A Mistake Of Our Life - Sajan SS... updt pg60 - Page 4

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Oh! Man Radhii Another SS😲😲........I am shocked 😲 Yes Ur Ss has shocked me fully as Ur Ss is full of suspense and very shocking😕😲😲.....But still I will say this the story line looks interesting......Concept of Story is awesome .U have written it well..Nice story line...👍🏼👏............But When I read Nupur is Samrats love N 2 be wife😲😲..this shocked me completely??😲😲.Why did Samrats face turn pale at the mention of gunjans name ?? What GALTI has he done?? What Happened between Sajan in the Trip??😕😕 And The title of your Ss A Mistake Of our Life-is Suspensfull and interesting 👍🏼 ---But What Mistake??😕😕So many qs N Only you know answers 2 them Radhii..😉..I can guess and imagine what happen between sajan on a trip as gunjan ko chakar bhi aaaye😉😳but I will Let u answer all the Qs ..Lets see whether my imaginationn guess was right or not😉😊.....N why didnt u post character sketch?? as CS n basic introduction clears the nature of characters n story line completely....I am confused 😕plss a request dear elaborate on the nature of characters more deeply Radhii........I hope u donot mind my advice n request..But I M sure u will clear our Doubts Soon 😉...

And Plss Do Update Soon Dear😊 and Thanks 4 pm🤗...and Pm me whenever U update your this Ss...😊One Qs for U plss answer this Dear Radhii-----How Will you update when u go back 2 Mumbai????😕😕..........Will u be able 2 finish this SS ?😕😕..............Once again interesting Story concept n Nice title👏👏👏..

Love Gunjan😊😊....................

Originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Mind Blowing Story Concept RADHiKA. AWESOME work. I loved the all characters.And,Y R U saying sorry for CS thing...? Its not important. Its your story....toh aapko apni story par confident rakhna chahiye...If,Its good....Readers follow karenge....

I trust U.This is your another Best creation.....But, Sis. others ka kya hoga?? Jab aap MUMBAI jaaogi?? Kya yeh better nahin hota ki,First aap unhen (Previous Creations) complete karti? New FF/SS start is not big deal.....but,usse end bhi toh karna hoga....? and tell me..."Always...Love" ka last Update kab kiya tha?? Sorry! If U felt hurt with my litle rude Comment.But...U know me....I want to say cut to cut...no formalities. Sorry again.

-S O H A M.