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Posted: 14 years ago
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concept is veryyyyyyyyyy nice
part was awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank u everyone for likeing the part😊
I hope I am not boring you with this.
Well as I promised, I will try to post a long part. I hope I live up to your expectationes.
Part 3
Recap: Armaan Ridhima at the terrace, Ridhima says yes to marriage, but she says no to the puchdeni kadha, Armaan shocked.
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Armaan: Par Ridhima, abhi to tum ne,... kia woh sab mazak tha. Kia tum mujh se shaadi nahi chahti?
Ridhima interrupted him and said
-Nahi Armaan, aisa bilkul nahi hai. Mein tumhare saath rehna chahti hun. Sab bhula kar, tumhare saath ek nai churuat karna chati hoon. Mein yeh bhi janti hoon ke ye kadha tum oss larki ko dena chate ho, jiske saath tum apni sari zindagi bitana chahte ho. Aur, woh ladki mein hi hon, sab janti hoon main. Par, mein iss laik nahi hon ke yeh kadha pehen sakon
Armaan: Par kion Ridhima?,
Ridhima: Maine tumhara kitna dil dukaya hai. Hamesha tumhe ansoon aur dukh ke liava kuch nahi diya Pehle tumhara samjhne mein itne der kar kar tumhe tarpaya. Phir hamara pehla breakup meri misunderstanding ki wajah se hoa. Phir hum eik saath hoe, meine phirse tum par shak kar kar tumhara dil tora. Ab jab tum wapis aye, toh Sid se shaadi ho chuki thi. Jab se tum wapis aye ho, eik bhi din nahi guzra, jahan tumhe meri wajah se dukh na poncha ho. Batao, kia ab bhi mein iss kadhe ke laik hon?
Armaan: Ridhima, aj kaha hai, ainda mat kehna. Tum mere kia ho. Shaid mein lafzon mein na bata sakon. Tum woh ho jiss ne mujhe zindagi ka eik naya roop dikahaya. Mamma pappa mein misunderstandings mere chote hote se hi ti. Pya mein bilkul wishwaas nahi raha tha. Lagta tha jaise pyar nazdikian nahi, balke doorian barhata hai. Jab tum se mila, to tum ne mujhe pyar karna sikaya, eik behter insaan banaya, zindagi k aeik naya roop dikaya. Aur woh pyar bhi diya, jis pyar ke liye mein bachpan se tarasta aya hon.
Ridhima tum mere liye sab kuch ho, meri jine ka maqsad, mera pyar, meri jaan hot tum.
Tears were flowing down Ridhimas cheek.
Ridhima: Ab bhi itna oyar karte ho mujhse?, itna kuch ho jane ke baad bhi?
Armaan(nodded): Aur hamesha karta rahoon ga. So may I?
Ridhima nodded and forward her hand, so he could put the kadha on her wrist. She rested her head on his chest, and they remaind like that. No one of them wanted to seperate. Suddenly both pagers rang. Ridhima went to duty while, Armaan was asked to meet Shashank in his cabin.
-Abbey, kahin raato raat sasurji ka irada to nahi badal gaya. Hey baghwan, ab to sasurji ka demag silent par rakh d. 😕
In the Cabin
Shashank: Aye aye dr. Armaan. Please have a seat. Aur kal meri adwise kam a gay?
Armaan: Jee Sir, thank u. Waise Ridhima to chali gay the mere pohonchne tak, par aap ki madad se, oss ke dil ki baat samajh mein a gay.
Shashank: hmm, aur mujhe aap ke dil ki baat bhi samajh mein a chuki hai.
Armaan: Ji?😲
Shashank: Nahi, kuch nahi. Meine aap se kehna tha ke, aap aj humare han sham ko kion nahi a jate. Mein aap se aur Ridhima se kuch bat karna chahta hon, par yahan nahi. To what say?
Armaan: Jee,....kion nahi, mein a jaon ga.
Shahshank: Ok, phir mulaqat hoti hai. Ab aap apni duty resume kar li jiye.
The rest of the day went in duty. Armaan Ridhima were not able to meet each other, so he didnt get to aks what Shashank wanted to talk abou.
At Gupta resistend:(Ridhma has come back now)
The doorbell rang, and Armaan came.
Shahshank: Arre, aie dr. Armaan please. PADMA!!, zara yahan ana
Padma: Arre Armaan beta kaise ho. Jab se wapis ae ho, mile hi nahi.
Armaan: jee, woh bas.
Shashank: Khair, ao betho. Tum se kuch zarori baat karni hai.
Lekin pehle ridhima ko bula lein. Ridhima!!
Ridhima came down, today her face was javing a glow, and her eyes were sparkling. Eeven Anjali came along.
She tok the free seat beside Armaan.
Shahshank: Dekho beta, meij janta hon ke tum dono ke beach itna kuch hoa hai. Lekin mujhe lagta hai ke ab hume beeti baton ko peeche chorna chahye, aur ek nai shuruat karni chahiye.
Armaan Ridhima looked at each other from their side eyes.
