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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 23 - I never stopped loving you....

Geet kept phone....So Maan has not reached home yet.......her fears started haunting her back....She started trembling with the thought of losing him......No...this time fate cannot be so cruel to her....she cannot again be standing at the same cross roads.....

"No this cannot happen to me again....I cannot let it happen.....No one can take away Maan from me......." she spoke to herself...

and then Rehan came....she took Aahana with her.....and they left for airport.....Her tears almost dried...she was calling again and again...Maan's cell........but it was not reachable......and she started praying......

"Babaji.......please don't do this to me again.....I will never talk to you if you did this with me........"

@airport

As they reached airport...there was huge crowd.....everyone wanted to know the latest.....they also joined them....but there was no update from the airlines....

Geet.....was seating.....waiting.....thinking...." why life is again playing games with her.....but this time....I will not let anyone snatch my happiness.......nothing can happen to him.......he has to come back for me......he promised me and Aahana....." and she looked at Aahana...who was sleeping....who didn't understand what was going on....she could only understand that...they are waiting for her Dad at airport......


Then Rehan came....and she broke from her thoughts....

"Geet...they have put up the passengers list.....there are no survivors....."

She panicked hearing it....but she then gathered all strength........

Geet went...with him...dreading to hear the bad news.....her legs not lifting....her eyes not wanting to look at the list...then she consoled herself......."Maan ko kuch nahin ho sakta........bharosa rakhon...."

and she looked at the list.....She frozed......she saw his name in the list......the status was marked as checked in

and then she almost collapsed .....going numb....and if it was not Rehan....she would have fallen on the ground...

"Geet...sambholon apne aap ko...Aahana...ko dekhon...she is crying......"

She looked at her....Aahana was crying....scared...seeing her mom like this.......and she knew...she cannot become weak now.....

"Rehan....let us go home....."


@home

On her way back....only one thought coming to her again and again......."I don't believe this......Maan ko kuch nahin ho sakta.....he has to come back for me...He cannot go again from my life......I have faith in Babaji......."

"Geet...do you want me to stay with you..." Rehan was concerned about her.....as he dropped her at the gate....

"Rehan.....I am fine......I will manage......." she didn't wanted to lose the strength....she didn't wanted to be weakened...nothing can break her...... .she has his love as her strength... ..

and slowly she came inside the gate...took out the keys to open the door.........and suddenly....

"Geet...where you were....I am waiting here at Gate....for both of you......so long....
"Maan......" she could n't believe......tears started rolling out ...her eyes started shinning....she started jumping with joy....

"Oh......Maan I love you so much...." she hugged him tightly....

He was surprised...by her sudden confession....still not able to believe what she said....

"Maan.....you don't know ......I had faith in Babaji...that this time...you cannot go away from me......" she looked at him with love....

"Geet...I was not going anywhere.....I will not leave you for a moment also....."

and then she just stopped him......by claiming his lips.....and he was totally confused...suddenly what has happened.........

"Geet...what happened...are you going to tell me anything....."

"Maan ....I want to marry you.....now......." she didn't released him....

"Geet....I am so happy......but could you tell me what has happened....." he was not able to believe her.....

"Not...now...." she again kissed him...as if trying to assure her....

"Hmm....OK...." and he gave in......they started kissing.......lost in each other.....

and then after some time.......they came inside....

"Maan...you know.....your flight crashed.......I am just coming from airport.......you didn't go..?"

Maan was shocked...after hearing it..... "Geet....Dadima was discharged.....when I came to know about it....I came out though i had checked in.....I cannot go leaving you here....."

Maan still trying to absorb the fact that the flight he was suppose to go...crashed.....

"......and what happened to your mobile...I was trying to reach you so badly...."

"Geet...I forgot mobile in car while going back....."

"Maan....I was so shattered......I was so scared.....Last night only I had decided to listen to my heart and marry you....and then today this.....I was so scared.......I couldnot believe my fears were coming true....but I had faith in Babaji.....I had believe in our love....I never lost hopes......"
She was so delighted...not able to express her happiness....

