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aashi

@aashizin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

wow radhi u come up with ur new SS 😃 hamm story and concept is very nice loved it now can't wait for next part to know story of angel and samrat with this concept i guess samrat is taking care of angel there must be something behind it and thanks for pm

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Shafaq

@Sanlicious

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

OMGGGGGGG Radhi
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee............Beautifullllllllllllllll..........Adorableeeeeeeeee
How are you so talented in writing these suspense stories???
One on another
Another suspense fulllllllllllllllllllll story

Yaar, why don't u understand??? I can't tolerate such suspense on my SaJan
Sammy has a daughter, Angel Shergill
That's Cute but is she SaNu's daughter???Nooooooooooooo Plzzzzz
What's Samrat's Manzil???

As Usual,,, MaJan are so cute
Mayank Sharma the protective Bro of His Jaan....Awwwww, So Cute
Gunjan Sharma.....Love her Character the most and Majan Bonding has always been my favourite
I always wanted Mayank to turn out to be Gunjan's Bro in any case in MJHT...Strange???

Gawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwdddddd Continue very very very soon so that every thing sorts out soon......

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

nice one dear

do continue soon

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

I think it is a very good and interesting Idea.. Continue and add me to the PM list! I guess, Angel is SaNu's daughter... And as Nupur died, Sam is taking care of her alone!!
And maybe after Nupur got pregnant Samrat left her and she commited sucide after her delivery and left the baby with Samrat!!

Anyways..

MaNjan bro-sis is lovely..

Mayank is so possesive about her..

Gunjan is the apple of his eye..

Continue Soon and Don't forget to PM!

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monaya_sajan

@monaya_sajan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

.Samrat have a baby..Angel.................did he hav *** wid nupur kya???????? btw if sam is still coll n at wat age d he havbaby..........but it will really b sweet 2 c gunjan n baby's bonding...........

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sreelu

@sreelu.januable

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

hi di.............😊

congrats for ur new ss...............👍🏼

the part was xcellent........................👏

nupur was no more...................😲

bt y did she commit suicide.................😭

samrat has a daughter,angel..............😛

plz do cont soon di....................😍

love u di❤️..............🤗

Edited by sreelu.januable - 14 years ago

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358674

@358674

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

wow

awesome concept

its really interesting

very nice

plz continue

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Hina

@samratrocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

wwooow diiii!

another grr88 conceptt..!

luved ittttt....amazing onneeeee

waah di.. ek ke baad ek dhamake......

dam excitedd..!

keep rockingg

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Sonia

@SwaNia_1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Hey Radhi dear ...CONGRATS ON UR NEW SS but plss plss dont forget the previous ones also 😆..ok now come to the point ...Iloved ur concept n its diff also ..i know sam in not angels father n he is only taking care of her n may b nupur is some related to him may b his sis or bhabhi obviously his manzil is gunjan😆.. n mayank is her bro so may b nupur bhi sam ki sis hi hosakty hai ...lets see mera guess kitna theek hai..........loved it ,,,plss plss plss cont soon n thnx for thnks for the PM......

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Babaji Ka Thullu

@BabajiKaThullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Hey frnds here is the nxt part... i knw u all r waiting
for this part ....hope u like it.....

PART 2

NXET DAY........
samrat wake up...n saw angle was playing beside himm...
samrat smiled seeing her....
S:haay mera baby itni jaldi uth gaya...
n took her in his hand..n kissed her on her cheek....
n angle smiled n kiss him on his cheek.....
S:gud morning jaan....chalo jalde se ready ho jate haii
aaj hume play school jaana haiii na...
A:haa papa.... m samrat's mom entered to his room.. n saw
them n smiled....
Sm:are samrat laao ise muje dedo mein ready kar deti hu
aur tum ready ho jaao aur ise mein ready kar deti hu..
S:thik haii mom....
n he went to washroom n sm make angle ready....
then samrat was also ready....he took angle frm his mom
n took her to the another room....
n opened the doorr...
we can see the room with so many pics of nupur....
n stood in front of a big pic of nupur.......