Shashank: Dekho beta, tum dono eik dosre se pyar karte ho. Itna hone ke baad bhi bi kudrat ne tumhe milaya hai. Mujhe lagta hai ke hume ab zyada der nahi karni chahiye...., mujhe lagta ke hume jald koi acha sa mohrat nikal ke tumhari shaadi kar deni chahiye.
Armaan Ridhima looked at eavh other fully for the first time.
finally done. I hope it wasnt boring. I will try to update soon. Please hit the like button if you find the part good😊
Edited by medical - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey everyone!
As I said, this is the first time I am writing.
I apriciate, and want to thank all who liked and
commented the parts.
I am wondering, if you would like to read further or should I stop writing it ?
If there is something you want to read, and have in this FF, then please post your
demands, suggestiones etc.. It really helps me in writing as I would write what you want to read.
I am open for continuing, but I want to know if you want me to continue 😊
Please comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey everyone!
As I said, this is the first time I am writing.
I apriciate, and want to thank all who liked and
commented the parts.
I am wondering, if you would like to read further or should I stop writing it ?
If there is something you want to read, and have in this FF, then please post your
demands, suggestiones etc.. It really helps me in writing as I would write what you want to read.
I am open for continuing, but I want to know if you want me to continue 😊
Please comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nyc part ...... do contiune soon ....... n plzz pm me wen u update .......

ritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey everyone!
Thanks to everyone for liking and commenting the part😊
I hope You will read further, if not, please tell me and I will stop writing.
So here is the next part. I actually want to get AR married soon, and write about their married life, but I want the wedding to be in a grand way, you know, with many rasams. If someone have other suggestiones, please tell me, I appriciate😊
Part 4
Recap: Armaan at Ridhimas house, Shashank talks about the marriage.
Shashank: Arre aap logon ko kya iss se koi problem hai?
Armaan: Ji?, nahi, woh...mera matlab....woh Ridhima se ek bar poch lein.
Shashank: haha, aap to abhi se hi uss darne lage😆, khair. Jahan tak mein apni beti ko janta hoon, usse iss se koi problem nahi, kion Ridhima?
Ridhima: Ji papa😳, and lowered her eyes.
Anjali: Congratulations hone wale jija ji 🥱, and hugged both.
Shashank: Waise, Armaan, aap ke liye eik aur surprise hai.
Armaan: Ji, surprise Sir?
Shashank: Ji. Mene aap ke parents se baat ki thi aaj, aap logon ki shaadi ke bare mein. Woh, a rahein hain yahan, aur woh bhi subhe. 😊
Armaan was very happy now. He felt as if he got the reason of living, after getting the news about marriage, and Ridhima saying yes, for it being so soon.
They talked for a while, and Armaan tok leave.
IN Ridhima Anjalis rom:
Anjali was sleeping, while Ridhima was to excited to sleep. She didnt knew why, but she was having a strange feeling of excitment in her. She took Armaans photo from the side table, carrised it and held it near her heart, while recolecting the days events.
Suddenly, her mobile rang. (aur iss waqat toh humara hero armaan hi ho sakta hai, right?)
Armaan: Hi, kaisi ho?
Ridhima:achi hoon...aur....
Armaan: Aur?
Ridhima: Bohot khush😳
Arman smiled, he knew what she was talking about ,but decited to tease her
Armaan: Acha?, who kion? aisa kia ho gaya hai?
Ridhima knew why he was doing this, so she decited to play around with him as well
Ridhima: Woh kia hai, ke aaj, mera rishta eik bohoy hi handsome, loving, Caring and smart ladke se tai ho gaya hai.
Armaan: o really? kia woh hum se bhi zyada handsome, loving, caring aur smart hai?
Ridhima: Woh toh sab se best hai😃, khair, tum ne mujhe itni raat ko phone kion kia?
Armaan: Woh bas neend nahi a rahi thi. Aur mujhe pata tha ke tum bhi abhi nahi soi ho gi.
Ridhima: Acha, to batao, kia kar rahi thi main?
Armaan: Woh jo tum ne meri picture apne side table par laga rakhi hain na? Oss ko apni dil par rakh kar mujhe yaad kar rahi thi, hain na?
Ridhima blushed, armaan said Oy Hoy.
Armaan:I really love you ridhima😳, Acha eik bar tum bhi bolo na.
Ridhima: Kia?
Armaan: Yehi, ke you love me.
Ridhima blushed: I.....love
Armaan: I love waht?(in a husky voice)
Ridhima: I lovee.....my teddybear, and disconected the phone quikly.
Armaan: Teddy bear?😕, aap se ko to mein subha dekh lon ga. Do be mrs Malik.
So this is for now. I hope you will like it, and please comment or hit the like button😊
Edited by medical - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I just came across your ff. It's really good. Please continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really really nice, continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jst saw ur ff.......i wantd 2 see these moments in dmg.......bt u fulfild my wish thnks a lot.........cont soon nd do add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey itz good....
bt i'll luv it eve more if old gang returns.....
n new interns are shocked to see how they r????......
n as i feel that sid was also a nice guy.......
uskke liye tammanna wapis le aao.....
n sid ko asli ridz se intro karwao..........

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