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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#351

loved da endong

chris n anna...m really happy for dem...😊

n as for ali n saba...m actually quite alot happy for dem too...dis world ws not a place where dey wud hav lived n love each other...it seemed da whole world ws agnst dem n it ws da best part wen dey died together...souls entwined forever...now no one cud separate dem n yes dey did paas thru all da 7 seven stages of da love...n dey proved dat deir love ws pure n strong enough...dey cudnt lived together bt dey embraced death together...👏

i really wanna give u a standing ovation for dis brillaint story n also a jaduu ki jhappi...🤗

n well if u hav mentioned unaina as my name in ur thnku note...awww m glad abt it...n sweety its umaima...😆

tczzz

loads of love❤️

stay blessed👍🏼

cont more😊

u hav made evrybdy proud wid dis masterpiesce of urs...n i really feel proud to call u as my frnd...😃

Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#352

haa..

its hard to say sumthing whn words of writer make u spechless...

Jae once agin it was an eternal love story ...all four of them strt there new lifes together...where sab n ali more fortunate now as thy dont need to face any1..any world...thy r free to love for the sake of love...after such a tiring journey they reach there destination ...

wheras chris n anna...where lucky to have there loves also around them...to even cherish there togetherness here n hereafter...

the bst part was the Epilogue

this is the bestest i hav ever read...

May Allah bless u choto...n i hope to read from u more n more...the feelings u make us feel is huge thn wht we say abt ur writings ...

love

Fiza

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#353

Jaeee

I was so happy for Anna-Chris but after reading Ali-Saba's story all my happiness drowned

beautiful ending

Chris-Anna were lucky to be strong

but Ali-Saba were even more lucky as in heaven no one will separate them

each story had it's own beauty

do write more

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#354

Excellent part jaee...👏👏

Dnt know whether i should be happy or sad...The marriage ws blissful...Every word, every smiles just reached through my heart...And the vows...Cant praise enough as the words felt short...
But the death ws terrible...My hands wr trembling when they wr running to escape...They already suffered a lot...I never wanted this ending for them...Tears wr on the way in the ending part...U wrote sooo beautifully that i cudnt resist them to flow down...But as u said their love became eternal...
Even loved the 'colors of love'...Dnt know why but the Arabic thought touched me the most...Specially this two stages-ibadat and junoon...

Thnxx for this brilliant piece...Though i cudnt cmnt in every part but i've read all the parts and this ws really a wonderful journey...
God bless u dear...Write more...🤗

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#355

1 got love n their living happily

While other got love but got death also

Sumwhr happy for Anna n Chris n Sumwhr sad for Saba n Ali

Loved the way u showed the emotions n 2 stories at the same tym

On part happy n one sad

Hats off to u

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#356

Really that Was so Beautiful story a perfect ending

Thanks for pm

write more

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#357

These were such beautiful stories. Anna and Chris & Ali and Saba all had their shares of pain and separation, but in the end, their love triumphed and they became one, whether through marriage or through death. Their ultimate goals were to become one and that is what they achieved.

I absolutely LOVED these two stories ❤️ I really liked the stages of love you added at the end to describe the journey of each couple 😊You're an amazing writer and I hope you continue to write such profound stories!