"Geet......darr kee vajah se hum jeena toh nahin chod sakte hain......." and he took her in his arms...kissing her thoroughly.......finally realizing what she must have felt and gone through......her happiness.....making sense to him.....

"Haan.....aur.....Maan...tumhain kuch ho jaata toh.....main.....sabse lad jaati.....Babaji se bhi......" she sharing her deepest feelings....

"Geet....ab tum hoshyiarpur wali lag rahin hon........" he teased her....wiping out her tears.....

"Hoshyiarpurwali......matlab....?" she gave him angry stare......

"Mera matlab ...woh Geet...who believed in dying in love....mere liye kuch bhi kar jaane wali..... meri diwaani .....I am so happy to see that love back in you....."

She looked straight in his eyes.....making her confession...."Maan....I never stopped loving you.....these five years.....not a single day went when I had not thought about you...gussee se pyaar se...har tarah se tumhain yaad karti thi....."

"Geet.....Hmmmm toh tum mujhse pyaar karti...hon....."...he then lifted her and took to the bed....giving her a intense kiss....and started removing her clothes.....her hands also went inside his shirt....

suddenly she remembered.....

"Maan...I think ....we should take Doctor's advise before doing this......"

"What do you mean....from where the Doctor came between us....."..he was confused.....

"Maan....." she didn't said anything......and just looked at him...pointing at her stomach....trying to make him understand.....but then realizing he is still confused......finally gave up....

"Maan...I think.....I am pregnant...."

"Oh God.......Geet ......what are you doing today........ek ke baad ek khushi......I can't take so much together.....mera kuch toh khayal kiya hota........" and he once again claimed her lips...and then suddenly he left her hurriedly......

"Maan....."

" Geet....ek minute...I will be back soon...." and he called Adi....

" Adi....I want one pandit now......"

"Sir...Itni raat main........."

"Addddi...and also......get all things needed for marriage....I and Geet are getting married now....."

"Yes Sir......." He didn't asked anything further.....

She heard what he said to Adi and came nearer to him...

"Maan.....Kal subah bhi hum shaddi kar sakte hain...."

"Geet......kahin tumne apna faisla badal diya toh.....main risk nahin le sakta......" he looked at her with shararat....

"Maan......." she was now angry.....

Maneet's Marriage

Soon the pandit came and Adi made all arangements....Maan called Rehan and Sanjida also......only 5 of them....Aahana was very excited......She seating in between them.....Geet chose a red saree and Maan wore a off-white kurta pyajama....and the marriage was over with pheras.......saat kasmain......agni...and wishes......

"Geet mam....that day only I knew this will happen, when Maan sir asked me to get your personal biodata......." Adi was all smiling and happy...

"My biodata....Maan...?" she looked at him questioningly......

"Geet...woh jaroori...tha.....jung main utarne se pehle....saamne walain ke barain main janna jaroori hota hain....." Maan didn't knew where to see.....

"Maan.....toh main tumhain jung dikhai deti hoon......"

"Geet....yeh jung se kam tha...tumhain phir se jeetna...." he picked her in his arms.....

She knew he is saying truth........and they kissed each other...taking kasam...in their hearts...to be with each other forever.......


Concluded.....
Thanks all of you for appreciating this FF and also, encouraging me throughout....for which I could take this to end.
Will be putting Epilogue..so wait for that.
Love
GB






Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Epilogue


After 10 Years

"Geet..are you ready...I have made your breakfast......your favourate pasta....." Maan was busy in kitchen....and Aahana was helping him.....

"Dad....every morning....why you make breakfast for mom.....?...I feel very jealous of her.....I hope I also get someone like you......."

Maan looked proudly at Aahana...now 15 years, young girl....having long hair like Geet....but deep eyes like Maan....looks more like him.....

"You will surely get someone......my love....but now studies......" he said..and hugged her.....

and then Geet came.....

"Maan....I cannot have breakfast now...I am getting late....You know today I have Trendz annual presentation for Board.....I will take something at office....and don't forget to drop Aahana and Rohan at school...."

and hurriedly she kissed him...took her laptop and her bag...

"Geet sunoh toh....." but she left....