S:di...... dekho aaj humari angle school jane wali haii..
aur main apna last year complete karnele liye college..
plzz di aap apni angle ko bless karo... ki wo bilkul aap
ke jaisi bane sabko apna dost banane wali... haste
khelte jeene wali...aur muje bhi bless karo taki mein
aap ki angel ka khayal rakh saku... use apni beti ki
tarah rakh saku.. aur aap ke guneh gaar ko saza de saku.
use main apna badla jarur lunga... usne mujse meri dii
ko cheena haii main use wo har chij cheen lunga jo'use
khushi deti haii...jo usne tumhare sath kiya haii uski
wajase tum aur hum jis dard se gujre haii use bhi
gujar na hoga... use bhi wo dard sehna hoga jo maine
aap ko kho kar saha haiii......aur ab tak seh raha hu..
n tears started to fell frm his eys...bas ek baar muje
pata chal jaaye wo kaha haii fir wo mujse bach nahi
paayega.. use us dard de kar mein tadpaunga... ye
samrat shergill ka uski di nupur shergill se wada haiii..
jiski wajase aap suiside karne par majbur ho gayi use
me har roj ek nayi mout marunga.....
n carresed her pic... angel wiped his ters..
n samrat smiled..
S:dekha diii ye bhi aap ki tarah muje bahut chahti haii..
hum dono ka rishta waisa hi haii jaisa mera or aap ka
THA.... nahi Tha nahi aaj bhi haii...kyu sab haiii se
tha ban gaya dii kyu .?? kyu aap se aisa kiya?? mein
to aap ka baby tha na?? fir kyu aap mujhe chhodke chali
gayi?? apne sam ko aise chhod diya???aur keh diya ki
meri beti ko hamesha maa or baap dono ka pyar dena...
par dii maa ka pyar sirf aap hi se sakti thi... main
nahi se sakta use ye pyar kya karu diii aap hi batao...
kaise du humari angel ko maa ka pyar...........???

On other side
gunjan was being ready in front of mirror....
G:main janti hu wo kaisa hoga... chocolaty eyes hogi..
smile jiske face par hogi,,, jise dekh ke hi dil bolega
he is my...... oh god gunjan jaldi chal....
just then her cell rang.........
she picked up her cell..
G:haa bhai me ready hu apna khayal rakhungi...
driver muje chhodne aa raha haiii.. uske sath hi
wapas aaungii break me aap ko call karungi...
aur jis college me muje jaana haiii us college ka
address muje mil chuka haii.. bahar ka khana bilkul bhi
nahi meri favourite paani puri bhi nahi.... aur apna
purs khayal rakhungi...........
M:gunjannnnnn mere bolne se pehle hu tu shuru ho gayi,,,
G:bhaii ye sab ab muje yaad ho gaya haiii kyunki jab se
india pohchi hu aap ne muje call karke 25th nahi ab 26th
time hua .....
M:ok m sry par pahochte hi muje call kar dena..
G:ok bhai bbyeee.....

As she came to hall....
driver was waiting for her...
D:madam wo sir ne bola tha aap ko aap ki collage chhod aau.
G:ye bhai bhi na...... n said to driver...
tum car nikalo main aati hu....
n driver left....

