They are surprised to see her.
N:Maan...you are not alone.Geet is alive.
All are surprised.
MAAN:What?My Geet is alive?

Neha brings Maan to Druv's house.
N:Dr.Druv..this is Maan.
D:Nice to meet you.
MAAN:Me too.You looked after my wife well.
D:She is my sister.You don't know how happy i am.Because..i was scared whether Geet will have to deliver a baby who has no father.
Neha and Maan can't understand anything.
MAAN:What did you say?
D:Geet is pregnant.
They are surprised.
MAAN:What?I'm going to be a father.Wow!I'm getting Geet and our baby back.Where is Geet?I can't wait any longer to see her.
D:Shivangi!
Geet comes out of her room.Maan runs to her with excitement:Geet!I'm so happy today.
She is expressionless.
Maan understands it and feels upset.
N:Maan...you know that Geet does'nt remember anything.Slowly slowly she will recover.Have some patience man..
Maan is upset.

Geet is dressed up.Druv goes near her:Shivangi...you put sindoor...Maan will be happy to see it.
She puts sindoor.

Maan is near the car.
D:Take care...take care of Geet and the baby.
Maan smiles:Ok..
Geet cries:Druv Bhaiyya...i miss you...
Druv sheds tears:Me too.But i will visit you when i come down to India.
Maan and Geet enter the car.They bid 'Good-Bye...'

Maan starts driving...
Maan touches Geet's arm.She takes her arm away.Maan feels upset.
G:I'm sorry.I don't remember anything.But i will try my best to be a good wife.Please be patient.The Doctor says that i may get my memory back.
Maan smiles:For you i can wait till the end of my life..even though you don't remember me..you came with me with confidence.That itself is more than enough for me.
Geet keeps silent.

Geet's delivery....

The Doctor comes out and says:Congrats Mr.Maan...It's a baby girl..
Maan and others are happy.
Maan and others go and take the baby in their arms.
Maan goes near Geet.She opens her eyes:Maan...which place is this?
She looks around.
G:Is it a hospital?Oh!What i remember is..something hitting me and falling off the cliff.I'm alive?I thought my life is over..i won't be able to see you again.But i'm with you Maan.I'm so happy.
Geet holds his arms and sheds tears.
Maan is surprised:Geet...you got your memory back..our daughter brought us luck.
Geet can't understand anything:What did you say?
Maan tells everything to her.Geet is wondered:I can't believe it!
The baby is brought to her.Geet takes the baby in her arms and kisses her.
MAAN:This is not an ordinary baby.She is an angel who brought luck to us.
G:Yes..you are right Maan.So let us name her Pari.
MAAN:Sure.That's a sweet name.

After two years....

Maan and Geet's wedding anniversary....Geet wears a beautiful yellow saree.Maan enters the bedroom:Are you not ready yet?
But when he sees her,he melts.His eyes are completely on her.
G:What happened Maan?have you not seen me before?Why are you looking at me like this?
MAAN:You look gorgeous Geet.My wife and my daughter are angels.
She laughs.
G:You are not bad.You look very handsome Maan.
MAAN:Really?
Geet smileMaan:Ya...but Maan..you are telling me to get ready.But did you get ready?
MAAN:Oh!I thought i will get ready very late.I never knew that you will be so fast.

She laughs.He gives a file to her:You keep it in the cupborad Geet.This is needed tomorrow.
G:Ok..

Maan wears Shervani.
MAAN:Now how do i look?
G:Superb..you look like a filmstar.
Maan and Geet laugh.

Maan and Geet come dounstairs with Angel.Party has just started.The guests have reached.They see surprise guests.Druv and Neha...
N:Maan..i promised you that if i'm alive i will come to see your kids.I have come to see Pari.
Neha takes Pari in her armMaan:So cute...
G:Druv Bhaiyya...why did'nt you call us and tell that you both are coming today?
Druv smileMaan:We thought of giving you a surprise.
MAAN:You both have given us the biggest surprise...your's and Neha's wedding news...You both got married so soon.
Druv looks at Neha and smileMaan:Everything was sudden.It was a momentary decision.Love happened.We could not wait to get married.
Neha blushes.

The song 'Tere ore..' from the movie 'Singh is King' is played.Maan-Geet and Druv-Neha dance.

THE END

Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thats such a fabulous update
loved it
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey why did u end it so soon...................
thought u wud b writing abt maan trying to get her memory back and all............
if u write any more maaneet ff pl pm me..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsmm n hapy end of a mindbloing ff...
Bt do keep writing.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update and very nice ending. it is good that they live happily now😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow thats an awsome one yaar ...lovely ending !!
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Posted: 14 years ago


I loved it . Glad Geet got her memory back . Maneet baby Pari was so sweet . 😃

Nice FF ..... 😊

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