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Posted: 14 years ago
muski princess chill yaar
everyone here understands yr situation
don't get so fustrated
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Posted: 14 years ago
update in a two hours max😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
i thought abhi milegi...within 15-20 min...
muski...😡....
updating status daalkar sabko tadpaoge...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

i thought abhi milegi...within 15-20 min...

muski...😡....
updating status daalkar sabko tadpaoge...



Exactly...😡..😆....muski take ur tym dear...lekin..long long update chahiye n yes plzz before 11:00..try on tht plzz..need to sleep..🥱!!

Rohini

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey girl update BSLS too please :-)
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Chapter 8
Grinning, Maan toddled through hallway as he headed in any random direction. Banging at every second door, Maan kept asking if anyone knows Arjun.
Geet was about to step in the elevator when suddenly she felt someone squeal, turning on her heels she smiled wryly and she wasn't surprised by the sight that greeted her, not one bit. She saw Maan running down the hallway with his arms outstretched. She wondered what was this man made of that even after so much liquor he hadn't yet passed out.
Soon, she heard him roar her brother's name and all she could do was send a silent prayer to god that Arjun wasn't present at scene. She did not want her thoughts to wander round the possibilities of what sort of a fuss two drunkards could create, when one was enough a pain in the ass.
Seemingly, God was a little too graceful at her as soon she heard a loud thrilling shriek and well, she couldn't be mistaken in guessing the source of the not so welcome sound . . . Her Dearest Elder Brother . . . Arjun.
And shortly after she also saw her bother running towards Maan, a flushed and angered Brij came and stood next to Geet. Everyone came out of their room, what the hell was all commotion about. Anwesha's face went red in anger coupled with embarrassment. Then, she was literally beginning to give second thoughts whether she should actually marry the guy who was seemingly hugging her brother like they were lovers.
Brij had had enough already, for heaven's sake it took him an hour to finally force Arjun to lie down on the bed. The moment he would make him lie down, the next second Arjun would start jumping on the bed like he was a two year old. For the record he wasn't such a pain even when he was a two year old and bit Brij with his sharp milk teeth as and when Brij would lift him in his arms.
Dejected, Brij left from there as Vikrant followed, leaving the drunkard duo and the girls behind. Soon even Pari left, after all how could she miss on her beauty sleep. In all the mess no one had realised Yash and Meera hadn't yet returned.
Anwesha walked over to Geet who was staring at her brother and from the looks of it was more than evident that she wanted to eat him raw. They looked at each as they sighed.
It was then those they a clunk and following the direction where the sound came from, the sight that greeted them then was . . .
Anwesha and Geet gaped as they saw Maan and Arjun standing on top of the reception counter holding each other's hair. They were fighting over a liquor bottle.
"Arjun ke bacche mujhe meri whisky de" Maan roared as he blew a punch at Arjun's nose.
"Mein Arjun ka nahi, Mohinder ka beta hun" Arjun pouted as he thumped Maan in the tummy.
"Bro can you at least take Papa's name with respect" Geet yelled.
"You . . ." Arjun pointed at Geet as he said "Shut up . . ." he pointed a finger at Maan "He and I are having an adult conversation, stay out of it"
"You called me an adult" Maan's face lit up.
"No one has ever called me mature, everyone says I am spoilt" Maan grumbled.
"I will smack everyone, please don't be sad" Arjun said as he hugged Maan.
They jumped onto the ground as Arjun stumbled and fell over his back pulling Maan a top him.
Then all of a sudden Maan pushed Arjun as he said "Hey man stay away I have a reputation to maintain, I don't you know, keep hugging guys"
"Even I like hugging girls, but I have kissed a guy once, don't tell her" Arjun squealed as he looked at Anwesha but he was loud enough for everyone present there to hear him.
"Annie you sure you want to marry him" Geet asked, sadly.
"Not any longer" Anwesha's voice was filled with uncertainty. She was beginning to doubt did she ever know Arjun.
"Let's call off the wedding" Geet stated, firmly.
Ok . . . super short i know but i have to ask u all something before i move ahead . . .
Guys after this point, the story will move ahead and the fillers will end, so before that I wanted to ask you something, I got this suggestion . . .

Originally posted by: mystique_girl


Though I am not a writer, I would like to suggest you one thing - instead of continuing so many FFs at a time, it would be easier for you to handle just lesser - say 2 at a time - it helps you concentrate more and update earlier and also helps us to set our expectations correctly. I understand that you have started some fics recently but many of your open fics are already midway. It must be hard for you to update all of them together after your personal and professional commitments.

I just wanted to help you. Please give my suggestion a thought. 😊

So what do you guys say . . .?

As far as I am concerned I am ok with handling all of them at a go or just two at a tym . . . so now it's your call . . . what would you want . . . one update 4 each FF a week or two three updates a week for two FF's . . . if I concentrate on just two they will be BSLS and Fall Out, once they will end then TL, TB n PL . . . Why BSLS well, the story is not a point where I can stop . . . and why Fall Out I can't stop thinking about it . . . out of all my FF's I personally like Fall Out the most as it was changeling . . . writing something fun is easier . . .

SO . . . tell me . . . only then can I unfold the plot of this story as it has not yet begun in the real sense, neither has TL . . . as if u want then I can give u another update in a few hours for TB and start off the real plot . . . BTW I added a VM in the first Post . . . it will give u all an insight into the story . . . took me quite some searching on You tube . . .

Let me know soon . . .

Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
LOL I fink Annie will call off this wedding after wat she heard
Urrgh can't believe arjun kissed a guy
Hahah maan goes arjun ki bache & arjun says I'm not arjun but mohinder ki bache
Cont soon Xx...
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
GUYS so do u want me to update this again and start off the real story . . . i have to write so please let me know soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskaan...whatever u are comfortable...personally i wud prefer loads or updates of 2 FFs...
but its ur call...
me happy with anything.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
i too think 2 at a time will be more manageable......
i am not questioning your abilities but to maintain the continuity i think concentrating on too many ffs will eventually force you to compromise on ur plots and writing......

any two will do....that is upto you......... and whenever you have a mental block you can give an update hear or there for ur other ffs and then come back to the chosen two....
Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago

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