At shergill's

samrat came out of nupur's room having angel in his hand.
n saw his mom was waiting for them having curd in her
hand... samrat smiled sseeing his mom....
S:dekha angel aap ki daadi aap ke liye dahi laayi haii..
angel smiled...
A:thnk u dadi.... n opened her mouth... n samrat smiled
seeing her open mouth.. sm made her eat curd...
A:daadi aur khana haiii.....
Sm:haay mera baccha le.. n again made her eat..
n samrat smiled seeing her happy....
A:daadi papa ko...... in babish voice....
n samrat was smiling widely.....
Sm:are baap re mein angel ke papa ko kaise bhul gayi...
sry beta aap ke papa ko bhul gayi..
n made samrat eat curd.... then samrat's mom kissed
on angel's cheek.. angel smiled.. n kiss her dadi...
S:mom bbye....
Sm:bbye.. beta.. bye angel....dadi will miss u....
n angel smiled...
he came out n sat in car n made angel sit beside him..
S:angel bilkul bhi masti nahi karna... papa drive kar
rahe haii.....
A:thik haii papa..
angel was nt doing masti as samrat told him nt to do...
they reached to angel's play school....
samrat came out of car... n took angel in his hand...
n reached to her school.....two teachers came to him...
n smiled seeing him....
T1:are mr.shergill aa gaye aap...aur ye haii aap ki
angel...
S:haa ye mari angel haii.....
T1:laayiye hume de dijiye....
teacher was abt to touch her.. angel clutched his shirt..
n put her arm around his neck.....
A:nahi muje papa ke paas rehna haiii.....
T1:are beta papa aapko lene aayenge na... aur dekho
yaha kitne saare toys haii... hum sabke sath milke
khelenge........ n again abt to take her...
A:nahi muje papa ke sath khelna haii... in babish voice.
S:angel... dekho yaha kitne saare toys haiii dekho...
aap sabke sath khel na thik haii.. fir baad me papa
aap ko lene aayenge....
A:nahi muje nahi khelna muje papa ke sath rehna haii...
n started to cry.....
S:are angel nahi mera baby aise rote nahi... accha chalo
hum dono hi idhar khelte haiii.... n wiped her tears..
T2:laiye main le leti hu ise....
S:aap rehne dijiye ye aap ke paas nahi aayegi...
he went to angel's class. n saw so many children of
her age were playing with toys....
S:yeh dekho angel aap ke kitne saare frnds haiii...
dekho... sab kaise khel rahe haii.... aap bhi khelna
thik haii... jaao apne frnds ke sath...
samrat made her stand on her feet... n saw every1 n again
saw samrat... samrat sumtimes played with her.. then
saw her busy in playing with other's....samrat slowly
come out of class.... n went to teacher...
S:angel abhi khel rahi haii.. use kisi bhi tarah ki
problem nahi hone chahiye agar aur toys chahiye to mein
aap ko dunga par wo ro ni nahi chahiye.... aur haa
uske paas koi bhi stranger nahi aana chahiye.....
pura pura khayal rakhna iska... warna aap nahi jante
main meri beti se kitna pyar karta hu...aur uske ek aasoo
rokne ke liye kya kar sakta hu...
T:ji mr.shergill hum angel ka pura pura khayal rakhenge..
S:thik hai. aur agar angel kko koi bhi problem hui to
call me...
T:ji....
n again samrat saw angel.. n a tear droped frm his eyes
n samrat left for colege............

(well for this idea i thnk ful to anjali dii
coz of her this idea come to my mind... n also thnk ful
to my baby)

on other side gunjanwas in her car... n seeing the
outside view..... n saw a bunglow...
G:wow itna accha bunglow......
D:shergill's ka bunglow haiii madam accha to hoga hi..
aur ye mumbaii ka best bunglow haiii.... jitna accha
ye bahar se dikh raha haii use accha to andar haii...
G:kya sach mein itna accha haii??
D"ha madam mera bhai waha kaam karta haii wo bhi drivar
haii is liye pata hai.....
G(in mind):ek baar to is bunglow ko dekhna hi padega..
par abhi to sirf muje mere prince ka intzar haii pata
nahi wo kab aayega.......
D:aa gaya...
G:kaha???
D:wo raha aapka colege....
G:oh college aa gaya....
she came out of car.......
n read the board...
G:EXCEL COLLEGE..... ye to bhai ka college haii.....
bhai isi college main padhte the....she entered in college...
n saw our Excel College.....
G:wow kitna accha college haiii.....
she was walking having books n papers in her hand...
n looking here n there.. n her gaze fell on a boy...
who was playing basket ball in basketball court....
n he jumped n did the basket...........
S: i won..........n turned.... n killer smile was
playin on his lips....n gunjan was totally fida on his
smile... then she saw his face... he drank water...
Omg he is looking so hot .. water was falling on her
throt...he was sweating due to game bt though he was
looking so januable.....gujan was continuesly smiling
on seeing him......samrat took the ball....
n throw it....
S:benji ball ko le jana... n turned... n as heard voice..
he saw a girl having spects... wearing salwar kameez..
she was carresing her hand.. yes our gunjan... ball hit
her.. n her books fell down.....she didnt knw when ball
come to her... as she was lost in samrat.....
samrat came to her.. n bent to pick her books.....
n gunjan saw him... n samrat saw her too.. gunjan was
again lost in his chocolaty eyes.......
S:m sry......
gunjan came to sense...
G:its ok....
Samrat picked up all books n gv to her...
G:thnks....
S:no need to thnk me .. meri wajase aap ko chot pohchi
or aap ki books gir gayi so sry....
G: no need to sry... aap ne meri books utha li haii...
n smiled... n samrat too smiled...
S:bbye...
n left gunjan again lost in her thoughts.....
n just heard bell ringing,......

precap:guess karo...

Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting 4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...

Love😉
Radhi...(Radhu)

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago

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