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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys. Firstly, thank u thanku to everyone who commented, and liked the part. Secondly, I am really sorry, for late uodate, but I am finally done with my exams, so now I can update. I hope still many will read the ff, even tough it has been a litle boring.

I have one question. I always post more than one picture, but only the first one is showen in the update, can someone help me/tell me whats wrong?
Part 7
recap: AR marriage date fixed, AR caught by Anjali in the room, and her teasing
A few days has passed, Armaan used to pick Ridhima in the morning to Sanjeevani.
Both were very happy and excited for the wedding. There friends used to tease them, and the wedding preparations were full in swing, as many rasams were set to be done. Eik bohot hi acha sa envorment create ho gaya tha. Har taraf hansi khushi thi. Sab bohot acha lag raha tha.
Arman and Ridhima felt something fishy were going on between the gang, but right now the hadent time for it.
One morning, they entered in Sanjeevani, but no one was there,
Ridhima: Arre, aj to koi chuti bhi nahi..., to phir sab? Armaan, te tumhara koi naya prank to nahi?
Armaan: Arre basket, mein pranks bhi stile mein khelta hon. Aur hone wali biwi ji.. , ab hum aapke hone wale pati hain, zara respect.
Ridhima just smiled, and they proseed to the lockerrom. When they entered, rose patels very throwen over them. And the gang was standin in front of them.
Armaan: arre, ye saab?, ye sab kia hai?
voice: Haan bhai, ab tum to hume batane se rahe, and Atul came from the dressing room
Armaan: Champ?, tu?
Atul: Kaisa ha mere bhai?, kahan chala gaya tha hume chor ke?
Both were having tears and hugged. Atul chorne ka nam hi nahi le raha tha. Usse yakeen nahi tah ke os ka bhai, uska sabse acha dost uss ke samne karha tha.
Armaan: Champ, janta hon teri aur anji ki gari age nahi bar rahi, par meri ki brak to na laga. Chal ab chor warna Ridhima shaadi ke liye mana kar de gi.

Voice: Akele hi milte raho ge yan humse bhi miloge?, and the whole old gang came out rom the dressing room.
Armaan and Ridhima were shocked and really excited. Rahul, Muskaan, Abhi, Nikki everyone was back.
The met everyone but when Armaan was going to meet Abhi, he was having tears in hi eye.
Abhi: Sorry Armaan, mere bhai ki wajah se tumhe aur Ridhima ko bohot taqleef hoi na?
Armaan: Arre yar, beeti baton ko bhul ja..., wiase tu bara tez nikla yaar. .., and indicated to Nikkis pregnant tummy.
Both got a little shy.
Rahul: Lekin yaar, tu tha kahan?, aur itni jaldi shaadi karne ka program? hume bataya bhi nahi?
Armaan: Abhe jaldi ho gi tere liye. Mere se poch, Teen sal ke bad hone ja rahi hai. Aur aap janab to jaise bata ke gaye the, kaise batata mein?
Muskaan: Arre hero tu naraz na ho. Iss kankhajore ke mun na lag tu, aur ye bata ke shaadi ki date kia hai?
Armaan: han, aj se teen hafte baad ki hai.
Ridhima: Lekin Nikki, tujhe to iss halat mein aram ki zarorat hai. Tu kahe to date age kar deten hain.
Nikita: Arre nahi Ridz, mein bilkul thik hon, aur abhi delivery mein waqat hai. Aur I am shure ke aap ke hone wale pati ye nahi chahein ge.
Arman took a sigh of relief.
Jg: Acha flower jis aur bahaya jis chalo chal ke sab coffe pite hain. Abhi duty mein waqat hai na?
Alle went to the cafeteria.
Ridhima stoped in the way, to talk to a nurse, so she came later. Atul was sitting beside Armaan.
Ridhima was going to sit beside Anji, when
Muskaan: Abhe Atul, tu wahan se oth na. Ridhima ko betne de. Waise bhi Armaan ka humari baton mein mann nahi lag raha tha Ridzi ke bagair, hai na?
Ridhima: Arre nahi atul. It's OK.
Armaan: Waise cham. Main dekh raha hon ke yaar tu ne bari body shody bana li hai. Kia baat hai? Anji ko impress karne ke chakar mein?(he whispered the last thing in his ear).
Atul: Arre, lekin ye Gupta behne itni jaldi kahan impress hoti hain. Especially bari wali.
Anjali: Excuse me, tum ne kuch kaha Atul?
Atul(a little sceard): Arre Anjali mein to ye keh raha tha ke tumhe aur coffe chaiye?
Anjali: Maine abhi pehli bhi nahi pi Atul. Please ab phire mat shuru ho jana. Khair ye sab choro. Guys shaadi teen hafte mein hai. Aur is se pehle hume aur bhi rasmein nibhani hai, like sangeet, mayo, haldi mehndi and all that. To Lekin parson humne ring ceremony ki rasam rakhi hai. Tum sab ko ana hai ok?
Everyone said yes and all of them chatted for a whie.
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Ok guys ab mein thak gai. I know Itna acha nahi hai, aur meine treat part ka socha tha lekin mein bohot thaki hoe hon iss waqat. So please bers with it, and hit the like button plaese. It really encourages me to write😊
Posted: 14 years ago
#32
I AM WAITING FOR YOUR UPDATE.PLEAS UPDATE SOON.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
NOTE
Ok guys, I know I have promised to update
often but right now I am busy with my
final exams. Kia karon, pehle moch exam,
phir final. Iss lye update ka time nahi milta.
1st JUNE ko mera last exam hai.
From then I promise to continue often😊
I want to know wether you want me to continue or not.
Mujhe itne bohot zyada comments nahi mile,
so I am asking. Agar zyada log interested nahi hain
to I dont think there is any need to continue this.
Please do tell if you want me to continue or not, and
if there is something you really want me to put in the ff, I will apriciate it too😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey sweety,
I hav bn a silent reada 4 a lng tym but dat duz nt
mean dat it givz u n indication of 2 stop writin!!!
Evn tho I'm busy I still try 2 mek out tym 2 read ur ff!!!!

