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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#301

MELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL <333 I blame you for my erratic heartbeat atm :| That was one hell of a part man! I loved loved loved loved loved it lots tehe WHERE do I start :| I have been rendered S P E E C H L E S S by you Melena ji LOL Honestly everything was spot on :| You seriously write and come up with scenes that I want you to if that makes sense LOL. I don't follow too many incomplete FFs but when I do I do think about them like I used to about DMG tracks and plan in my head what might//should happen next and you never cease to impress me man :| I love you for that! I would point out parts that I liked but then I would have to quote the whole darn thing LOL I do love how you are showing that Armaan ko kuch kuch horaha hai Riddhima kayliye :P It's about time LOL And haye I wanted Riddhima to say Y E S but meh she didn't however I didn't mind it cos I would take Armaan trying to make Riddhima jealous over dancing together any day ;) And hawww the last intimate part was written so perfectly and I loved it! You should have more of those ROFL JK All in all amazinnnng update and as always I am left wanting for more! Muaaaaaaaaaaaah! Update soon, Love!

Edited by -Sary- - 14 years ago

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#302

awesome! cant wait for the next part!

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applepie

@-GoogleWithMe-

Trailblazer

Posted: 14 years ago

#303

awesome part
well written
it was so haaawwwwwwtt
loved it
continue soon

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#304

hhaha

luvd it

vicky n vivek deserve this n much more..

luvly prt..

luvd d way ridhima took over d situation

thnx 4 d pm

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#305

omgggg freakingg hot part!!!!

you're an amazing writer!! hahah

i absolutely love your story!! great job & thanks for the pm! cant wait to see what's happening next

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#306

Mel,DO YOU HAVE ANY SLIGHT IDEA HOW CRAZZY YOU'VE MADE ME FOR THIS? OMG I am so in love with this.I returned from school,switched on the computer and am directly here..I am still in my school uniform! LOL!! OMG Mel,I LOVED this!

I mean,it was Sweet+Hot+Cute+ADORABLE+SUPERHAAWWTT! Nice to 'hot' Waah waah! I loved how he was seducing her 😳😆😉😳😳 The kiss and the intimate moments..Worth the wait,Mel,ABSOLUTELY.I mean,PERFEEECCTT.I want to hug you so badly!

Best part was when she started surrendering herself to him,even kissed him back.Ayyyiiiieeee!!! LOVE it,total AR-ne-dikha-diya-hawtness-ka-jalwa kind of part!

Can't wait for the next one...Armaan's reaction is sure something to look forward too! 😉

I LOVE YOU!

Love,

Maitree

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#307

such an nice and mindblowing update

and also hot update

thanx for pm

continue soon

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#308

UHMM ok thats just such an amazing part I love it so so so much 😳

I loved every bit of the part and its something so intense and so well written .I loved how Riddhima could manage to change and now control Armaan ,someone who is so stubbborn and even though he may never say but when he hears her out its a proof of how he has already fallen for her and her charm and innocence.The bit where he tries to make her feel jealous was so amazing I could just imagine her not wanting to see that sight and Armaan smirking away LOLL

The last bit ofcourse was SO HOT :| LOL and this has to be a big step ahead in the story !