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Posted: 14 years ago


thnks..!! 😳
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thnks mangona..!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: renuka1997

lovely update

continue soon



thnks.. wil cont soon.!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cblover

love..love...loved it...sooo much 👏...when abhay(vivi) kissed piya ☺️ nd in the hostel he hugged her 🤗 that was the best par t👏...really loved that.👍🏼..cant described in words..thanku soo much for this great update...post another very sooon dear...😍



ah thnk u so much..😳😳 im so glad u likd it..😉 i l post the nxt update as soon as possible..!! 😃
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thnks..!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1301Princess

Hi Katie...😊
As usual Awesome Update...😊
The way you described how Abhay solved the puzzle was great..👏 Because of it I did understood the puzzle...😆
Keep going it girl..🤗
When you'll be updating next??
Update soon...😊



hi princess... 🤗thnks...😳 im real happy that u got the puzzle rite..😃 i knew it was a lil confusing.. i l be updating today..!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Apu, wen r u updating??😕
-Gauri
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Originally posted by: pkyekrox

Hey Apu, wen r u updating??😕
-Gauri



hi Gauri..😃 i wil b updatd today by 1pm..!! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 20


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"Ok where were we.?" Abhay asked, "Puzzles.." Piya said quickly.. "Right.. ok..!! You see Piya this vampire Vijendar was the strongest vampire on earth at that time and was also invincible.. supernatural forces all across Earth longed and craved for his powers.. he was like He-man or something.. lol.. ahem.. ah.. he had a friend who was apparently a witch.. her name was Sabrina.. she too was one powerful being.. there was absolutely no problem for him.. he was living peacefully.. changing dynasities with ease.. then came the big problem.. there was a centaur named Tala.. he was only a power seeker.. and the dude had come to know about the weakness of Vijendar.!" ,"Silver right.?!" Piya interrupted.. "Kinda.. he was immune to silver but not completely though and that was the problem.. the same night where they have believed that the princess Maithali was burnt with her lover- that's me..!! that night.. hmmm.. Sabrina had read Tala's mind.. and knew that he was coming to get Vijendar.. so in order to safe guard his trained powers.. he transformed all his powers into a ring.. a silver ring..! There were seven gaps in between the ring.. Sabrina knew the whole plan.. that night.. when i was dying.. Vijendar was right there near the old broken house where Maithali was being burnt alive.. i did everything in my powers to save her..!" There were small tears forming in the corner of his eyes, he just took his palms and rubbed his entire face and continued, "Tala had reached there.. Vijender was ready to die.. he had done everything he had to save his powers from fallin in to the wrong hands.! Sabrina was apparently on her way to the broken house, Vijender was just standing there stationary.. when he felt a silver being stabbed into his heart, peircing it so hard that blood began to flow profusely out of his old body, he fell down as the silver was still hanging on his chest, firm in its place, Tala withdrew to see his oppenent squirm in pain.! This was his weak point.. the silver dagger to the chest.. but what he didnt know is that the silver would not kill him at the spot.. but would live up an hour and kill him slowly second by second.! Tala retreated thinking that he is dead, and had to head back to tel his clan about Vijender's death.. he didnt know how to extract his powers, so he returned back.. meanwhile Sabrina reached there as Vijender stugglin as his body was slowly hardening around his chest region, it was becoming stone like.. blood was being clotted in places inside the body, breathing was quite normal, but body was reacting very quickly to the silver which was sticking closely to his heart. Sabrina knew what to do.. she carried his body using her powers and searched for a dieing body, wel there I was... dieing person..! I was almost burnt by the excess flames flying around.. she dragged me to him, she cut his throat and fed me his blood, it was so bitter then.. but it was not like i had any choice i was being forced to drink it..! And then i was done.. Vijender suddenly got up.. only from his neck to abdomen he was hardened.. the man looked like as if nothin happened to him.. the vampy still had pride in his eyes, as he bent down to dig his fangs over my burnt neck, he scratched my skin with his sharp teeth, tastin his own blood which was now running in my veins.!"


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Piya was feeling very bad.. she had grown so possesive of him, she craved for him more and more.. she had the mental strength to control herself.. but she didnt want.. she wanted to let it wild.! Where as Abhay was thinking was Piya as he weas getting ready.. to set his journey and to collect the silver.. he took a small bag.. and took things like silver, wood and pair of gloves. And the journey started.. the palace was not so far.. so they decided to travel on foot.. as fast as they could.. it was almost full moon.. only 4 days left before the last date.. it felt like as if some food product with a expiry date labelled on it.!! Oh well their destination was Fatepur Sikri.. there was a holy mosque in there.. and they doubted the presence of the silver there.. as it was an important place in the Akbar's palace. Well then Abhay and Chand set out.. leaving haseena behind.. Little did they know that lil Piya.. was planning to climb a bus and head out to the same place.. it was definetly gonna take some time to find the silver and she would make it by then.
Piya reached the busstop and she was eagerly waiting for the bus's arrival, the time was 8.30pm at present.. the bus was supposed to come at 8.45pm.. she sat on the bench putting her luggage aside, and placed her hand under her chin and exhaled a long breath.. 'When will the damn bus come.?' she thought as she wondered what Abhay will be upto this now at the moment..


ok guys i know that the update is small.. wel i will continue soon.. i l be updating on saturday.. wel if you liked it.. pls do hit the 'like button.. and comment.. thnks.!
Edited by katiehiwatari - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx 4 d update nd the pm.
I knew piya wud somehow follow.
looking frwrd to chand-piya confrontation.
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago

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