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Posted: 19 years ago
part 10

angad is out side while kripa is in her room

angad at the garden

angad thinking to himself

a-its weird how kripa got so worried when she saw my cut just like kripaUSA did on the computer....no kripaUSA and kripa cant be the same person kripaUSA is much nicer

angad then gose back to the house were he see kripa sit on the sofa with her lab top

angad think to him self

a-just great this stupid girl also came in the living room

as angad is about to leave kripa see angad and says

k-were are you going mister loser to scared to face me

a-(burning in anger)first of all iam not a loser and 2nd of all i am not scared to face you

k-realy is that so

a-I GOING TO KILL U

k-well u got to catch me first

a-gurrr

angad starts chaseing kripa around the sofa

a-just wait till i catch u...u..u little...little..aahhhhh

k-(very pissed at angad)catch my if you can loser

angad finilly caught kripa and both fell on the sofa kripa fell first and angad fell on top of her

k-get off of me u stuck up monkey

a-first u call me loser then monkey....this time iam realy going to kill u

k-aaahhhh GET OFF OF ME

a-make me

kripa trys to push angad off of her but cant becuause he is to big

k-how much do u weigh 200 pounds

a-no

right when angad says that the sharam and khanna family come back from the dinner party

p-so whats going on between both of

angad started turning red

a+k-nothing(both saying in a dry and angry tone)

al-ya right nothings going on...we all say angad on top of kripa

a-u never heard what i said did u

p+al-no

a-darn if u had at least u wouldnt say all this crap

p-ya ya what ever

d-angad learn to love

a-kripa learnd to stop hateing

k-hello u were the one that wouldnt let me go

a-la la la ne ne ne that all u can do

k-what a loser

a-what a loser...cant u think of anything but that one word

5 min later we see angad and kripa pulling each others hair and prithiv grabing angad by the waist and aliaya grabing kripa from the waist trying to stop the fight

we also see angad parents trying to calm angad down by words and kripas parents trying to calm kripa down by words

after about one hour of fighting angad and kripa both again when to there rooms in anger....except this time when angad and kripa went to there rooms they were bleeding because of all the fighting and punching and hair pulling and kicking and so on


hope u like this part
Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 too goood ruhee I will post the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

😆 too goood ruhee I will post the next part

that is great

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Posted: 19 years ago
where'd u come up with all this I absolutely loved it..though I'd say we skip them both bleeding part..it doesn't seem so realistic lol but the rest was dhamaakedar 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
bad news

every one i have bad news the thing is that my school is starting tommrow and so i wont be able to contiue that much because all my computer class ended in december so i will try to continue as much as i can when i get the time...the most i can do from when school starts is probly one part per day but on the weekend i will try to post a lot of parts 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: night girl

bad news

every one i have bad news the thing is that my school is starting tommrow and so i wont be able to contiue that much because all my computer class ended in december so i will try to continue as much as i can when i get the time...the most i can do from when school starts is probly one part per day but on the weekend i will try to post a lot of parts 😃

aww the good thing is that my skool doesn't start till next Monday😉 so I'll be able to continue... though we are going to have hard time letting u know when a part is posted😛 so keep on checking!

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

where'd u come up with all this I absolutely loved it..though I'd say we skip them both bleeding part..it doesn't seem so realistic lol but the rest was dhamaakedar 😉 😉

thanks for the great comment

i the reason i started this fan fic in the first place was because the same thing happend to me that happend to angad and kripa except in the end i ended up hateing the guy insead of likeing him (lol)

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

aww the good thing is that my skool doesn't start till next Monday😉 so I'll be able to continue... though we are going to have hard time letting u know when a part is posted😛 so keep on checking!

i will log on a lot to check on the fan fic

some time my teachers let me use my lab top in class for fun so i might get to continue more during class

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

Lol did I congratulate you both😆 I think I forgot😛 though I did notice that u guys became goldies last nite...but me didn't have time Forgive me! Well CONGRATS!!! NOW🤗Became a IF dazzler soon😉

Rav



thank you ma'am......and its ok...😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

Betaabi door ho gayii ya nahin😛


nahin!! ab mein aur betaab hoon!!😆😆😆

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