Luv
Alisha
xx

P.S. But itz up 2 whetha u wanna carry on or nt!!!! :(
P.S.S. If u do carry on plz do cont sooon...
Edited by karankideewanix - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pls dont stop. We would love to read further!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Hey yaar awesum ff plz cont it n ad me 2 ur pms list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Pls dont stop. We would love to read further!
Abida_angel thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Ok guys. Thank u for the warm response. I really apriciate that you guys wanna read futher, and ofcourse, I will continue .please ye shaadi track bear kar lo, phir kahani mein twists layen ge oki. I know last post mein 3 din bad ring ceremoby thi, but we will go straight to the wedding days. I mean mehndi, haldi and all that. Please I dont have any indian background, toh agar koi rasam galat hoi tho,advanca pe sorry

Recap: The old gang is back. AR weddingpreps are on.

PART 8

Ok AR are not supposed to meet each other, you know dulha dulhan shaadi se pehle nahi milte.

Aj Armaan aur Ridhima ki haldi hai, apne apne ghar mein. Subhe mehndi aur phir finally shaadi.

First at Armaans house, sab larkia pehle wahan hain, phir Ridhima ke jana hai.

Armaan is sitting there in middle of many ladies with his singlet and rahui guys where also there.

Ananya began by applying haldi on his cheecks and arms.
Ananya: Mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai ke mera beta itna bara ho gaya, ke aj tumhari haldi ho rahi, aur bohot jald haadi.
Armaan: Mom vo sab to thik hai, lekin ye ab kartein kion hai?
Ananyan: Arre dujhe teri dulhan jesa sundar banane ke lye
Armaan: hehe, mom, phir iss ka koi fayda nahi.
Ananya: Kion?
Armaan: Mein jitni bhi haldi lagva lon, Ridhima se sundar to kabhi nahi ho paon ga na😉
Ananya: Badmash kahin ka
Nikki: Congrats Armaan, akhir ab tumhari tamanna puri ho rahi hai na.

Armaan: Thanx Nikki. Honestly tum sab ne iss mein bohot help ki hai.

