|| DSDV FF - Pyaar Ki Kahani - //Chap.7 Pg. 7// || - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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great start
can't wait for the next part & PreNa scenes 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tulipbaby53

The beginning is really nice so far! I do not watch the show, but I'm sure I will be able to follow along. 😆

Thanks (=
Feel free to PM me with any questions =]

Originally posted by: -Zaara-

great start

can't wait for the next part & PreNa scenes 😳

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow! 😃 Gr8 start 👍🏼
looking 4ward to the nxt part 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Aysha-

wow! 😃 Gr8 start 👍🏼

looking 4ward to the nxt part 😊

Thanks :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Liked chapter2 too..so whats d mystery abt Sumi girl
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sparklin_star

Liked chapter2 too..so whats d mystery abt Sumi girl

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Even i cant answer that. 🤣
I need to think of something 🤣 🤣
Edited by Sweetu.Baby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing start. Love the mystery and suspense. Thanx for pm. Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Davi

Amazing start. Love the mystery and suspense. Thanx for pm. Cont soon

Thank you (=
And i will!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~ Chapter 3 ~
Sumi is thinking to herself: "Kab tak jooth bolungi main? Sach to ek din baar ajaenga. Aur agar kisiko paatha chala tho...
Pallvi comes out and says "Kaha koi hui ho?"
Sumi shakes her head. Pallvi tells her to come and help in the kitchen
*Prem's House*
Dinner is being served. Everyone is eating. Scene switches to PremNa's room. Both get romantic, sit on the bed, and lights go off.
You all can use your knowledge at this point 😆
The next day, Urmila says that her college friend will be coming a few days to stay with them, and if it is okay. Gautham says of course it is, and orders Nandani to go clean the guest room. Urmila says her friend is different, so she hopes they do not mind. She says Aysha will be coming in the afternoon, during lunch. Nandani comes back and asks what her friend likes. Urmila says make pasta. Nandani looks tensed, but Urmila says she will help her. Prem comes downstairs and says if his wife makes Pasta "Man bharke lunch lunga aaj"
Pratham says "Kai zer na daldhe andaar" 😆
Everyone laughs.
Its lunch time. Aysha walks in, and Prem almost bumps into her.
He looks shocked.
Aysha is wearing a strapless shirt, with a short shorts:
In short, she looks like a legit Katrina Kaif. Pratham tries to hide his laughter as Nandani "mean eyes" Prem 😆
Urmila gets all excited, to see her friend. Urmila says she hasnt changed since college.
Pratham murmers "Tabi asi voh gumthe thi?!"
Aysha syas "WOOOOOW ITNA BADA GHAR MAIN MAIN RENHE VALI HU!?"
Urmila takes her upstairs to her room.
Aysha jumps on the bed. Urmila explains to her that she can't wear such clothes around the house, and she needs a sari, since Prapti took all her clothes. Aysha makes a face. She says "Muje voh Nandani jaise sari do phir!!"
Nandani comes in with a sari. She says she will help her, and Ayshai agrees.
Its dinner time and Yasha comes down in her Sari.
She seems unconfortable. Pratham laughs, Urmila hits him. Aysha trips, but Prem catches her. Nandani yells "Kahna tanda ho raha hai," and both comes down. Aysha is about to sit next to Prem, but Nandani takes the seat, and Aysha moves to another seat. Aysha asks if Urmila will take her coth shopping tomorrow because the sari is to heavy. Aysha is talking about college days, and wont shutup. Pratham seems annoyed and whispers "Kitna bak bak bak bak?" to Prem.
Aysha syas in college Urmila was a girl who had to oily pigtails and big balck glasses 😆
Pratham spits out the water he was drinking and starts to crack up. Urmila tells him to shutup. Pratham accidently says "Dekho Ma voh..."
Pratham asks to be excused.
Gautham changes the subject as asks Prem how is day was. Prem says it was fine.
Suddenly Nandani seems tensed. She says she is full and asks to be excused.
Nandani goes, and she seems to look uneasy.
...:::...More To Come...::...
Edited by Sweetu.Baby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
This was a good update, Sweetu! Nice twist with the friend coming to visit! 😆

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