new ff~U N ME TOGETHER..part 17..pg 35 - Page 18

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awesome updates
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wonderful part

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Part~16


after maan leaves...geet stood there for sometimes...thinking...

'me kuch acha karne gayi par yeh sab kya ho gya...muje to laga tha...aj is ghar me mera pehla din hai...me unke lie nashta bnaungi...or wo khush ho jayenge...par...

but wo itna naraz kiyu ho gye...kitne zor se dat diya muje...or nakul(servnt) bhaiya ko bhi mana krdia k me unke lie khana na bnau...wo...wo aise kiyu hai?...wo mujse kabhi ache se bat bhi to kr skte hai na...

unhe itna gussa ata hai bapre...!!

par geet...ye sahi nahi hai...tu tab se unpar dosh dal rhi hai...jabki asli galti toh teri hai...

tuje dhyan rakhna chaiye tha...k unhe kya psand hai or kya nahi...par tu...tune to bina kuch soche hi ye sab krdia...

magar wo muje thode ache se bhi to keh skte the na...itna rude...

chhodo...jo bhi ho...ab me koi galti nahi karungi...muje unke dil mein apne lie jgay bnani hi hai...jo bhi ho...wo mere pati ha...'


meanwhile...maan...on the way to his office...

'uff...subah subah us ladki k wjay se...kya naam hai uska...haan geet...uske wjay se meri puri morning khrab ho gyi...

is ladki mein akal naam ki koi chiz hai ya nahi...kuch bhi kehti hai...kuch bhi karti hai...

kam se kam mujse puch to sakti thi k mein kaisa khana pasand krta hu...

par mein bhi to use nahi btaya...

lekin muje to pata nahi tha na k wo breakfast bnayegi mere lie...

leave it...me kiyu ye sab soch raha hu...muje importatnt meeting hai aj...uski planning krta hu...

lekin...sayad me kuch zyada hi rude ho gaya tha us geet ke sath...
wo sayd effort dal rahi hai hamare rishte ko samhalne k lie...muje use yun datna nahi chaiye tha...


uff...ab is ladki k chakkar mein me pagal ho jaunga...

maan...aaj sam ko jab ghar jayega...to use sorry bol dena...k tu usse kuch zayda hi rude ho gaya tha...ha..yehi thik rahega...'


in khurana mansion...

geet was getting bored...daadi was still in her friends house...she called her for 2 times...enqired if she is comfortable or not...and geet assured her that she is perfectly ok...

though the morning incident was bothering her a bit...

she decided to have a full visit to khurana mansion...

she went through all the rooms...corners...then suddenly...

she comes in front of a locked room...and...

a chill shiver ran through her spine...

oh my god...this was the room...

this was the place where her soul...her pride...her honour lost...

how can she forget all this...

no...why?...why?...

she started to feel dizzy...

she ran to her room...and felt on the bed...and started to cry uncontrolingly...


precep~how about a candle light dinner?😉




guys...i know its a short one...😭

promise that i will give you a long update next time...😭😭

hope u will like this part...😊

please leave ur cments...

love u all...

~~soumi~~
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aray O soumi ... itnayyy din baad itnaaa chota update ...bohat na-insafi hai re

continue soon re 😆

love
Sana
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Originally posted by: sindu555

aray O soumi ... itnayyy din baad itnaaa chota update ...bohat na-insafi hai re


continue soon re 😆

love
Sana



arre yar...😭mere xmas abhi bhi khatam nahi hue...next week honge...and u knw mbbs ka pressure...uff...

but see maine fir bhi 2 new stories start krdie...😆mere himmat ki dat deni pdegi na...

jokes apart...after xam i promise to update regularly...😭
till then bear with it sweety...😭
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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that was short...but i am happy he is planning to apologize
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best of luck with ur exam
superb part
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nice one...
precap is intresting...😉😉😉😉
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Nice part
Chalo Maan ko ehsaas toh hua that he was hell rude
Lets c hw they make up

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