Nikki just smiled.
Dhire dhire sab ne haldi ki rasam nibha di.
AT Ridhimas place:
Ridhima where sitting in the middle of everyone, whit white slivless choridar.
Everyone where applying haldi on her, and teasing her.
When they got finished, Ridhima was fully painted with haldi.
Ridhima: Maan, mein zara fresh ho kar ati hon, warna haldi nahi otre gi na
Padma: Haan beta, tum shower le lo, par jaldi neeche ana, phir sab kuch der bethte hain.
Ridhima: ji maan.
She went to her room and took a shower. After 15min, she came out weraing a light blue choridar, driyng her hair, when someone suddenly grbbed her from behing, (ofcource humara hero Armaan).
Ridhima: Armaan, tum, tum yahan kia kar rahe ho?
Armaan: Kion? are ab inho ne to itne din ki pabandi laga rakhi thi, mere so raha nahi gaya.
Ridhima: you know what, mujhe lagta hai tumhe na apna ye hot, good looking look bilkul nahi pyara.
Armaan: waise, to be wify thank you, lekin kion?
Ridhima: Kion ke agar neeche kissi ko bhi pata chal gaya na, to tumhara ki haal karein gi, ye tum shaid soch bhi nahi sakte?
Armaan: pffttt, basket Dr Armaan sab kam puri security se kartein hain. Onhe pata bhi nahi chale ga, au mein chala bhi jaon ga.
Ridhima: O really, lekin ye batao, ke tum ae kion?
Armaan: Woh...,thori si haldi lagane aya tha. Laga lon?
Ridhima just smiled and nodded. Armaan got happy and applied a litte on her cheecks, and she
aplied a little on him as well. Both looked at each other, Ridhima rested her head on his chest.
They remaind like that for a while, after thet Armaan kissed her forhead and leaved the place.
Next Day:
Many ladied where gathered at Gutas recisdence. Sab ek dusre ko mehndi laga rahein hain. Ridhima ko mehndi lagane ke lye mehndi wali designer bhulai hoe hai.
Designer: Apne fiance ke nam ka first letter btaye. Kahin chupa ke likh detein hain.
Ridhima told her the first letter.
After a while, a little kid came and whispered something in her ear.
Kid: Didi, Armaan bhahya aap ka room mein waite kar rahein hain. Aap ao gi na?
She nodded in a yes. '
Ridhima: Maan, mein bohot thak gai hon, thora aram kar lon, apne room mein?
Padma: Theek hai beta.
She went up.
Room mein uss ko Armaan nahi dikha. She got a little dissapointed, as well as worried, kaha gaya ho ga?
Suddenly he huged her from behind, resting his chin on her shoulder.
Armaan: Oye hoye basket, itni becaini?
Ridhima: Armaan, tum ne to mujhe dara hi dia tha. Acha ye batao ke yahan kion bulaya, tumhari wajah se mujhe phirse jooth bholna parha, jante ho?
Armaan: Well, miss basket, koi barha teer nahi mara aap ne. woh, mein na tumhari mehndi ka rang dekhne aya tha.
Ridhima: Oss ki kya zarorat hai, tum mujse itna pyar karte ho,rang to gehra hi hoga. Khair mein abhi dho kar ai.
Armaan: mein ...mein help karon..., please?
She just smiled. Both were standing very close while washing de mehndi.
Rang wakey mein bohot gehra tha.
Both had an eyelook when someone knocked at the door. Muskaan aur sab the.
Muskaan: Accha baki to baki, dulhe mian bhi yahin hai.
Anjali: Armaan tumhei to mein...
Ridhima interupted: Di please. jane do na. baki bhi to yahin hain. kion sab kuch der sath mein party kar lein?
The girls where thinking, after a while they agreed.
they went down.
Armaan: Abhe salo gadho, tum se aik kam bhi theek se nahi hota
tehy just looked down.
Rest of teh night they danced on many songs, they teased the wedding couple, and had very much fun.
Precap:
AR WEDDDIIING
Ok guys done for now. Hope you will like it. I will try to update soon. please comment and hit the like button😊
Edited by medical - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
nice update and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
loved the update ... awesum ... continue soon n thanx 4 d pm ...

ritika

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