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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DrashtiDhamiNo1

first of all my like thingy button isnt working so just

to let you know i liked it 😃
anyways that was a great update
geets gestures were sooo cute
yaaay maan is starting to feel something for geet
he's already affected by her closeness
rahul running back and forth to loo was funny
cant wait till the next part
hoping for some close maaneet action
cont soon please
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

love it love it

rahul deserve it
maaneet scene so
hilarious i'm sure
maan feeling something
for geet i hope he realize
soon
lovely update pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 5
awesome...
for sure Geet irritated Maan to the end but Maan is somewhat getting affected by her innocence and presence...
loved it very much...
cont soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anemari

just read all patrts in one go...pls add me to ur pm list

u read all parts in one go😲...thanks for liking it😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

Actually I want to feel your back bone...how you danced like a rubber when you are so akroo...I always thought you had a frozen spine...!!
just a perfect line for a akroo like Maan...loved it

hahaha...!!...U got that line😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PerfectYaRav

Anupam 🤗...thank u for the lovely update and PM...really appreciate your effort in giving us regular updates...loved the Maaneet scenes in this update...they were all awwwesome 😍...Maan was so caring and protective...Geet was as usual sweet and cute...so glad that idiot Rahul is suffering 😡 😆...waiting to see how Geet will react once she wakes up...plz continue...love u...TC 😊




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Posted: 14 years ago

chapter-6

Morning arrived and sun rays tore apart the darkness persistant everywhere...the beautiful morning rays enlighten the big beautiful room of a lovely angel who was sleeping peacefully smiling in her dream oblivious of the world around her oblivious to the fact that she was oversleeping and was getting late for her school...!!

The princess slowly came out of her dreamland opening her big brown eyes adjusting it to the brightness in her room...!!

She stretched her hands yawning like a cute baby...
Good morning babaji...she said looking upwards greeting her favourite babaji first...!!
She suddenly clutched her head which was paining like hell...
hey babaji...why is my head paining so much...?...Ahh...what the hell...!!...after the pain diminished a bit her mind drifted to the lovely dream she had...
Haii...what a dream it was...?...geet I knew you can dance well but that was awesome...!!...she praised her own self on dancing fabulously in her dream...and then added with amazement...vaise I didn't knew that monkey can dance also and that too so well...!!
She smiled thinking about how they danced like a couple totally lost in each other...their sizzling chemistry...the beautiful atmosphere...how romantic...she uttered spontaneously...!!
ROMANTIC...!!...and that devil khurana...huh...!!...geet how could you even dream about dancing with that khurana...she chided herself...!!
But why on earth was I dreaming about him and such a weird dream...gosh...!!...I think I have started thinking a bit too much about that monkey...!!...she concluded...and then suddenly a thought struck her mind...How did I came here...?...I was at the V-day party and then after that...ahh...what happened...?...I don't remember anything...did her plan to make maan suffer worked or not...why can't she recall anything...whats goin on...??...she was trying hard to remember everything but nothing came to her mind...getting frustrated she shrugged off...
