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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#701

Thanks for the update muskaan.

A Poem....I wrote..

YOU

I found you
And you came into my life
My life began with you
My hopes, my dreams and my wishes
They all existed for you.
My days started with you
And my nights ended with you
The sun was bright and cheerful because I saw your face
The night was calm and peaceful because I was content I had you
I was happy because my life was you.

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#702

nice update

cant wait to read more

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#703

rocking update,

supreb.

why was mk so tensed n left..

precap is awsome.

cant wait for the nxt update,

thx.

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#704

A poem written by me.....

I m writing it from Maan's point of view....

After seven years of pain

After seven years of loneliness

After seven years of unhappiness

Comes a day in my life...

Where I find you in front of me

You look the same, ever so same from outside

But it is your eyes that give you away

They are lifeless, listless and hollow

The pain in them speaks of volumes

The pain in them cannot match the pain and suffering I went through

Because I see that the pain you have is hundred folds more than mine

I wish I could do something, anything

To take that pain away

Yet, I cannot do so...since you are no longer mine

You are someone else's

The only hope of happiness I have is from the little angel who is yours

Who just lights up my heart everytime

I feel an instant connection with her

My heart beats when I am near her

My smile widens when she looks at me

I feel content when she holds my hand

I feel peaceful when she falls asleep

I want to make her happy

Give her everything she deserves

I want her to accept me

I want her to love me

Because I feel she is mine

Yet when she is upset I cannot handle it

I cannot take her rejection

And that is what I felt on my birthday

When she was not happy with me

I felt like I failed again, yet again

I do not know what to do

And so I did what I always do

I yelled, yelled at her

And she went away crying...away from me.

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#705

what a worderful starting of the day & it has to ruin it....🤢

dadi 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

what is maan's problems yar..y can't he just be patient with mk..what was the need for punching the

wall 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

geet should yell at maan...he is just too much making mistake one after another

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BluntlySpeaking

@BluntlySpeaking

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Posted: 14 years ago

#706

is it mks birthday party too?

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Tinu

@007jindal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#707

Aaw mk gussa frm maan. Its her bday too. Geet shouting at maan nice

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#708

i know i m greedy

but can we get another update like before...

plz muski

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#709

Originally posted by: Water.

A poem written by me.....

I m writing it from Maan's point of view....

Thanks Muski....for adding my poem to part 146, u r so sweet😳🤗

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kooliio

@kooliio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#710

Awesome update...!!!
Oh it was so perfect...!!
MaanEet together with mk..!!
Loved the gaming part...cute...!!!
The day was going on so beautifully...!!
But maan had to ruin it by shouting at mk...!!
Arrrggghhh what's wrong with dadi..leave him alone...!!!
Geet shouting at maan...well he surely deserves it after all the things...!!!
Can't wait for the next part...!!!
Please continue soon...!!!

p.s. Is it mk's birthday too??

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