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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
tht was soooooooo awesomeeeeeeeeeeee love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

reat start...

congo.. for the new ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Mulan
wow another ff
congrats dear
haye what a start -it was an awesome update
too good
loved it to the core
keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Superb start...
really Nice ff
thnx alot for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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21 and 32? mayanks right. thats too young for him. theres two generations gap!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome!! Continue soon and add me to the PM list..
The concept is FANTABULOUS...
But Mayank 32?? He is so old.. I mean not that much but still...
Please update soon I am already eagerly waiting to read the next part!
Aw.. Gunjan is pregnant!!
Thanks for the Pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
interesting concept Mehak!
but mayank 32.......Nupz is too young 😔
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
😆 😆 oh god! nupur ka torture...mayank toh gaya....bechara...😆 😆
he have to fall for her!😍
such a fresh concept...👏 ⭐️
continue soon....
n thnxx alot for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start ! update soon!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HELLOOOO FRNDS!!!!!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗

THANKU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR ALL THE SUPPORT!!! IT HELPS ME WRITE ON!! 😳 I HOPE U LIKE THIS PART TO!!!!!! DO COMENT PLZ TO LET ME KNOW UR VIEWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳

AFSHA@ YAR MAYANK AND MR BUSHAN WERE BUISNESS PARTNERS AND SO WERE FRIENDS BUT THEY HAD AGE DIFFERENCE. MAYANK WAS JUST 32 WHILE MR BUSHAN CAN BE IN HIS FIFTIES!! 😳


PART 2

Half an hour later Mayank was on his way back to home with Nupur sitting beside him. Nupur's frequent glances were irritating him. It was not that he didn't like her. She was beautiful and he had enjoyed the way she looked up at him but he disliked this sudden change, which made him the subject of her crush.

Nupur: "beautiful song na?"

Mayank was brought out of his thoughts, " ermmm.. hmmm…"

The song, which was playing, was "you belong with me" by taylor swift.

Nupur: " I love the part , "Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find,
That what you're looking for has been here the whole time,
If you could see that I'm the one who understands you
Been here all along, so why can't you see?
You, you belong with me…" Nupur looked him in the eyes, " amazing na?"

Mayank looked at her face. she looked so cute and innocent. He hated to hurt her but encouraging her was out of question. He wasn't a marrying man. he pulled himself together before his heart melted by her look and he replied , " I don't like such songs . they make no sense to me."

He redirected his attention to driving . however he had seen the hurt look in her eyes and he hated Taylor Swift for ever making the song.

She kept her head lowered throughout the way and her face conveyed her feelings to her best friend as soon as she entered the house which earned Mayank a glare from Gunjan.

He shrugged and left for his room , promising he will never – ever, let a Taylor Swift song be played near him.

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Gunjan: " mere to samajh se bahar hai Maaynk bhai ke problem.

Nupur and Gunjan were sitting in bedroom and Nupur has just finished talking her about the supposed to be romantic drive.

Nupur: " the problem is that he don't love me… love choro I think he don't even like me."

Nupur had tears brimming in her eyes . Gunjan knew how much Nupur loved Mayank and how much it hurt her to be treated like this by him.

Gunjan( hugging Nupur) : " don't think like that Nupur. your love will change him. You just wait."

Nupur: " how much longer will I have to wait to be loved?"

Samrat entered at that moment. He was sent by Mayank who was afraid Gunjan will emotionally exhaust herself all because of a single Taylor Swift song. Samrat have looked at his brother as if he was crazy until Mayank narrated the whole story to him.

Since the start Samrat had decided to stay neutral. He understood Mayank's feeling and likewise he never thought it right to interfere Gunjan helping her friend.

Samrat: " I brought you both fresh juices. " he handed them their glasses, " by the way Mayank was asking if you people need something else?"

Gunjan: " yes! I need someone who can knock sense into Mayank bhai.

Samrat: : ( sighs) " you see I guess that's impossible."

He winked at Nupur and she smiled inspite of herself. she loved Samrat and Gunjan. They both were the most amazing friends in the whole world.

Soon Gunjan was over her bad mood and palnning new ways to bring Mayanka dn Nupur together. At this point Samrat left the room , sympathizing with his brother.

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In the evening Mr. Bushan came to pick her up. On the way Nupur's eyes were filled with new ideas when suddenly Mr. Bushan asked: " I am selling my business."

The words combined with the sadness in his voice jerked Nupur out of her fantasy world.

Nupur: " kya? Lekin kyun baba?"

Mr Bushan: sighed: " the business is going in loss and I don't think I have the strength left to push it back out of the quagmire. Beta mein ab burha ho gaya hoon. Ye business mere bus ke baat nahe rahe . hum gaon wapis chale jaen gay."

Mr. Bushan tried to be cheerful but Nupur knew he was far from happy. This business was shi dream and today he was ready to sell that dream because he had no choice. Her heart sank as she realized ,if she was a son, her father could leave his responsibilities on her shoulder and rest… but she was a daughter.

They entered the house and Nupur said: " goodnite baba!" and left for her room. However when she hugged her father it was rather unusual . her father hugged her back . they knew how the other was feeling at that moment and this was their way to console each other and tell them that they were always their for each other.

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Nupur spent a sleepless night tossing and twirling on the bed. Yet she was fresh in the morning as she had decided what she had to do now. She quickly got ready and went downstairs . her father was having breakfast when she announced, " baba ! I want to help you run the business."

Mr Bushan's was about to take a bite of the sandwich but his hand stopped midway.

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