Make me Yours Again..(KaSh os)-SCORES UPD-16TH MAR - Page 5

Okay everyone...i think giving a tough competiton to neha n gunji...wr have a clear winner...at least so far...its my darling JINIL....congo baby.....u rock...ii thnk ths was the best response i have recieved ever for my writing...but gunji...ur ones are equally memorable...and neha...well i dnt need to say nethng to her...she is a darling n she knows it...

HAI RAM!!! GHOR KALJUG!!

Ab toh kalyug bhi naahi raha, an toh Kaljug ho gaya. Aur WTP ( what the pug) I SWEAR I DIDNT EVEN READ ABOUT THE " Comment Contest"!!! By god I just LIKED it never really read it coz see immaa impatient. I read others comments n I was like what surprise, but THANK YOU!!! thnxx so much. Aapne hume aapke one shots ke liyak rakha. Lmaoo!! Now I really don't have a story line. I'll just like it to be like a nice FULL ON ROMANTIC chikdhood love types. Like when Armaan and Shilpa are 4 and love eachother. So badically just a bachpan ki love story showing like their love blossoming during all stages of their lives (toddlers, children, pre teens,teens, and uni students!!)

Please really would love to see how u'd interperate it.

N thnnxx once again Sab!! Imaa love you!!

Originally posted by: sacred shrine

hey i have absolutely no probs if u call me sab or sabi...

n yes this one i tgried to make lightherated cz the evrytym coming up W*H sth intense gets the stories being monotonous...

I kne shilpa is always mature but u knw during prgnancy u lose ur sanity...nd poor hubbies have to put thru the pains...

n yes..dialogues mein ne chura ye nahin hain..but seeeing ur great pieces....i wd very welll any day steal for them...keep watching🤣

I am so glad u loved it..two more coming up....stay tuned...

Heyyss Sab!!

What?? You TRIED to make this lighthearted? It was actually just thebright amount! May be more would've crushed the feel. Sorry i dont want to be mean or anything.

I noe mere bechaare pati dev!!

Yaar mere line churaayegi na toh maar padegi. Meri nahi!! Log kahen ge ye kaunse bacche ne line likhi hai??

Lol Am i really the youngest person you know?? Well then IMMAA SPECIALL!!

Really?? TWO?? Where do you get the time?? Padhai nahi karti kya?? Lol!!

Jinszzy!!

Ily!!

u know SABB...that u r just amazzzzzzzing....i dont know why u felt bored rereading itttt...and i bet u i can read it manier times.........superbbbbb workk girlllll.....keeep writing i m becoming ur fan...

Thank you for a wonderful surprise...