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nazsij

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

it was too good yaar.i realy enjoyed the south indian marriage.she sat his lap wow..

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JayaR

@JayaR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

mind blowing update Hasini.....

what a wonderful description......totally loved....

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

wonderful........................beautiful one!!!

love it totally...............especially the part wer maan played prank,

the dhoti part!!!!

amazing update!!!

the marriage rituals nd other things were portrayed beautifully!!!

waiting for rituals after marriage!!!!

con soon............

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-Deepzz-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Hasini....... I was reminded of all my marriage rituals....except my hubby said later I was a bit heavy for him.....and almost broke his thigh....Trust me I never let him forget that grave mistake he did......😈

Edited by kadydeep - 14 years ago

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Anemari

@Anemari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

amazingly written...splendid!!!!👏.m hooked to this ff now!!!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Frm part 4

all were fab

Loved how Maan's dad n Maan spoke abt it

Parents actully thnk worst wen it cums to their bachas

Maan n Gay hehehehehe

His dad was fab n he spiked him there also hahahahah

Adi scared the hell out of him

Loved how Maan helped her that tym also

He was in love wit her frm that tym for sure

Geet reason for puking was fab hahahahaha

Bechara Maan

I thought Geet will faint seeing Maan in his real avtar but she didnt

Infact she strted thnking abt his punishment

I really wanna c wat punishment she will give him

Loved their touches n blushes

Both are getting comfy wit each other

Dhoti part was also funny

Jeans under dhoti hehehehehehe

It reminded a part in Two states novel of Chetan Bhagat

Actually the marriage way is sumwat same lik it is in dat

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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Hasini.....am in love with your FF! It's just superb! It's so much fun.....lolz. Maan is such a tease.....and even Geet harboured some feelings for him.....unaware of his identity though. Their back story is amazing.....cute. At the end of the auto ride, Maan gave away that he used to help her with her studies. The way you pen it.....you make it all the more interesting! The auto driver must have had a great time.....lmao. Finally, Geet saw the real Maan.....lovely update that was! Can't wait for them to be alone.....do continue soon.

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Here I thought that just being married was enough .. you notched it up by inter-caste and that too arranged ' Aha!

I can imagine.. Geet's family doing Balle Balle at the reception ...and Maan eating Idly with Jelly'😆

Edited by -Aarya- - 13 years ago

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: 6thElement

I will be updating in another 20 mts...This is the last part of..."The importance of being earnest" Then as pixie said, the marriage starts.

I am so sorry I could not stay up anymore and I hit the bed. When I got back this morning I was so lucky to get three updates. Thank you soo much . You are such an angel and a sweetheart.

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Part 5
Geet's recollection of him and her puking was hilarious. She put Maan in a spot when she wanted to come wherever he is going.But our genius talked her into thinking again before making a decision and she was convinced. Wow all that was soo good. He gave a clue of his identity back. Nice part
part 6
Dhoti scene was so funny . None of the brainies could figure out how to put it on right. But the best part was jeans under and belt over it. Actually my brother used to do it .Not jeans under but always belt over the dhoti to save him from embarrassment. Cute part.
part 7
The marriage. You described the event so well. It was nostalgic. She must be really courageous to look at his face after all the events. She still chose to look and froze instead of screaming. That part was too good. And the way she decided to tease as a punishment was awesome.Their game of teasing and touching was really sweet.

Thank you for such wonderful updates.🤗

Edited by Ramhari - 14 years ago

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