BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122)

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Debolina

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Posted: 14 years ago

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bt as ur plot is cncrnd...i dnt thnk GB,u r going 2 let geet knw dat dev is bro of maan...!!!!isnt it??:(
it'll b heartbreakening...bt,hum aapne heart ko samjha denge k dnt worry at d end GEET GONNA B ONLY MAAN'S.....!!!:)

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

like geet Straight forwardness.

lovely update.........loved it!!!

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

@Part 2...those lines by Maan...when he said that he is ready wait for the woman he loves all his life.......and even if she gets married, he will keep hoping to get united with her....these lines have set the stage for the future track and the theme of the story. Very well brought out.

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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

nice part.....omg.....maan will b fixing geet with dev himself......wat will happen now...????continue soon..........

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: zahra15
nice part.....omg.....maan will b fixing geet with dev himself......wat will happen now...????continue soon..........

yes.. they will get married with Maan's blessings....😆😆

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: debomaaneet
hi!!!!
i ws reading ur ff-BreakPoint..
it sounds so interestng...m loving it..:)
m sndng u buddy req...plzzz do accpt it..n it wd b grt pleasure 4 me,if u add me in ur pm list!!@_@

Thanks dear.. for loving it. I am not sure if you have read Sandstorm...do so if not yet....(i try to sell SandStorm to everyone...😆 )

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: debomaaneet
bt as ur plot is cncrnd...i dnt thnk GB,u r going 2 let geet knw dat dev is bro of maan...!!!!isnt it??:(
it'll b heartbreakening...bt,hum aapne heart ko samjha denge k dnt worry at d end GEET GONNA B ONLY MAAN'S.....!!!:)

Hold yourself...she will marry knowing everything about Maan.....and Dev

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: dia_ditz

like geet Straight forwardness.

lovely update.........loved it!!!

Yes ..she is young ...first time attracted to someone..so don't know how to handle it.

Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: jazzerette
@Part 2...those lines by Maan...when he said that he is ready wait for the woman he loves all his life.......and even if she gets married, he will keep hoping to get united with her....these lines have set the stage for the future track and the theme of the story. Very well brought out.

Jazz

Very correct...but how... that part is interesting.