At board meeting

All the members had come........Geet checked her presentation once again.........the numbers were looking good.........in Last 10 years.......since she had joined as the CEO of the company, it has made very good progress.......and she was feeling proud and confident.........she looked at Maan who was seating in the MD seat.....and he smiled at her....as if saying....I have full confidence in you....

"So Ms Geet Khurana...we can start........" he said..

Geet nodded and started her presentation....and then discussion started.....

After the meeting.....

"Geet....Congratulations.....Trendz is doing well..." Maan came nearer to her ...as everyone left.....

"Yes...I have learnt from you...." she smiled at him....

"Geet....vaise I have brought your breakfast packed....its on your table....You like Pasta"

"Maan..you never forget about it....."

"Geet...how can I......I can never forget anything about you......" and he came near to her...and bent to claim her lips....she pushed him back.....

"Maan...why you do this always...I have told you so many times.....this is office...."

"and Geet....I tell you always....this is my office....my biwi........so I will do what I want....." he closed the door...and started kissing her.....and she also knew...no use......she gave in......even after so many years of their marriage......their thirst for each other never seems to be filled......

and then .....

"Geet...I will be going to Delhi for some work......"

and he could see the fear in her eyes.......

"Geet...after so many years.....you still get scared....."

She decided to put a brave face......"No....not at all...."

"Geet, do you also want to come ? Dadi Ma....wants to see Aahana and Rohan......."

Geet looked at him...not sure....this is what she was not able to accept till now...going to Khurana Mansion.....Maan always asked her....as DadiMa wanted to meet her very much....Maan had told Dadima everything about them.....but she could not made up her mind to go.... but last year......she had gone....as Maan insisted too much.......Dadi ma was very lonely now........as Maan had shifted to Shimla....and Dev also had shifted to Canada after their divorce......
She remembered how much Dadima was happy to see them together......She felt bad thinking about DadiMa......and decided....

"Ok...I can go for few days......."

"Geet...if you want after that...you can go to HP also....."

"and You....?"

"I am so scared of your brother Brij.....he still doesn't like me....But I will go........"

"Maan...." she looked at him lovingly.....and then they were in each other arms......kissing.....slowly...and then it turned into intense.....short ....long....short...long.....kisses ....smooches....not able to get enough of each other.......trying to satisfy their ever thirsty souls....

"I never knew how to worship until I knew how to love."




Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


LOVED it 👏 . I'm glad Maan did not leave coz he needs to make it up to Geet ; big time . His helping her in her studies was superb 👍🏼 ; parting with the responsibilities over Aahana was 👍🏼 .

The symbolism that you get more hurt when your loved ones are in pain was written beautifully 👏 👏 👏 . The last scene where Geet kissed him , yet again her heart taking over , was very emotional ⭐️.
Beautiful update ❤️ & thanks for the pm .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomee.............
loved it.................
geet kissed maan.............☺️
"Geet.....ek taraf tum mujhse nafrat karti hon......aur doosri taraf.......chupke chupke pyaar karti hon...."😆😆
loved that line............
plz update soon...........

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwww loved it n finally geet got to know that even maan is suffering n i hope geet gives in
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Posted: 14 years ago
yippe maan didnt live that good i knew if she pour out what was in her heart all the hate bitter she was holding i'll go way now its time to fresh relationship again good its progressing brilliant update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn thank yu so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thanks pm
Edited by sharmake11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update..............
i am glad maan didnt leave her...........
still trying to make her realize her love for him and he was not happy either by putting her thro the hell
i am sure he will win her over with his love which he has to prove to her and to make sure she trusts him more than anything else...........
waiting for the next update..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Part20....Glad Maan did not leave....I was somewhere sure he won't. I kept on thinking how you would make Geet see Maan's POV....and girl you did it so beautifully with the whole Ahaana getting hurt example!! 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it........it was simply amazing........i just hope geet gives in n frgives maan ......continue soon ......
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Posted: 14 years ago
I think she should Maan deserve a chance...... Atleast one chance..... But i m wondering wat he'll explain to her dadi abt aahana

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