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Jyo.

@Jyo.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#831

THIS - WAS - EPICLY - AWESOME! Awesome awesome awesome! Just completely loved this part! That was so cute!! Armaan's POV was just sooooo god damn good!

"Dimwitted as you are..." He started again and my jaw dropped yet again.
Haha... 😛 This was just... FUNNY! 😆😆

My heart yelled 'I knew it!' while my brain whispered, 'Shut up!'

This was just so adorable. Cuteness personified. 😳 😃

"You sang..." He tried his best to hide his grin, but he was failing. He cleared his throat and continued. "Your love is my drug...." He pursed his lips to prevent his laughter, while my eyes widened in shock.

I got up and began to pace around the room.

This part just cracked me up.. 😆 I could imagine Armaan trying not to laugh and Riddhima pacing around the room.

But now, it was my turn to play! I would surely not let Mr. Armaan Peanuts Mallik off the hook so easy! Oh no! He was gonna pay! Big time!

"Mr. Armaan Peanuts Mallik." This is cute as. I am waiting for the next part. Poor poor Armaan. Now he will have to manaofy his Riddhima 😛 Won't be an easy job.

Anyways, in short, this part was awesome! And and and.. it made me laugh, made me cry... sent me through all the emotions. 😊 Really looking forward to the next part.

Love

PS: Thanks for the comment on my OS. That was really nice of you. 😊 😊

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caprigurl

@caprigurl

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#832

* I am jumping up and down the bed too* * up* *Down*
Comments jaldi- i have to re-read this haaaaaaapppy part :D

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harshikarocks

@harshikarocks

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#833

wow....that was amazing............one of the best ff's.........................cont soon

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#834

aww pov finally here..

luvd it..

d way armaan explains..

i gues u missed d photography sessions.. i thnk during diwali.. n mayb d cupcakes.. then wen she had gne 2 d hostel armaan cooked up a story sayng his mom was worried wen in d actual place she wasn't there...

then cmng dwn 2 mumbai during the mumbai tour"the valentine gif which he bght 4 andrea.. it was actually 4 ridz...

luvd d pov.. cld jus imagine wt armaan had gne thru al these days...

dis is such a long comment na

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#835

Wow, that was super quick!!

Finally poor Armaan's 3 year wait is over! And I def think the scales are tilted in favour of Armaan. He's had to suffer for 3 years while a confused Ridhima continued to delude herself.. whereas she's just had to bear this for a month! The poor guy needs a break :-))

....and I so do understand his motivations for this pretend engagement - Ridhima needed a jolt to come to terms with her feelings! As for Armaan not standing up to Andrea on Ridhima's behalf , I think very often guys tend to back off and prefer not getting involved - its not neccesarily lack of commitment / loyalty but an unwillingness to get involved in a cat fight! And here, on top of that Armaan had to deal with his ambivalent feelings :-)

And I must say, nice of Andrea to play along though much of her behaviour was motivated by a desire to irritate Ridhima!

Very nicely written part, such a delight to read Armaan's POV.. now to see what Ridhima has in store for him.. actually not just him, but also all her friends and family who were his partners in crime!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 14 years ago

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DreamerReality

@DreamerReality

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#836

shruthikkaa.....

😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

i just cant get started on what i luv abt dis part
cz each line is so very special to me
if i hadx to pics my fave parts
then i swear the whole update
would hav to be quoted here......

but yet my comment will be incomplete if i dnt quote the below lines which made me feel sooo happy! finally!

. "Of course I love you, you idiot!" He grinned down at me. "I love you!" He said softly, wiping away my tears with his thumb.

and this other part was very well written
i just love the fact that they confessed

My tear-stained face now glowed. Smiling widely, I jumped on my bed and jumped up and down till my breathing stopped.

Bouncing on the bed and lying down, I shut my eyes, my smile not leaving my face.

"He loves me!" I whispered into the empty silence. "He loves me!" I felt a single tear slide down the corner of my eye and make it's way down my ear. "He loves me!" I whispered yet again, trying to register every word of his in my mind...

Sitting up, I looked at his picture which I had been hugging a while ago and crying to my heart's content. And now I couldn't stop smiling! Life surely played weird games on you!

well lyf did play weird games

but in the end it was that peanut and munchkin looovveee each other!!

i juz wanna say i have been commenting for quite sumtym now

and i hold this part and ridzi's confession very close to my heart

wen u write u made me smile, laugh at their jokes

and smile fondly at their friendship

but u also made me go to the verge of crying wen ridz was heartbroken

but today in this we actually realised how hard poor armaan had tried to get her

how things had got complicated

HATS off shuthiks, u are one helluva writer

and please do keep writing, cz its a joy to read writings such as yours

they make my DAY!!😃

I JUST wanna keep on writing but in the state of extreme happiness

dat i am in! i dont think i will be in anyway give justice to my comments

but den again i'm dancing in JOYYYY!!!😆

armaan'z POV rocked!! and again 1 question

is this the end of AWOTB?

cz i surely look forward to much much moree!!

and once again thnx shruthiks for giving us sucha great part!!

i'm still in a dazee abt it, n FYI already read it atleast 5-6 tymz😆😆

love

ur GREEDY reader

-KIN😃

😃

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#837

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

OMG U UPD8TD.....................

THIS HA STO B THE BEST SURPRISE I HAV EVER GOT..................

THIS PART WAS SO FREAKING AWESM................

I LOVED IT.........

N I HAV GT NO SYMPATHISES FOR AMMY..........IDIOT, GADHA, DAKKAN KAHIN KA...... I KNEW IT........ N I GUESS I HAV SAID IN MY OLD COMMENTS TOO...... THAT AMMY GETS TOTALLY HYPER SEEING HER WID SUM1 ELSE...... N DOES SUM STUPID THING....

HEY THIS UPD8 SHUD HAV BEEN SEALED WID A KISS FOR SURE......BT U DIDNT SHW IT...........:(

N DUSRA TELL ME ONE THING AMMY IS SUCH AN IDIOT...AGAR RIDZI AAJ BHI CONFESS NAHI KARTI TOH KYA WO ANDREA SE SACH MAI SHAADI KAR LETA ....DAKKAN KAHIN KA......

WILL RITE MORE AFTR I GT OVER MY XCITEMENT MODE

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: meow23
aww pov finally here..
luvd it..

d way armaan explains..

i gues u missed d photography sessions.. i thnk during diwali.. n mayb d cupcakes.. then wen she had gne 2 d hostel armaan cooked up a story sayng his mom was worried wen in d actual place she wasn't there...

then cmng dwn 2 mumbai during the mumbai tour"the valentine gif which he bght 4 andrea.. it was actually 4 ridz...

luvd d pov.. cld jus imagine wt armaan had gne thru al these days...

dis is such a long comment na

@BOLD I AGREE THOSE THINGS.......... n also where he had been all this time n y had he cum home so l8. wen he had left the party long time bak

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redprincess

@redprincess

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#839

AWESOME part!!!!!!!!! it was so oooooooooooo cute n funny just everything.....best confession n so real.........cant wait for next part.........ridzy punishing him ....their romance n all........waiting eagerly:):)::)