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Neha

@Neha_J

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys,

i just wrote this today, reason toh i don't know and to be honest i think its horribly terrible but a really good frnd of mine liked it so i'm just felt like sharing this poem with you all.

Bas ek request hai, isse padhne ke baad don't throw chappals and tomatoes on me.

Zindagi insaan ko kahan se kahan le aati hai,

ek pal khushi toh dusre pal gum de jaati hai.

Chahte hain jisse dilon jaan sanam aksar usse gum de jaate hain.

Pyar karne se roka nahi per nibhana hai kaise usse yeh jaana nahi.

Karke wafayein bhi hum usse nibhana hai kaise yeh jante nahi.

Pyar toh hum usse karte hain behat sanam per dihkana hum jaante nahi.

Chah kar bhi paa na sakhe jisse usse aksar apna mante nahi.

Jaane aisa kyun hota hai,

Zindagi insaan ko kahan se kahan le aati hai,

Ek pal khushi toh dusre pal gum de jaati hai.

Do give me your views regarding this, good or bad both are welcomed by open arms.

lots of luv,

Neha (Shona)

Edited by neha2607 - 14 years ago

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anjali

@katsmeow

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Posted: 14 years ago

Heyya shona it is beautiful if u hve gt such treasres kept in ur box plzzz do share it wiz me i luvvvvvvvvvvvv these especially those who conveys ones feeling so beautifully luv u lotsssssss

anjali

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shaaz_91

@shaaz_91

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey
beautifully written yaar
no need 4 any chappals or tamatar.........so chill
its really nice
tc
shaaz

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Amira.

@..Amira..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Heyy, nice poem..
soo touching... main poem tab likhti houn jab dil mein bohot boojh ho to poem mein likh kar kuch boojh kaam kar leti houn, hope this is the same reason but i will not ask u the reason becoz i know some pain are personnal or may be i don't have any right to asking this question but nice poem.... loveee it....

~Amira~

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applepie

@-GoogleWithMe-

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Posted: 14 years ago

very nice well written

loved it

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cute_girl17

@cute_girl17

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome..so beautifully written😊

do write more...u r really good at it

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 14 years ago

zara batao toh kisis ne iss poem ke liye tmaatr or chappal mare kya?

nahi mare honge...coz its amazing poem yaar

loved it

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Neha

@Neha_J

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: amira_saeed
Heyy, nice poem..
soo touching... main poem tab likhti houn jab dil mein bohot boojh ho to poem mein likh kar kuch boojh kaam kar leti houn, hope this is the same reason but i will not ask u the reason becoz i know some pain are personnal or may be i don't have any right to asking this question but nice poem.... loveee it....

~Amira~

Hey,
You r right, i guess i had stored too much things in my heart and felt like taking the burden off me by giving it words......
You do have the right to ask me the reason but mein khud nahi jaanti why i wrote it, it came out naturally.....
But i'm glad it touched you. It means a lot 😊😊😊
Thanks again

lots of luv,
neha (Shona)

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Neha

@Neha_J

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: katsmeow
Heyya shona it is beautiful if u hve gt such treasres kept in ur box plzzz do share it wiz me i luvvvvvvvvvvvv these especially those who conveys ones feeling so beautifully luv u lotsssssss
anjali

Hey anjy,
you r the only reason i thought i could share it here nahi toh i had thought it was horribly bad.
But i'm glad you all liked it, and thanks toh mujhe kehna chahiye if it wasn't you i think i would have deleted this from my lappy without posting it.
tc

lots of luv,
Neha (Shona)