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Aaksha

@princess.rocks

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#241

so awesome

yaar

but i wish thodi long update hoti 😆

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Hafsah Qamar

@c00l_girl

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: gurtilover
Hey babaji itna chota update is larke ko kaun samghye ke mughe ek bahut bara update chaheye itne din w8 karne ke baad itna chota sa na babaji ye mughe manzor nahi agle baar maha update ok ji bolo...waise accha phansaya aapne hame is box ke chakar me are ab mughe kya pata usme kya hai jaldi se update karo hame batado ji ham wait nahi kar sakte okay ji😆Waise beautiful update ji😳 Lovely[>:D< ] Us box ka kuch karna parega...are mera matlab tha use kholna parega😆 Love ur update Mauhhh well im w8ing kab wo box khulega🤗

hahaha mujhe pata hai adaa k tumhe update ki boht zyada bhook lagi hai..😆 mujhe b lag raha tha k ye update chhota hai... but me next update looong karungi.. pakka!😆 dont worry.. n thanks for liking the update.. aur es bar tumhe update bhi jaldi mil jaega! hai na bari baat😉

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#243

both the updates were superb
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

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PRATHYUSHA

@prathyusmiling

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#244

awesome updates..im xcitd to c d surprise gift...do continue soon

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Hafsah Qamar

@c00l_girl

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#245

hey friends!! im back..😛 but this tym zara jaldi aa gayi😆 at last main ne apna record torr hi dia🤣 thanks 2 all my sweet friends who likes my updates n encourages me.. es se pehle k main ek long speech start kar doon..😆 here is the recap:

Recap:
geet thinks to give a thank u gift to maan..

here is the update, read n enjoy:

PART-14

At college:

geet n naintara came 2 friends..

Naintara: hey friends..

maan was not there..

geet was upset because she souldnt find maan there..

Romeo: hey geet! kya hua??

Geet: kuch nahi

Naintara: maan kahan hai guys??

Arjun: hum bhi subha se usko dhoond rahe hain but pata nahi wo kahan

chala gaya hai..

geet went away friom there n started finding maan..

On other side:

maan was sitting on the bench in the park..

maan was very confused about his feelings for geet.. he couldnt understand

the feelings which he had for geet..

Maan:(thinking) mujhe kya ho gaya hai?? jis maan singh khurana ne kabhi

kisi ki help nahi ki, us ne apna kaam adhura chor k geet ki assignment

complete ki..

suddenly geet came n when she saw maan there, she was so relaxed..

geet went to maan..

maan was very surprised to see geet..

Geet: maan tum yahan ho, aur main tumhe puray college mein dhoondti phir

rahi hoon

Maan: tum mujhe kyun dhoond rahi thi??

Geet: wo actually... kal tum ne meri itni help ki, us k liye thanks n ye gift

tumhare liye..

Maan: gift mere liye?? kya hai es mein??

Geet: khud dekh lena..

maan started unwrap the gift but geet stopped him..

Maan: kya hua??

Geet: abhi nahi.. ghar ja k kholna plz

maan smiled..

Maan: ok

Geet: maan chalo sab friends tumhe dhoond rahe thay..

Maan: ok lets go..

maan n geet reached class..

Romeo: guys! wo dekho maan aur geet aa gaye..

Arjun: thank god aa to gaye..

Dev to Maan: tum kahan chale gaye thay?? hum tumhe dhoond dhoond k

pagal ho gaye thay..

Maan: pagal hone ki zarurat hai kya..(kidding)

romeo saw a gift in maan's hand..

Romeo: maan! tere hath mein kya hai?? gift.. ks ne dia ye gift??

Dev: girl friend??

Maan: stop it guys! tum log bhi na! aisi koi baat nahi hai..

teacher came in the class..

Teacher: students! kal break mein auditions hain, so get ready!

Students: ok sir..

Geet: kal auditions! mujhe to kuch bhi nahi ata..

Maan: dont worry geet... tension na lo, ho jaega!

Romeo: wese mere paas ek idea hai..

Arjun: kya??

Romeo: kyun na dev aur naintara bhi dance karein??

Dev n Naintara:(shouted) kya???

Arjun: wese idea bura to nahi hai..

Dev: no way guys! mujhe dance ka d bhi nahi ata..

Naintara: mujhe bhi..

Geet: naintara! chup kar.. kuch nahi hota participate karne mein kya jata hai..

Maan: han tum dono ki jodi achi lagegi.. try karne mein kuch nahi jaega

guys!

Romeo: so pakka hai k ab dev n naintara bhi participate kar rahe hain..

main teacher ko names likhwa k ata hoon..

Dev: ye romeo k bachey ko kuch zyada hi jaldi hai humare names likhwane

ki..

Maan: chill yar..

At afternoon:

all friends went to their homes..

when maan reached home, he was very excited to see the gift which geet

had given to him..

dadimaa asked maan to eat lunch.. but maan refused

Maan: baad mein kar lunga dadimaa!

then he went to his room..

Dadimaa: aj kal k bachey bhi na! pata nahi kis jaldi mein rehte hain..

maan locked his room n then started unwrapping the gift..

he found a cute decoration piece..

maan was so happy 2 c that gift..

Precap:
geet asks maan about gift n all the friends enjoy in the party...

well, friends! this is all for now.. hope u like it.. dont forget to press the like button n also do comment.. n suggestions r most welcome..

thanks,
hafsah

Edited by dollie16 - 14 years ago