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Posted: 14 years ago
I am rewrighting the other part… didn't like my old one… :)
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Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

I am rewrighting the other part' didn't like my old one' :)

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Oh no!!! How long will it take?😭
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Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

Oh no!!! How long will it take?😭


idk babe.. typing remi now.. then paradox… then enigma… 1-2 hours
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeah ur updating enigma also
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UPDATE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE....!!!*~
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Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE


idk babe.. typing remi now.. then paradox' then enigma' 1-2 hours
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OMG.Itni der baad??? *faints*😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
***Enigma***
part 8
pls do comment & press the like button' ty for all the love and suport
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SORRY FOR SHORT ONE' BIT BUSY...


Geet could barely walk. After 4 long months she have wore high hill & sari! Sari something she never wore! She was having hard time to keep up..... God knows what els she have to do to get rid of this detective maan sing khurana to come off from her back!... She have her problem of her own... And now him.... God knows when he have made him.... Like detectives is his nature!..... Why can't he leave people alone?... Geet cursed the day when she saw his face..... Typical....
Armaan- seems like you have never worn a sari before!


Geet- no!

Armaan- couldn't you were a dress?
Geet- no! I can't look modern! I am suppose to be a simple girl from a village! Not my usal mordan type!
Armaan- you are not even that!
Geet- excuse me? What do you mean?
Armaan- nothing! There comes your boss!

Maan along with Vicky & shila walked towards them. Armaan wore a matching black racial with geets sari. They looked like a couple from the haven. Maan looks at him. Impressed. Very good looking perfect for Geet. There was a tint of jealous but it soon disappeared by seeing the perfection of geets husband.
Armaan- Geet, aren't you going to introduce me? He spoke in a elegant way & smiled towards maan.
Geet- oh yes, sir this is my husband robindro. She smiles, robindro this is my boss.
Maan puts his hand out to shake- it's pleasure to met you mr robindro!
Rob- same Mr khurana. My wife do parse your determination In work. I am glad that my wife works somewhere where her work is being looked after well.
Maan- my pleasure. Your wife is very talented. Maan smiles & leaves the couple alone.....
He was now sure that geet is married! A happy family. he somewhere felt jealous'.. he just wanted to rate armaan'. in which way he wasn't better then him' he was basically better them in every way' ' he felt like giving him filthy look' robi was perfect husband & probably father in every way' but still to satisfy his mind he started to rate him'


Rob- shall we dance.
Geet smiles & flows his lead.

It was a weird evening in everyway. Geet looked at her fake husband. Not amused at all. She was glad that he is perfect at his work, what els could she ask for?
Armaan- you looking beautiful 2night.
Geet snaps out of her thought realising what just he told her! Them realised maan was near.... She tried to act blush & hide her self on his arm... Both hugging one another...

Maan looked at them, now & then. He didn't like it... But genus no one to come between a husban and wife! They have perfect family with 3 kids. Perfect world in every way... No problems.... No hedsack what so ever. He envied them... Because someherevhe wanted that family of his to him self! He closed his eye again in frustration! How selfish is he! How could he ask for someones bad?

Later on the evening maan walked out. It was surficating him inside! he needs a little time to get over geet! Completly!

Armaan- it's your party!
Maan looks at geets husband!
Maan- yea... I have to leave any moment! I will be on my way to London. For business deal. Anyway nice metting you. I will take a leave!
Geet stood at the back & took a shy relief. Armaan hugs her and locks his hand between her finger saying a goodby & walks of.... Leaving maan alone. He looks at them as they walked by in one another arm... Geet wondering something from him!.... Maan looked down. It's best to stay way! He concluded!

Later on in the party.... Armaan dropped Geet home.
Armaan- if you need me again do say! Vicky pays well! He smirked!
Geet- what ever!

Geet makes her way home... Maan will be off for few week. She was happy.... Few days of rest.....

Geet was humming as she was cooking.... Like her day just startted... Maan was off from her back for good.... No more tension... No more heddack..... This man could do nothing now... She thought... Long as he is not after bringing her true identity.... She is happy..... Her life have been a rolacoster ride... Her aim is one now... To bring her mother out of that spiral... From that monster.... Her life have been miserable enough.... But not anymore... Her aim is to fight back..... To show everyone... She is not week nor her mother.... No one....

Geet sat there staring the dall for long time...

Rajji walks in- diii..... We are hungry....

Geet- yea.... Mostly alll done...

Rajji- dii... When mum will be here...

Geet looks at her for a moment. Blank... Not exactly sure what to say... Now she reallly wish rajji was older..... Atleast she would have sister who would understand her pain. Wish she could cry out ... The pain... The torture she went through along with mom.... Wish she could scream out the pain..... But... She is too young to understand anything.... She will understand nothing.... Nothing for now.... Geet sadly smiles...

Geet- soon hunny...

Rajji- alright.... I will tell irk & rus that.... Those two won't shutup.... Ugh....


Maan sat in the plain on his way to london. Something hurt him allot.... Its been years since he felt like this..... Something was bothering him inside... He decided to visit the same place where he met her before.... Same place.... Maybe thats why he felt attracted to geet..... Was it really her... Or its just another illusion..... Maan looked out the window.... Sipping some drinks. Bit tirade... Bit alert'.


next- part 9

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor geet she went through a lot i hope she get happiness soon wow the precap sounds good wonderful update pls cont soonnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update.
cant wait for the nxt update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovelyyy update as usual ......
ummm Geet ne d gr888 MSK ko ullu banaayaaa 😆
cont soon

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