BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) - Page 76

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

I think she should Maan deserve a chance...... Atleast one chance..... But i m wondering wat he'll explain to her dadi abt aahana

I have not yet thought about it..but actually i don't think it matters to him now...for him...only Geet and Geet....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

@Part20....Glad Maan did not leave....I was somewhere sure he won't. I kept on thinking how you would make Geet see Maan's POV....and girl you did it so beautifully with the whole Ahaana getting hurt example!! 👏

Maan will never leave her.....you remember what he said in chapter 2...he will keep on persuing her..... ...so he is not going to give up....its now Geet's turn to start melting.....
Yes.....Aahana example came very naturally in the story....and geet can easily relate......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

yippe maan didnt live that good i knew if she pour out what was in her heart all the hate bitter she was holding i'll go way now its time to fresh relationship again good its progressing brilliant update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn thank yu so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thanks pm

Yes.....she has poured out all bitterness from her heart......which she will fill with Maan's love....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update..............

i am glad maan didnt leave her...........
still trying to make her realize her love for him and he was not happy either by putting her thro the hell
i am sure he will win her over with his love which he has to prove to her and to make sure she trusts him more than anything else...........
waiting for the next update..................

Yes...he made her realized his pain.....now next.... will be will she be able to put all her fears aside and trust him again ? ...trust in love again...?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drashsree100



LOVED it 👏 . I'm glad Maan did not leave coz he needs to make it up to Geet ; big time . His helping her in her studies was superb 👍🏼 ; parting with the responsibilities over Aahana was 👍🏼 .

The symbolism that you get more hurt when your loved ones are in pain was written beautifully 👏 👏 👏 . The last scene where Geet kissed him , yet again her heart taking over , was very emotional ⭐️.
Beautiful update ❤️ & thanks for the pm .....

Thanks....
Aahana example was good...when I was thinking of how to put his POV...and when this clicked..I was also amazed...it fitted very naturally in the story...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: butterfly.tanu

awesomee.............

loved it.................
geet kissed maan.............☺️
"Geet.....ek taraf tum mujhse nafrat karti hon......aur doosri taraf.......chupke chupke pyaar karti hon...."😆😆
loved that line............
plz update soon...........

Yes....very well noted......
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Posted: 14 years ago

loved every single word of this updae............. loved maan taking care of them with his heart............ he is a true lover.......................... hope next part will be full of ☺️

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

loved every single word of this updae............. loved maan taking care of them with his heart............ he is a true lover.......................... hope next part will be full of ☺️

Yes..Maan is ultimate lover.......that's why we all love him so much....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww so sweet poor Geet poor maan too

can't they patch up pls
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Posted: 14 years ago
I read all your updates in one go .
Awesome story.👏
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