CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: DILIBADAAT

I am dying to write another update guys....my palm is itching😍

should we start ..

coz v r itching no no dying ..no no...waiting to read another part...actually all three of them...😆

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ninavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

ummm different concept

looking frwd to it ......

cont soon ..

thnx for d PM 🤗

sonali

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

interesting concept

i love all 3 of your FF's

I'm a Canadian and am totally aware of all these social issues in India

Your an amazing writer for bringing awareness to these issues

good luck!

con't soon

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Esha

@esha143

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Sorry I thought I posted the comment for the first part....but didn't.....so Maan singh Khurana got his eyes on his prey already....oh how he cornered her in her own house...luchirousness is flowing from his each gaze and his each word .....and he's now even ready to marry her to possess her...great....

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RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

OMG ! OMG! OMG!

Another ff of yours 🥳 🥳 me in

celebration mood 🥳 🥳

Paulami : A biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig jhappi 🤗 🤗

👏 👏 WOW ! BRILLIANT & GRIPPING UPDATE 👏

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samaira jain

@samaira39

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

wow, a new FF and a totally new dimension.....well this is far more interesting to read........I LOVE UR THINKING!!! dealing with social problems thru a story is a wonderfu idea........GOOD LUCK dear and yeah i'm eagerly waiting for ur next update. i totally loved it!!!

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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

omg...this is so different and amazing......loved it to the core....poor geet.....she is being terrorised by maan.........continue soon........i really love all ur ffs.....they are all very nice and completely different,.........