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Thank you sooo much for ur comments... 😊

I wish i could have had more... 😔
so here is ur Part 44
*** PART 45 ***

maan - ab bolo...

geet naughtily - kya...

maan - wohi jo mene tumhae bolne ke liye kaha tha...

geet again - kya kaha tha...making innocent expressions...

maan loved her naughtyness...but it teasing his senses...

he so much wanted to hear his name from her lips..n here she was teasing him...

maan - tum bol rahi ho ya nahi...

geet - par kya...

maan - geet..!!!

geet - MAAN...!!!

MAAN SMILED FULLHEARTEDLY...

maan - finally...achha ab batao mumma kya keh rahi thi...

geet smiled - mumma...mumma ki aur aapk ki jodi to jaise rab ne banadi jodi...

maan rolled his eyes - geet...

geet - ok ok bata rahi hu na..tedhe-medhe shakale mat banayiye...

maan - tedhi-medhi shakale me nahi..tum banati ho...

geet - apko sunna hai ya nahi

maan - achha bolo

geet - jab mene mumma ko bataya ka aap ne mera wardrobe change kar diya...mumma khushi ke

mare pagal ho gayi thi...bcoz dat's wat she wanted to do from so long...

maan proudly - dekha...

geet annoyingly - haan haan..bass ab...mumma ko b wo chhote chhote kapde pasand nahi

the..esliye...

maan smiled feeling like winning d match...

geet - bas aur phir mumma sone chali gayi...

maan - chalo..koi to hai jispar tumhara asar kam pada hai..

geet - kya kaha aapne...

maan - kuchh b to nahi..

geet - mujhe sunayi deta hai

maan - to fir puchh kyu rahi ho...

geet angrily - oughhh...leave it

maan smiled...

geet - aap abhi tak soye nahi..to etni der se kya kar rahe the...

maan - patang uda raha tha...

geet - aap ko patang udani aati hai..??

maan - geet u r impossible...

geet - chaddo..aap har waqt gussa karte rehte ho...mujhe nahi karni aap se baat...

maan - geet samajho na...mujhe gussa karne ki aadat hai...

geet mocking him.."geet samajho na.mujhe gussa karne ki aadat hai"

maan made grumpy but cute face...

geet - aye lo..ye b koi aadat huyi...hadd hai...gussa humare upar depend karta hai..ke

hume gussa karna hai ya nahi...

maan - achha baba...nxt time gussa nahi karunga...

geet - ok..me maan leti hu...

maan - maa ??

geet - wo wala maan...aapka naam nahi...

maan - maan to maan hota hai..chahe ye wala ho ya wo wala...

geet - aap na mujhe confuse kar rahe ho..i meant...accept...

maan - ab tum bahane bana rahi ho...

geet angrily - aap ke pass har baat ka jawab hota hai na...??

maan - obviously...i never loose...

geet - ok mr-i-m-made-to-win...

maan smiled - geet...

geet - hmm...

maan lovingly - tumhe aaj..i mean...

suddenly both went silent...

geet gulped her saliva wid a sudden lump of blushness filled her throat...

while maan wasn't sure about her reaction...

maan could hear her raising her beats..dat was beating only 1

name.."maan...maan...maan..."

maan smile a bit loving her reaction...

geet tried to take out a wod from her throat...

geet - woh...

her face was totally turned to pink wid fear a bit..thinking..how to answer dat she loved

watever happened between dem..like she lived dat moment...

maan - bolo na geet..kya tumhe achha nahi..

geet instantly replied - nahi...

maan smiled - matlab tumhe achha laga...

a blushing smile escaped from her lips..nodding yes...

silly her..how can he see her head nodding yes through d phone...

but like a magic...

he felt her nod in yes...

maan smiled fullheartedly...

geet - i never b4...

maan interrupted stopping her from completeting dat sentence...

maan - i know...no 1 can touch u other dan me...

geet smiled loving his possessive nature...

she knew how stubborn n impossible he is..when it cums to her...

...

suddenly d whole atmosphere became uneasy...

both were unsure wat to say ..n wat to not...

like dey were enjoying dis new feeling..new sensation...

like dey were learning 1 more chapter of love...

d shopping moment got printed on deir heart...which can never flush..it vil remain dere

lifetime...

deir 1st touch..d touch of love...

both can not deny how much dey loved dat moment...dey still get goosebumps thinking of d

moments dey shared...

maan finally decided to break dis silence...

maan - geet...

geet - hmm...

maan - tumhe dresses try ki...

geet suddenly making face.. - aye lo..yahan me etni thaki hu..aur aap chahte ho ke me wo

etni sari dresses abhi try karu...

maan - geet..mene aisa nahi kaha..par ek to dress try ki hogi...

geet - nahi na..jab me ghar ke andar aayi to mumma ne mujhe dekh liya..phir hum dono ne

bate ki aur fir me sone aagayi..

