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Posted: 14 years ago
eagerly waiting for your update.I love this concept👏👏👏👏👏.
Now, U will be updating this daily,thanks😛I am very happy.😃
and thanks for pm.😊
Edited by fairyland_1234 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiiiiiiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Poor geet
So many problems
Can't wait 4 da trip
Will geet's secrets come out
Con soon
Thanksssssssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
Enigma...
part 12
Thanks for all the love & support... this probably will be
updated 2wice daily... :) if not... atleast once...




Geet walked up & down her room. Worried sick! London! London! Hometown London! She can't go! In no way she could possibly visit that place! Passport! I don't have Indian passport! How! Why? Shila walks in.
Shila "just go! And hide your passport! Like you know! Go before him or after!
Geet "yes! That's a good idea! I will go after him! I will make some stupid excuse!"
Shila "see!"

Office-

Geet walks in flowed by maan. He observes her typical cheery mood today. Like she just won a trophy.
Maan "have you cleared everything out?"
Geet "yes sir. I could only come after the arrangement date. I am sure you won't mind if I am day late!"
Maan "but!"
Geet "thank you sir!"

Geets day went well. She didn't give a single excuse to maan to talk anything about the trip. It was final. She will go after him. Maan cared less! Yes it's true that he was very strongly attracted to this mother of three! Seems like 4 soon! The way she look so happy! Extremely happy! Why? Maan closed his eyes! What do you mean why? Her husband! Her child! Then what why? Then a small voice appeared from somewhere! "our child!" he liked that sound! Then closed his eyes back! No! No! Thats sick! Sick! Sick! He annoyingly walks in to his cabin! Snapping at everyone.

Shasha "sirrrr!!"
Maan "WHAT?" she jumps. In tears. She couldn't imagine a day with him shouting but! Why today? It's her birthday. Geet walks out hearing all the hassle in maans cabin. She knocks.
Maan "WHAT?" Geet jumps as well. She wasn't sure what was exactly his problem but she had no intention to know!
Maan "WHAT is it?"
Geet "umm... Eh... You are shouting sir!"
Maan "why? Like you never shout! Why do you think I am shouting?" he snaps. Maan was angry! No one could guess why? & what for!
Geet "yes na! I always shout at my kids & my husband at me!" maan instantly calmed down. Looking at Geet blankly. For fraction of second he thought that's what geet was saying then realized geet was not there at all! He closed his eyes! Uff! This girl! I mean lady! I mean! Who ever! I need to know her more!
Maan "send Geet in!"
Shasha "yes sir!" Shasha runs & disappears!

Geet walks in.
Geet "yes sir!"
Maan "why can't you come along the same day?"
Geet "umm! My... Emm... My husband & my anniversary is on that day!" maan looked at her face. It seems simple. Soft. No lie. No guilt! She seems perfect. Was she telling the truth? He asked him self! Of course she was telling the truth! I seen him! I met him! I even seen him in her house! He corrected him self! "there house!" there are no doubts! Then why I still can't take my minds off her! She is married! She have kids! She have husband! Ignore! Ignore! He consoled him self. Her pink lips was only Tempting him! Not that there are better lady then her... Not that there are millions who dies for his one look! But something about her. Something very different! It's like all over London again. Like that Christmas party! & me seeing a girl in her s......... His thought was disturbed by Geet. Who was looking back at his eyes in great concentration. She does admit his dark brown eyes may scare anyone! But not her! There are no way those eyes could melt her! But again she does not like his look! He was a Pervy! She wondered how old is he! If Vicky 19! & he have mentioned that his older brother & him have 5 years different! Geet looks at her finger. Counting maans age.... 19.... 20.... 21!.... 22!..... 23!.... 24! Ah... So mr detective maan sing khurana 24! He seriously needs to drifts his mind way from work!... Geet couldn't believe her thought. Specially this disgusting thought. He needs to go out & maybe find someone to have...... "me my self was having hard time to say the word s.... S..... Oh! What the heck! Intimacy! Make love!.. He needs a GF! Maybe then his mind will drift way from me!" rajiis thought came back to her! He having crash! Then she thought... Crash on a married women! Chi! Chi! Even it's fake! But this!... Geets lips was shivering for those words to come out. Her lips was itching to ask him "how could you have crash on married women!" she stopped her thought! No! No! That's wrong!... Geet eventually broke the silence as he wouldn't remove his eyes from her & poor geet looked every where els then his eyes!
Geet "SIR!SIR! I can't! My anniversary!" maan breaks his gaze. Only to find him lost again.
Maan "so! Aren't you going to invite your boss! Specially you are very important figure in my office." Geet was shocked. She stammered. "per...p...pe...per!"
Maan "why are you stammering! I haven't asked you for a date exactly!"
Geet "date! Excuse!"
Maan "are you going to invite or shall call your husband & invite my self!" ... Geet smiles. A forceful smile. She wanted to cry & bang her head on the wall. What mess she was putting her self in! Now she probably have to get Armaan back! & train those three siblings of her as well.
Geet "s..su...sure s...sir! W...why n...n...no...not!" she turns round & looks up with a begging face. Why me?"