Chal geet get ready for school...don't waste your precious time on that jerk...aur vaise time kafiii...
Aaahhh...she screamed looking at the clock which was showing 7.35 when she was supposed to get up 6...!!
Damn...I am late...!!...gadhi...ullu di pathi...who told you to dream about that monkey...dekha now you are late...!!...she hurriedly climed down her bed but her head suddenly started spinning again and she held the bed post for support...
Oh god...!!...whats happening...?
Geet this is called hangover...!!
Geet looked towards the source of the familiar sound and found sam standing there with a glass...!!
Sam di what are doing here...?...and what is it in your hand...??...she said and sam understood she didn't listened to her sentence properly...!!
Geet relax...and have this...sam handed over the glass to geet...it will reduce your headache...you'll feel better...!!
But what is it and how do you know I have a headache...?
Oh ho baby...first finish this lemon water and get ready for school...we'll be leaving together so make it fast...I'll explain you everything in the car...sam said in one breath...!!
Geet gulped down the drink and ran to the wash room...later both of them made their way downstairs almost running...
Girls...have your breakfast first...rano said seeing the two making their way out
Mama please we are already late...and I am not feeling hungary at all...geet said catching her breath...!!
Geet stop your excuses...sam told me you were not well last night...you should have called me then only but anyways now just finish your your breakfast or you will fell sick again...rano said with a strict yet concerned tone...!!
Geet made a confused baby face and looked at rano and then at sam...firstly she was getting late then her headache and now her mom...she was not getting a thing rano was saying...how could she have called her when she herself don't remember when she returned last night...hey babaji...please help...!!
Sam interrupted rano ...
Masi we are really getting late...pack the breakfast and give it to us we will eat it in the car itself...!!
Rano thought for a second and then convinced at sam's request packed the breakfat in another tiffen box...!!
Sam and geet instantly left for school in sam's car where sam explained her everything about the party...how when she was drunk maan helped her and brought her home...geet was shocked at the relevation that what she thought was a dream actually happened in reality...she can't believe she actually danced with her sworn enemy on a damn romantic number...!!
Soon they reached school and ran to their respective classes as they were just on time for the assembly...!!
Throughout the assembly geet kept staring at maan trying to remember the previous night party but it was all blank...everyone was sneaking glances at geet and maan trying to figure out if they changed their attitude towards each other after last night dance which dazzled the whole crowd...but they hardly noticed any change...maan was as usual standing their with a strict straight face devoid of any expression while geet was feeling conscious with others ogling at her in the weird way...she knew it was something related to the last night dance after all geet and dancing together on a romantic number was the most unusal thing to happen which she herself was not able to digest...it must have been a shocker to all...!!
After the assembly the students get back to their respective classes...!!
9th B-

