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shaaz_91

@shaaz_91

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

hey
nice one
lukin 4ward 4 AR 2 meet
cont soon
tc
shaaz

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Hey dear.....just love the update...Love the the friendship between Abhi-Ridzy-Muskaan...do continue soon...thanks for the PM...take care....

Lots of Love

GEET

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cutiedevil1

@cutiedevil1

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Nice. I liked the three musketeers:D

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Very nice part.
Waiting for ar meet.
And plz update soon with a long part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Sonya

@Ianoconic

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

hey dear,

i don't know what to call u so u have to tell me that...😛

for now the part was really nice...👏

my chatter box is really a unique piece....

ridhi intrusted in girls😆😆😆

loved the abhi-muski bickering......😆

continue soon...

thanks for the pm....

love

sonu😊

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Wow neha so amazing story.

just luv both the parts.

okay so dono ke lyf mein hi loneliness hain.

Par jab yeh do soulmates milenge toh i'm sure they'll make each other 4get all their pains n their lyf will b filled wid happiness.

But the question is Armaan ke lyf mein aisa ka secret hain. Aisa kya hua tha do saal pehle jisne usko poora change kar diya?

okay my guess is probably some girl betrayed him. W8ing anxiously for that answer. And that muski-ridzy convo is so funny. "tujhe larkiyon mein interest hain" lol musky is so cute.

So now Armaan n rahul gonna meet riddhima and muskaan

wow awesome. w8ing fr the nxt ud.

plzzzzzzzzzz update soon.

tk cr.

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558278

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

hey the part was great!

lovedd it!!

one thing though, a lot of the descriptions you write in hindi - could you try and write more of descriptions in english? as in hindi is fine, but my hindi is kind of weak, so when you are describing situations and (like you know what i mean...) i have to like slow down and think about it...as in conversational and easy descriptionsim okay with, but when you start writing nearly everything in hindi i have some trouble....

hehehe

if you cant thats fine i'll manage :D

but update super super soon!! can't wait for AR to meet!

-Ashu