new ff~U N ME TOGETHER..part 17..pg 35 - Page 20

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Nice updates yar please add me to ur pm list and continue i m waiting dear
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Part~17


the locked room brings back all her horrible memory of that night...



the night...she wanted her best to forget...even she was some extent sucessfull to in it...but...today...when she was in front of the room...the whole night come in front of her again...


'babaji...aap aisa kiyu kar rhe ho?jitna mein aapna past ko bhul ne ki kosish kar rhi hu...aap us pal ko bar bar mere samne kiyu la rhe ho?kiyu babaji...



par geet...aisa kab tak chalega...aapne past se tu bhag nahi sakti...jabki tujhe isi ghar me rehna ha...to tujhe us room ka bhi samne karna padega...geet...darke bhagne se kuch nahi hoga...samna kar aapne muskil ka...haan yehi sahi hai...



par kya maan...




haan haan...daadima ne to maan ko sab kuch bata hi dia hoga...to me unse is bare mekoi bat kru ye thik nahi hoga...pata nahi woh kaise react karenge...


waise bhi geet...unhone tuje tere past ke sath aapnaya hai...tere sath jo kuch bhi hua...uske bad tuje kon aapnata...par unhone aapnaya...




maan...aaj me aapse sache dil se wadah krti hu...ke me zindgi bhar aapko khus rakhungi...kabhi koi muskil koi bhi dukh nahi sehna padegi aapko meri wajah se...'



in the night...daadi comes to geet room...and she finds her lying on her stomach in the bed...



daadi-geet beta...kya bat hai aap is waqt aise so rahi hai?aapki tabiyat to thik hai na beta?




hearing daadima's voice geet gets up quickly and wipes her tears...




'nahi daadima...aisi koi baat nahi...mein thik hoon...aap kab ayi daadima?'




daadi-hum to bas kuch hi der pehle aye ha beta...par beta...aap ko dekh kar aisa kiyu lag rha ha k aap ro rahi thi?koi bat hai kya beta?maan ne kuch kaha aap se?




'nahi nahi daadi...maan ne to kuch bhi nahi kaha...wo muje ghar ki...mamma ki yaad aa rhi thi...isilie...'


'acha...ha beta aisa to hota ha...jab ladkia pehli pehli bar sasural ati hai...or aap to pag phere ke lie bhi nahi ja saki...'


'ha daadi...woh dadaji ko ek bohot zazuri kaam aa padi na...isilie sabki punjab jana pada...par koi bat nahi daadima...ab mein bilkul thik hu...'


'thik hai beta...waise ye maan kahan hai?dikhai nahi de rhe?...'


'daadi wo to office me hai...'


'kya?geet...aapne unhe shadi k pehle din hi office jane dia?...this is very bad...'


'rehne dijiye na daai...unhe kuch zazuri kaam tha...isilie...'


'hmmm...abhi se pati ki side li ja rahi ha haan?...'


'ohh daadi...aap bhi na...she was a bit embarassed...


'acha beta...hum aapne kamre me ja rahe ha...aapko kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho...to nakul ko bula lijiye ga...thik ha?...'


'jee dadima...bilkul...aap aaram kijiye...'


'dadime...ek bat puchni hhai aapse...'


daadi was going toward her room...but listening geet...she stops...




'je beta...kahiye...'


'daadi...aapne maan se jab mere or dev ki bat ki thi...to unka reaction kya tha?...'


daadi frozes listening her question...
(arre...hum itni badi bat bhul kaise gaye...hume to socha tha shadi hote hi hum maan bete ko sab kuch sach batan denge...par humne abhi tak use kuch nahi bataya...yeh to ek taraf se hum unke sath dhoka kar rhe ha...

jhut se koi rishta nahi tik sakta...hume jald se jald maan se bat karni chaiye...


par ab hum is masoom ko kya jawab de...isme hum jhoot bhi bole to kaise...?...)