Hey geet how are you feeling now...?

Pari asked with a concerned voice while her other friends stood around her waiting for her reply
Ah...I am fine pari...she replied hesitatingly
Geet how did you got drunk...I mean did someone mixed something in your drink...just tell me the name and I'll rip off the head of that bas***d...vicky hissed in a low voice not wanting to let any information to pass to the other students in the class...!!
Yes geet just blurt out the name and he'll be dead meat...yash spat equally enraged on the thought of someone hurting their dearest friend
Guys I really don't remember anything...its all blank...geet said with a helpless look on her face...!!
Don't stress yourself geet...just relax ok...nt said seeing geet getting tensed with their constant interogation
They went back to their respective seats as their teacher enter the class...!!

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11th A-
Sam did you gave her the lemon water...maan asked sam as soon as she entered the class
Hey relax...dude...!!...geet ki itni chinta...she teased him
Shut up sam...I am just asking like that...maan said pissed off from her teasing
Yeah right...!!...you are asking like that only...thats why you called me early morning reminding to give geet nimbu pani to help her out of her hangover...sam said in a sarcastic tone...!!
Maan was searching for a good reply when he was saved by adi's sudden interruption...
Hey maan...sam...you know what you both missed out a lovely sight yesterday...adi said in an excited tone
What happened adi...?...you look quite amused...sam said
You know yesterday rahul was in the loo almost the whole party...he said and burst out laughling
What...?
Yes...he had a stomach upset and he had his V-day party in the toilet...!!
All the three of them laughed like mads on adi's exciting news...and soon the news of rahul spending the whole party inside the washroom spread in the whole class and later whole school...!!
9th B-
WHAT...??
Geet...pari...yash...meera...nt...and vicky shouted in unison and looked at eah other's face before bursting into fits of laughter...!!
OMG...!!...I wish I would have been there to witness the wonderful sight...vicky said holding his stomach which was now aching with their laughing spree...!!
Yeah man...totally agree to you...yash added and then again started laughing
Oh now I know why bhai was completely fine yesterday...you gave that drink to rahul instead of bhai...vicky said looking toward geet who shot a deadly glare at pari who inturn averted her gaze to the ground...!!
Geet understood somehow maan's drink got exchanged with that of rahul which means again her full proof plan went to drain...!!
They were going towards the canteen when meera said...
Ah...guys...you go to the canteen I'll join you in a minute...have to take my notes from sharma mam...!!
Ok meera...but come soon...!!
They make their way towards the canteen while meera went to the staffroom...
She took her notes and was checking them while returning when she bumped into someone...!!
Hey are you ok...?
She look towards the source of sound and got a shock...
Oh no...not again...she thought while bending down to pick up her notes
Dev too bend down at the same time to help her and both caught the paper simultaneously with meera holding the papers while dev holding meera's hand...!!
Meera instantly retreated her hand from his grip as if she received an electric shock due to his touch...!!
I am sorry...he muttered seeing her getting uneasy with their accidental touch and got up
Its ok...she said and started moving ahead when he called her again...
Hey meera...ah...can I talk to you for a minute...please...he requested
Meera stopped listening to his pleading tone and turned to face him...
He came near her and said hesitatingly...
Actually...bro asked me to inquire about last night party...I hope you know what happen with geet in the party and all...
What do you want to ask...?
Hey you can speak a full sentence...he chuckled at his own sentence like he cracked the joke of the century
But seeing meera not at all interested in his silly talks he composed himself and continued
Bro thinks someone spied geet's drink as the other drinks were perfectly fine and he wants to find out the person but as geet will not talk to bro...and you know why...he said giving a knowing smile...so he asked me to talk to her friends if she has told anything to you all...!!
She waited for a minute and then asked in a soft voice...
Why are you asking me only...?...you could have asked vicky or anyone else...!!
Well...he said coming closer to her while she backed away a bit...I wanted to spend sometime with a beautiful girl...and gave her his very famous charming smile...!!
She was stunned with his reply and was leaving when she heard his laughter...
Oh god...meera...!!...you are one of a kind...!!...I was just joking yaar...ok...jokes apart...vicky and yash are very protective regarding geet and so bro didn't wanted them to do something unwise...you know how impulsive they are...!!
Meera listened to him carefully as his reasons were justified while he continued...
Pari and nt are not good at understanding the gravity of situation and moreover they are a bit careless and could have created more problem than helping...so I was left with you...now will you tell me...dev finished his reasoning session and looked at meera intently...!!
She nodded her head in affirmation...
But geet hardly remember anything...she just said that she had coke and nothing else and after that its all blank...!!
Oh...dev paused for a minute and then said...ok...but please if she remembers anything then do tell me...!!
Ok...she said giving a small smile
Meera you look good with that smile...he complimented her...!!
She just adjusted her spects and hurriedly walked away getting nervous again
Dev shakes his head at her sudden nervousness and left...!!

