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Posted: 14 years ago
***Enigma***
part 7
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Raji gives him a uncomfortable smile looking at her brother some help...
Rus- robindoro mathoor!
Rik bites his tongue... Remembering geet have told them not to talk!
Maan looks at raji- have you forgotten your dads name?
Raji- na! Na! I was about to say... But my brother! She smiles...
Maan- weird! First your mother & now you Hesitating!
Raji- (oh god! Mr detective! I am sure he have big crash on my sister!.. Let's put this in to misery...) actually my mum & dad nonstop argue!
Maan became interested instantly...
Raji- oh... You know I try my best to keep my brothers way! You know mental effect!
Maan looked shock! She is only 8! And so caring towards her siblings!
Raji- so today is one of those day. I hate my father today.
Maan- what do you mean by one of those day? Maan asked curiously...
Raji- they will be back to lovy dovy again 2moro!... Maan didn't like that. He expected this will be unhappy family!!!! He closed his eyes again! How selfish of him!
Raji- my ma & pa r the best... But you know there nok jok!
Maan faintly smiles.
Raji- they are the best & sweet.
Geet walks in half hearing about this made up fake husband of her!
Rus+ rik- maaa!... Both twin hugged geet tight.
Geet- sorry sir!
Maan- no! It's alright. You have sweet children.
Geet smiles.
Raji- is papa picking us up? Raji over topped to add bit chill on maans broken heart...
Geet- ehh... Emm... No hunny. He is busy.
Maan- I can drop you all home!
Geet- NO! She shouts... What if he wants to come in!!!..... No sir!
Raji- bad idea! My dad is to possessive about my ma! Geet gives Rajji a glare.
Geet- let's go... As they walked out...
Geet- Tu aj kal bohot bolni lagi hi!

Maan half smiles as the door close...

In car...
Raji- he so have a crash on you!
Geet- uff! I really don't care! I rather die then look at any men!
Rik- don't die! Then who will look after us
all 4 sibling laughed...

Home...
Shila- sorry yar!
Geet- na... It's alright. He is defiantly sure I am married now!
Shila- when will you ever give any men a chance?
Geet- not in this lifetime!

Another week have passed... It's been a tiring week. Workload over Geet was a huge responsibility! Maan was hesitating even to talk to her! She was happy in her life! He tried to be much professional as possible! Yes.... It was true he had a crash on her! But its only a crash! Nothing serious.... Can be easily forgotten!

Geet knocks on maans door....
Geet- can I come in sir?
Maan- yes Geet!
Geet- yes sir?
Maan- office is holding a party this Friday. We expect you to be there. Some important clint will come!
Geet- yes sir!
Maan- you can also bring your family along!
Geet- umm.... Sure sir!
Maan- yes.... I really love to met your husband!
Geet- umm....
Maan smiles.....
He still somehow wasn't convinced that she is married or those kids was her! He just wanted to satisfy his brain!

Geet walked out. Cursing maan. Why can't he just leave her alone? Why can't he just disappears? Urg.... Now where from I will find a husband!

Shila- don't worry! We will find you a fake husband!
Geet- shut up! Just shut up! Ugh.... My husband not coming to the party!
Shila- but in this way he will suspect more!
Geet- I don't give a dam care!
Shila- your dad is here Geet! Works very close to maan! & think about your mum! You trying to give her a new life & change.... & if your dad anyhow knows the truth!.....
Geet was scared.... But at the same time she was brave! Very brave. She will not back way from anything!
Geet- fine! Find me a fake husband.
Shila smiles & calls Vicky.......

It wasn't long before Vicky called them to met somewhere.
6 mens standing.
Vicky- well which one you would like to be your fake husband?
Geet- one with good memory.
Vicky- then go for Armaan!
Geet- ok! He will do!
Vicky- so what name have told my bro?
Geet- Robindro mathoor!
Armaan looked at her. Smiled.
Armaan- so I am robindroo mathoor. I have 2 child?
Geet- no 3!
Armaan- alright! Name?
Geet- Rajji- 8, rus & rik twins r 6!
Armaan bursts out in laugh... Who would believe a 18 years old girl have 8 years old kid!...
Geet- enough! Just do what I have told you!
Armaan- alright! When is the party?
Geet- 2moro!
Armaan- what if he asks me personal question?
Geet- just tell him it's a professional business party! & stuff!
Armaan- what am I allowed to do with you?
Geet- what do you mean?
Armaan- I mean how close?
Geet- only dance...
Armaan- cool!
Geet- see you before the party....

Geet & shila drove back home... God knows how many more lie she have to say just to hide her identity.... Soon that maan leaves her... Better it is!





next- part 8

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Dis was an awesum update..............he he he 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆so funny....fake husband bechara

Edited by 9staroneserials - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Haha.....rajji is so clever at 8 she is fooling maan..luvd this concept.thnks 4 pickng dis concept... Lets see perfectn of armaan.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update.👏
You have stated knitting the story, 👏lot of speculation from Maan about Geet.........How long Geet will be able to conceal her truth.......?????????

Continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...

poor Geet what all she has to do 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!
loved it when the twins go like maa!😆
n fake husband!😆 if they dance some1's sure gonna be jealous!
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic update
Glad dat 1 ov da siblings remembered da name
Oooh luv rajj'z teasing wen she goes mum & dad had a fite & Maans face lit up lyk a Christmas tree
Luvin this new track---fake husband
Let's c Wat Maans reactions gunna be
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
haha loved it .. the way raji was telling abt her dad to maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update😊
fake husband😲
it will be worth to see maan's reaction😆
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...!! armaan as a fake husband...ummmm...it will fun to read...!!!
pls continue soon....!!

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