maan - haan haan...agar me phone nahi karta to tum to aaram se ghod bechkar so jati..

geet - maan aap b na..pehli baat to me ghod bechkar nahi soti...dusri baat me aapke phone

ka wait kar rahi thi..kyunki mere pass apka no. nahi tha...aur 3ri baat...mujhe aapki

bahot yaad aa rahi thi...

maan smiled loving her innocense...

maan - pehli baat...ke tum ghode bechkar hi soti ho..agar tum ghar me koi chor aaye aur

wo tumhe jagane ki koshish kare..ki dekho me chori kar raha hu..to tum usse b datogi..jo

karna hai karo..par mujhe sone do...dusri baat...mene tumhara phoen try kita tha..but it

was cuming busy..aur shayad tumhae call waiting bhi activate nahi kiya hai...aur 3ri

baat...mujhe tumhari jyada yaad aa rahi hai...par u cnt do anything..kyunki is hafte

tumhe project topic bhi select karna hai aur enhi 2 hafto me complete b...coz aftyr dat u

vil get busy wid brij's wedding...m i right ?

geet got frozen...

how he alws knew everything about her...everything means literally everything...

she finally came back to conscious...

geet - aap ko har baat kaise pata hoti hai...

maan - dis is d way i m...

geet made baby face...

maan smiled knowing she must thinking of asking for my help...

geet - 2 week me kaise complete hoga...i didn't even decided d topic...

maan - hmm..to ab ms-i-got-in-danger kya karengi...

geet made baby smiley face.. - aap meri help karoge na...

maan smiled expecting d same - hmm..i can think...

geet suddenly made angry face - wat..??..u can think..u hav to help me..n dats final...

maan - ok MAM...

geet smiled...

1:45am

maan caringly - ab haath ya pair me dard nahi hota na...

geet - nahi baba...ab dard nahi hota...

maan - geet how can u do sumthing so stupid...

geet - aap dar gaye the...??

maan - mar gaya tha geet..u can never understand...

geet litle choking to breath..feeling like crying - to fir aap mujhe dobara chhod kar

nahi jaoge na...

maan felt a sudden chock in his breath too - nahi jaan..i can never even think of it..or

else i vil die...plz stop crying na...

geet cutely snizzing her nose - im not crying...

maan smiled - achha to ye nose red kyu ho gayi hai...

geet - aapk ko phone me se dikhta hai kya...?

maan - thoda thoda...

geet surprisingly - kya...

pulling spread till her neck...

maan almost laughed hearing d noise of spread...

maan - geet...tum meri har baat ko sach maan leti ho...

geet - haan..aap galat kabhi keh hi nahi sakte...

maan smiled - geet...u r actually impossible...

geet mocked like him - dis is d way i m...

maan smiled loving her cute nature...

he can fall for every single emotion of her...every single funny face of her...every sec

of her...

2:15am

maan - geet ab tum so jao..kafi thak gayi ho...

geet - mujhe nind nahi aa rahi...

maan lovingly - ye kya baat huyi geet..tumne change bhi kiya ya nahi...

geet - nahi...

maan naughtily - do u want me to open d zip of ur dress for u again...

geet blabbered - haan...

both went silent instantly...

maan was happy..delighted...surprised...shocked...not sure of d emotion..but was feeling

like goosebumps

while geet went into dard pinkish shade blushing..thinking..wat stupid she said...

"ohh god..ye mene kya bol diya...m so stupid..wo mere bare kya soch rahe honge..heyy

babaji..plz help me na..plzzz.." geet was mad in thoughts...

maan in husky n romantic voice - i wud hav loved to...but right now..m at home MAM...so u

only hav to do d honour...

geet felt goosebumps in her stomach...

geet blushed - me majak kar rahi thi...

maan - par me nahi...

geet - mujhe nind aa rahi hai...

maan - bahane mat banao...

geet - mujhe change karna hai...

maan - i said i wud hav loved to..par is waqt tumhe khud apni help karni hogi...

geet - wohh...byeee

she cut d call instanly...blushing..hiding herself in spread...

she just loved wat just happened between dem...

she wanted to say yes..n she said...dat loved her alot...

she feeling goosebumps went to asleep..hiding herself in his thouts...

