FF-5-REMORSES- THREAD 5 (part 54 page 140)

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: sindu555
nice update ... am loving the way shez melting and Maan's remorses ... but keya its high time to reveal their past secret .... u mentioned Geet's fear of MAan's finding out about some past secret .... plzz reveal that ....

continue soon

love
Sana

There are no serious past! I have Mentioned it before! Maan knows every fact! Everything about his childhood! That's why it's a big crime.
Yes. It's true we don't know that!
We will find that out with maans remosrse.
X
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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#592

enough of Maan getting tortured pls 😭 feel sorry for him

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286pearl

@286pearl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#593

nice part but somwher sad bhi.... geet is soo cold toward him....

last part main unki love making without protec ke hui thi..... i wish some good news... silly me... kya kya sochti hoon..... par kya karoon maneet ka dard nahi dekh sakti......

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: 286pearl
<font size="4">nice part but somwher sad bhi.... geet is soo cold toward him....</font>

<font size="4">last part main unki love making without protec ke hui thi..... i wish some good news... silly me... kya kya sochti hoon..... par kya karoon maneet ka dard nahi dekh sakti......</font>

Lol...
Haha... We all see maans but but what about our geet?

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miki

@ayu14

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Posted: 14 years ago

#595

Wow superb part in I love the way ur story flows i can almost visualise it maan not finding geet geet's confusion everything what I like most is maan's guilt his remorse he knows how wrong he has been he has stabbed her right into heart and left her lifeless but now he knows wat she means he loves her but now can't expect anything from her 😭 😭

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maaniqra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#596

awesome updateeeeeeeeeeeeee yaar ur ff is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Huner

@Be.edgy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#597

Superb update..
Pheww.. Glad Geet came back.. Maan is slowly realizing all the sins he's done and it's like a burden on his heart.. I think He should open up to Geet!! Maybe that'll help to ease his pain a lil bit..
But LOVE the ending..
Continue soon..

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Crystal Saya

@CrystalSaya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#598

i know maan has done so bad wid geet...............but still i feel bad for him.................i felt guilty.........but DIL KI HAAT MAZBOOR HYUN..................LOLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

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Dilsay

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Posted: 14 years ago

#599

Thanks for the lovely update Keya 👏 .

I like the way Maneet love is slowly moving.
Waiting for the time when Geet will give herself completely.😳

The precap looks interesting.

Are you sending her back to school for further studies❓

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#600

Superb update . I 'm really liking how you are slowly thawing Geet's cold demeanor . 👍🏼 Maan also on his part is struggling & fighting with inner conflicts & REMORSES of his past deeds .

Guess its a hard time for both ; but somewhere Geet is responding to Maan ' s efforts ; at least she is thinking about Maan's changed behavior . Hope time will soothe their pains away especially Geet's & she would be able to forgive Maan & let go of her past .

SUPERB update ... 👏 👏 👏