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Rahul sat in the canteen with his friends thinking about the morning incident...
FLASHBACK...
Rahul entered the class late with a pale face and was received by a laughing welcome by his fellow classmates...!!
He didn't understood why they were laughing like maniac at him...has he wore something wrong or is there anything on his face...??...he started checking himself with a confused expression which made the students to laugh even more...!!
Hey rahul...I heard you had a date in the loo at last night party...sam commented controlling her giggle but again burst into laughter...!!
Realization dawned upon him that they were laughing about the last night incident...
Just shut up sam...he spat with rage...!!
Hey chill rahul...you are still weak...don't shout too much or your stomach may betray you here only...maan added giving others another roller coster laughter ride...!!
Before he could say or do anything mishra sir entered the class and he had to suppress his anger and go back to his seat...!!
FLASHBACK ENDS...
The whole day had been so embarrassing for him...he was just burning with anger...and then his eyes fell on geet who was sitting with her friend laughing and giggling alongwith them...!!
Geet I still don't believe it...you actually danced with bro...vicky said laughing like a maniac
Geet just shot him a glare which was enough to zip his mouth
I was drunk so I don't remember anything and so that means I didn't dance with that moron...did you get me or not...she charged at vicky pointing her finger at him dangerously
He simply nodded at the sherni who was totally furious now...!!
Others didn't dare to utter another word about her and maan after that...
Hey geet...why don't you share your lunch with us...rahul said with his chamchas standing behind him
Geet gave him a confused look thinking now what does this joker wants...!!
Come on babes...don't think so much...trust me you will enjoy more in our company than with your loser friends...he gave a lecherous look to geet...!!
Just get lost rahul...she said not at all interested in having a conversation with him
I'll give you a nice treat geet...just give me a chance...rahul said smirking
Yash and vicky were about to get up when geet stopped them and turned to rahul...
Well in that case...eat on my behalf too as you might be needing more energy after yesterday's incessant loo visit...!!
Everyone laughed their heads off on geet's comment which irritated and angered rahul to the core and he marched towards geet...
Maan entered the canteen at the time rahul came to geet...he was controlling his anger seeing rahul openly giving geet dirty comments but he lost his control the time he saw rahul approaching geet...he was about to show rahul his place when he saw vicky coming in between rahul and geet...!!
Whoa whoa man...!!...stop right there...vicky said coming in between geet and rahul
Hey looser back off...rahul raised his hand to push vicky when maan grabbed his hand and pushed him away from vicky and geet...!!
Be in your limit rahul...no nuisance in school...maan said through gritted teeth
His eyes were spitting fire which actually scared rahul a bit as he had experienced his wrath before also...so he just left from there giving a glare to vicky and geet...!!
After rahul left vicky said...
Bro why did you came in between...I wanted to give a tight punch tot hat dog...!!
Hearing him maan muttered under his breath...I too wanted to do the same vicky...!!
What are you murmuring bro...?...vicky said seeing maan murmuring something ina low voice...!!
Ah...nothing vicky...and you should not get involved in silly fights in the school...maan said looking at geet who in turn gave him a dangerous glare...!!
Maan left returning the glare back to geet...!!

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Later geet went to the locker room to keep somefiles when she again collided with maan...!!
Oh miss handa...as usual...maan said in a sarcastic tone and added with a smirk...on second thoughts...do you just bump in me purposely...?
Haww...oh hello khurana...you are too full of your self...geet retorted
Why are you shouting handa...?...I am not making up things... yesterday you were not ready to leave my hand for a second that it was obvious that you are totally smitten by me...he said with a cheeky smile...!!
She turned totally red in embarrassment hearing his shameless comment...
Maan came closer to geet and wishpered in her ears huskily...
What happen handa...??...you lost your tongue...hmm...!!
She instantly pushed him and said...shut up khurana...!!...I was not in my right senses yesterday otherwise I wouldn't want to dance with you even in my dreams...!!
He crossed his arms across his chest and replied very calmy with the same grin intact on his face...
Oh...so you even dream about me...!!...interesting...!!
I...vo...I...just shut up ok...and leave my way...she said pushing him away from her way marching forward when she tripped due the open laces of her shoes and was about to fall when maan leaped forward and grabbed her in his hands encircling his long fingers around her slender waist...!!
Maan was lost in her mesmerising eyes...completely hypnotized by her innocent beauty...!!
Geet looked at maan staring at her with a very mysterious look...she was trying to read the languague in which his eyes were talking to her but he was a total enigma...she then realized what she was doing and tried to straighten back by pushing his broad chest...!!
Khurana...instead of ogling at me will you lift me up...she said bringing him back to the reality
He straightens her and released her in a jerk and strode out of the locker room leaving a dumbfounded geet behind...
What happen to him...?...babaji...why is he so confusing...??...she cribbed to her babaji and went to her classroom...!!

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so here is part 6
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Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey Anu,😊

Very nice update.

Sam & Maan taking care of Geet was nice.

It's good that her friends side her & don't want any problem 4 her.

Rahul 😡 don't do anything more stupid.

Maan is teasing Geet while he hates it when Sam does that😆

Continue Soon

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loved the update...
so i knew it sam wud hv come there after maan's req but geet wud b oblivious to everything as usual...
so maan is controlling his feelings for handa...
when he knows abt the spiked drink wat wud happen...
i really want maan to know abt it...

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