'beta...woh,,,actully...'


at that miment nakul comes...


nakul-madam...maan saab aa gye...



daadi-beta...maan aa gye,...aap unke paas jaiye...hum apne kamre me ja rhe ha...


'thik h daadi...aap room me ja kr aaram kijiye...me khana lagwa ti hu...'




daadi-beta...humara dinr room me hi bhijwa dijiyega...hum boht thak gye ha...




'jee daadima...'


after daadima went to her room...geet goes downstair and found maan is sitting in the sofa...reading some files...


she goes to kichen and ordered nakul to send dadima's dinnerto her room...then she comes to maan...


'suniye...aap fresh ho gye ho to me nakul se keh kar aapka khana laga du..?...'


maan closes the file...and looks at her...whole day he was planning how to say sorry to her...a word that maan singh khurana never said to anyone...




'ha...dinr lgwa do...and listen...'


'jee...?..jee ap fikar mat kijiye...khana nakul ne hi bnaya hai...maine nahi...'she dipped her head down remembering the morning incident...


maan closes his eyes in frustration...(uff,,,,,,yeh ladki...me usse sorry bolna chahta hu or ye muje kuch bolne ka mauka hi nahi de rhi...)



'thik ha...'


at the dining table...nakul served them both...then he asked geet...



'madam...muje aaj ghar me kuch kaam hai...kya me aaj thodi jaldi...matlab agar aap or sahab kahen to...'


'its ok nakul...koi bat nahi...tum ghar ja sakte ho...me yahan sab samhal lungi...'




maan thinks...(achha...yeh sab samhal legi...yeh kam bigad ne k alawa...kuch karti to hai nahi...par acha hai...abhi akele me mein ise sory bhi keh dunga...good...)




after nakul leaves...


'maan...aapko or kuch chaiye?...aap to kuch kha hi nhi rhe...'




'no...its ok geet...thnx...'




'ur welcome...'




suddenly...the light are gone...everything went dark...black...




suddenly maan hears a shreak...


'aaahhh'


'arre...geet...geet what happende...why r u shouting??????kya hua?...'


'maan...plzz kuch kijiye na...muje andhere se bohot dar lagta hai...maan plzz...'




'geet...tum pehle chillana bandh karo...daadi so rahi hogi...wo jag jayeengi...me candle lata hu...'




'me bhi aapke sath chalungi...'




'chup...ekdam chup...chupchap yahan baithi raho...yaha khana chhod kar tum bilkul nahi uhtogi...me 2 min me ata hu...'saying this...he went to find a candle...


'huh...khadood kahika...keh kr gaya yahi chup chap baithi raho...kiyu rahun?...nahi rehna muje...samajte kya hai khudko...jo woh kahenge wohi hoga kya...dilli ka koi badsha hai kya woh...



babaji...ek to muje yaha andhere me itna dar lag raha hai..upar se wo muje yahan bitha ka pata nahi kahangaye...dusht...danav kahika...'


'geet...me yahi hoon...isi room me...or muje sab sunai de raha hai...'




'kya??????????????????????????(babaji...bachi ki jaan loge kya...muje kaise pata hoga...k woh yahan andhere me bhoot jaise candle dhoon rahe ha...uff...ajj to me gayi...)


jee...jee nahi...me aap ko kuch kahan keh rahi hu...me to dar bhaga ne ki mantra pad rhi hu...'




'(nautanki...yeh ladki bhi na...)thik ha...tum wohi raho...muje candle mil gaya hai...'


hi guys...😊


so here was part 17...


hope u will like it...



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love u all...


~~~soumi~~~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 17
nice part...
dadi hasnt told Maan anything...
oh ho if Maan comes to know from someone else tab to pata nahi kya hoga...
oh Maan heard Geet's ranting...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice atleast he got a glimpse of real Geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update
I wish Dadi tells Maan whole truth soon
Loved Geet's self talk or say nautanki according to Maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
the power off scene was nice...
and the way she was calling him names and him telling her that he can hear her...
cant wait for the next...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
love it
cont soon
ty 4 pm
xxx

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