Sr Os-When A Heart Breaks(Part 4:Pg.12)

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sonia1000

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

It was nice PLZ make happy ending for SR PLZ PLZ PLZ. I really want them together

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noorya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

awesome Pragzz😛

it was soo sad and i love the dialogues

why Sid was trying to control his anger i wanted him to become Sexyface at Maya😡

"Will you call me"!!! is she serious😡😡😡😡

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr im starting to hate her again now😆😆😆

whatever the end will be im sure its gonna be wonderful as u are such a great writer😃

ooh and the quotes are just beautiful

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Neetu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

I couldn't agree more with all that everyone else has written..

This is such a fabulous piece of work dear... I'm moved to tears... Seriously.. All that pain, sorrow and angst in Sid... N you portray it so beautifully well..

I love the quotes that you use in between... They are just so apt to the situation..

I really don't have words dear.. This is such a heart touching, soul stirring piece of work...

Keep up the good work dear..

Love n hugs

Neet

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

OMG Pragzie. You broke my heart. 🥺 🥺 Those quotes. Sid's pain. So, so much of it. I was sobbing. Somebody needs to take his hurt away. And that woman. She wants to be friends ? After walking all over his heart ? After calling him a farz ? I don't think she can possibly hurt him more. The way you captured his pain, and her desperation, it was so raw, so beautiful. I'm so glad he's not letting her see him break down, she isn't worthy of it. Lovely, lovely update, you have to write more SOON.

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nyctophilia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Praggu i m speechless!!!

I seriously don't know wat and how to start with....I literally cried reading both the parts of ur OS 😭 🥺 😳 All i can say is Please Riddhima Please Atleast Spare Sid now....😳 U have destroyed and ruined an innocent person's life who only gave u hope smiles n happiness and in return u have given him only Miseries for Whole of his Life....😳 STOP IT and LEAVE HIM ALONE PLEASE I BEG OF U 😵 😔 JUST GO AWAY 😳 💔

Waiting for the next part cont soon......

Edited by kritishah3 - 14 years ago

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

OMG Pragzie, the end was just killing - I loved how he packed her red suitcase (had to bring it in? 😆)
The pictures, their room really well done!

But wow, I have to say I don't hate this Riddhima she tried, to stop Sid, Which is a big task in itself.

I can't wait to see what happens next - the middle of their story is still remaining.

Cont soon!

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Ovi_Tanni

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Hiii pragzie......
the way u describes sid's pain....m crying 4 him.......loved d dialougs u hav used.....ridhima really deserved it after wat she did with sid....now wat she wants frm sid does she has nt any shame....that farz is over thn y she came to sid......& the quteos r very beautiful.......

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JERAN_rocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Pragzie 🤗

WONDERFULL START!!👏👏👏👏👏

💔U made cry 😭😭😭😭 hate Ridz maiya

After whole fiasco for what she is at Penthouse?😕😕😕😕😡

Tumne mereko pyaar ka matlab sikhaya"

"Ab yeh rishta hi meri sacchai hai Tumhi mere sachchai ho,mujhe farak padta hai "

"Iss baar hum apni maarzi se shaadi kar rahein hai "

"Mein sirf tumhare saath rehna chahti hoon "

Sab jhooth.......😡farz😡liarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........hate her and his so called lover for what they did with SID😡😡😡😭😭😭Still want SR to be together😆😉

As much as i hate A----------------------R more than that i love Siddhima😳Hoping for SR reunioncoz u r not like talli cvs😡😆

anyways u wrote it wonderfully😳

Love quotes...😃

Update sooon....................😳

thanks for pm...;)

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