Geet half miserable makes her way home. Cursing her boss. Wish she could murder him. Like kill him alive!

Maan walks back home. Very happy. He wasn't sure why? But after long time he felt like smiling! & there was certain jerk of smile like he just won Geet cup! "Geet cup???" he smiled at his thought.
Rano & Dadi looks at him. Bit surprised with the smile! Was he alright? They thought. Rano never seen him smile & Dadi could only see him in a wedding suit! Maybe a girl impressed him after all!
Rano "sabe Kuch tichk hi na beta!"
Maan "yes mom! I am just trying to solve something! & oh yes... I will be attending a anniversary dinner soon! Please don't wory for me." he puts his jacket on his shoulder & makes his way to the bedroom.



Next- aniversary date... round geets house😲
part 11-Prev-Next- part 13

Please do leave me some comments...
xxxxx



Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

amazing update loved it...........poor geet LOL

Edited by maaneetfan123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG poor geet. It's getting interesting day by day.
Loving the update. I want more. Poor poor soul. This maan! Uff loving his detectivness! X
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Posted: 14 years ago

GREATTTTTTTT update...!!!!!👏👏


haha, MAAN and his thoughts, awll nawty nawty...!!!😳
GEET can't trick MAAN easily...!!!😛

now this anniversary thing, wow seems interesting..!!!😍

and BTW congo. MAAN you just won GEET CUP...lol...!!!!😆


and em happiieee that now you'll update this FF...yaaayyy...!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Opaldews


GREATTTTTTTT update...!!!!!👏👏


haha, MAAN and his thoughts, awll nawty nawty...!!!😳
GEET can't trick MAAN easily...!!!😛

now this anniversary thing, wow seems interesting..!!!😍

and BTW congo. MAAN you just won GEET CUP...lol...!!!!😆


and em happiieee that now you'll update this FF...yaaayyy...!!!!!!

indeed lol that was funny
cannot wait for next part
plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update!!! I like the way he just invited himself hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
oye teri ab armaan ko kaha se laye gi!!!!🤣🤣 thanks for the update!!
I LOVE U!!!!! 😊👏👏👏👏
Edited by TinkJia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update 👏

love Maan self talk 😆........... poor geet.........thinking kaha paas gaye yaar ............ i just dont believe he invited himself to anniversary dinner.😲........... Geet what do u think its that easy to fool Maan Singh Khurana😉........... So maan have met geet before probably at Christmas party .............. geet doesnt remember anything abt their past meeting
🤔....... ab arman ko wapas aana padega.......GEET CUP 🤣...... looking forward to Detective Maan Singh Khurana in full action at geet house 😍

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