...

while on other hand...

maan couldn't stop smiling...

he was happy like anything...

coz from evening onwrds..he was litle scared of hos won act...

he knew..he did a more..he shouldn't hav done dat...

ofcorse she is his..but still dey just started to know each other..deir love has yet to

many more flavors of life...

deir relationship is yet to get dipper...

he was scared thinking wat she might b thinking of him...

he trusted her moredan himself...but d scare of loosing her was making him dead...

but d way she accepted him...

he just loved dat wrd from her lips...

he was relieved...

he felt like just go dere..n hug her tightly..taking in her scent..as he was terribly

missing her..though just few moments b4 dey talked...

he loved her 4 wat she is...

d way she got ready to change her dressing style without a single complein..he loved her

even more...

he is willing to loose his every breath for her n only her...

d way she accpeted his feeling for her...he respeted her even more...

deir understanding was beyond any limit...

just liek deir love...

dey understand each other...

each other's feeling...

how sweetly she accpeted d overburst of his feeling...he couldn't never stop for fall

her new new acts daily...

every new secong she cum up doing sumthing which wud make hil fall for her

more...

totally drenteched in her thouts...

he didn't even knew..wen he fell asleep...

...

aftr lectures...

d gang sitting in canteen..doing chit-chat...

nisha - ranbir plz order jaldi leke aana...

ranbir - me hi wahan pe part time pe kaam karna shuru kar deta hu...

nupur - ye achha idea hai...esi bahane tera duniya me aane ka kuch to istemal ho

jayega...

ranbir - par tera to abhitak koi estemal nahi huva hai..tu b join karle...

nupur was about to wak him...wen...

geet - stop it guys...

mayank - any1 decided topic...

annie - i think we can make a very well project on d skill of communication..

geet - i think she is right..we can deepen d project very well...

nisha - but still we need to think of sum more topics too...just for safe case...

ranbir - wat about d new series of technologies...

nupur - its again a goot topic...

i think we shud search for both topic..

geet - right...n den v can decided..which 1 vil do better...

mayank - fine..all we hav only dis evening..to search how much we can...

ranbir - ok..i geet n nishu vil search on new series of technologies...

annie - ok n we three vil search on other...

nupur - ok tum dono mere ghar pe sham ko aa jana..we vil search...

geet - ya..aur tum dono mere ghar pe

ranbir - as usual MAM...

annie - btw..tumhare ghar pe kaun kaun hai nupur...

everything went silent instantly...

annie didn't understood anything...

all she could see was teary n angry face of nupur...

nupur didn't reply..instead...left d place instantly...

annie looked at every one wid questioning face...

mayank didn't dare to answer any questin but left to follow nupur...

annie hav never seen dis sight of her...

she alws nupur blabbering..laughing fighting..talking...but dis was sumthing new..n scary

as annie felt...

annie - mene kuchh galat kahan kya...

geet - u shudn't hav said dat...

annie - m sorry...par y she got angry...i felt she was crying...

ranbir - actually she has only her dad left in her family...

annie - m sorry..

nishu - 1 n half years ago..she lost her whole family...

geet - she had her mom dad n her small sis gunjan in her family..to whom she loved most

in d world...

annie - oohk..so wat happened to dem...

nisha - actually...sum yrs ago..nupur's dad sent gunjan to newyork forcefully for her

studies...which nupur didn't like at all...a sudden hatradeness took place in her

heart for her dad...while she loved her mom n sis more...

ranbir - n dere...gunjan got in love wid a boy named samrat..nupur was very happy for

her...but nupur's dad got angry..n sent nupur's mom to bring her back...

annie - oohk...fir

nisha - gunjan her mom were cuming back..samrat was also wid dem..as he wanted to talk to

mr.bhushan..wanted to convince dem...but everything went too different...

geet - d flight dey were cuming crashed...n no1 survived...

...

annie - omg...

ranbir - from dat day onwrds..she started hating her father even more...dey stay in

different homes...

annie - poor gal..

geet - ya..it was only mayank..due to which she is normal 2day..or else dat incident was

to scary for her to handle...but deir love came as survival for her happiness...

nisha - true yaar..mayank loves her most...n she is happy to hav atleast sum1 in her

life...

...

everything went silent...

annie felt guilty very much guilty...

not for asking nupur about her family...

but for thinking of mayank in dat way...

she hated herself for being so selfsh...

"mayank is d only person nupur hav in her life now..but i...i tried to take

mayank...though i never tried it..but still i felt for him..dat was so srong..ohh

god..plz forgive me for dis 1ce...plzz god plz..."

annie decided she vil never cum in between dis couple...

dey r made for each other..n she is nobody to seperate dem...

annie - kya wo mujse bahot naraz hogi...

nisha - nahi yaar...sham tak uska mood thik ho jayega..fir woh khud hi sorry bol

degi..for getting angry on u...

geet - chil yaar..just love her like a frnd..all she need is love...

all gave a hug of together]ness to each other...

n left...

Precap: keep guessing ????😛
heyy frnds...
i again request...

plz plz plz do COMMENT all...

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Lovely update dear. Do continue soon.
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loved MAANEET'S CONVO ……☺️

AMAZING UPDATE ……👏

PLZZZ UPDATE SOON …… 😊
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Pls pls pls add me to ur pm list!!!
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awesome...

loved the convo of maaneet...

noopur's story is really sad...glad that annie came to know n decided to stay away...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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