FF-Aankhon Mein Teri (Part1:Ch.1-15)

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puth

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

lovely update laxmi....
mehandi designs are awesome

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Kavita03

@Kavita03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

great start

waiting for more

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gangesegb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

👏👏👏wonderfullllllllllll................

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

quite dramatic.. loved it... eagerly awaiting the next chapter .😳

and yeh, so sorry you hadda see Dev-Geet wedding😆... even I have neva seen it.. well I neva had to😎... so cheers to your power of endurance.👍🏼

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AliceT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Great Story! Your style of writing is really fantastic. It's very soothing to read your FF's.
So here comes our hero to rescue his damsel-in-distress and save her family from getting a bad name. Little does he know that she's least interested in getting married and is happy with the fact that Dev broke off the marriage...lol.

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Antares

@Antares

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Great update! Felt bad for Geet.....but am glad that at least she would be able to achieve her and her father's dreams. Maan did not even look at her face.....well....can't really blame him here though he seems to be arrogant. Do continue soon.

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

I love the desi boli with wedesi boli...I like the story...😊

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Humera Anwar

@-Humera-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Loved the first part plz do pm wen u update... 😊

So Maaneet are married now 😃...

Can't wait to read on..

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

What a great update!! Kudos to you for watching Geet-Dev shaadi again 👏 ...but really, I think it was all an excuse to justify watching Maneet wedding the nth time 😉 not that we really need excuses for that 😆

I really liked your update but am now curious as to what plot ur gonna build around these 2 opposite poles....I have to say this simply 'cuz I've been at work the last couple of hours laughing remembering this dialogue "ek ghante mein kahein ge haan, aur ke ghante mein hmm..." 😆 yaar, humara maan sach mein bahout chup hai 😆😆

Do continue soon...