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Posted: 14 years ago
add me to u'r pm list. u'r ff has alot of parts so i'm reserving my comments for now.
btw i luv u'r leher and brij 🤗
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hey ya awesomeee ff 😊jus finished readin thread one...can u plss post the link of thread 2 on your start page plsss ⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Mishty, so happy to see you back. Missed your updates a lot. Sorry to have not commented for so long.

The updates were lovely. Loved the love, passion, pain and eager in both Maan and Geet to be with each other. Loved the possessiveness that you have potrayed. Loved the anger and pain when they talk about someone else as special. Loved the way Geet forgets to feel the pain in her hand when Maan is with her. In short it was a lovely update.🤗

Phir, Geet ki mischief ka kya kehna. The whole family which came to see Nisha ko aisa dara diya, that they ran away.🤣🤣 I was laughing holding my stomach. And Maan ke ho hosh hi ud gaye seeing what his Love can do. WOW.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Shopping ka to kya kehna. Again another mischief to be with her beloved. The shopping was indeed very romantic. The way she came to know his name.

Loved every bit of your updates. Worth the wait. Please update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
When are you going to update the next part dear?
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Just red al the 41 parts in one go...wonderful FF pls add
Me to ur pm list pls pls pls
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Posted: 14 years ago
IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me..

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...

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Part 42



she accpeted eveything he demanded...

everything he wished..she gave in willingly...without any coplain...wothout any
condition...
she didn;t even to see his face..neither to know his name..until he himself tells her in

his most beautifull way...
way else she needed...her love is dere woth her n she trusts him blindly...
he is her prince..only he...
dats all she needed to know...
n she knew it
...

maan's hands completely snaked her waist..making her lost in his embrace...

while his lips softly touch d uppermost skin of her back just b4 d scalp starts...
she felt as if sumbosy just picked her from dis world n dropped her to a very different

world of love...she shivered wid d simple touch of his lips..like it vil last on her
body for ever..like it vil never vanish...
maan breathed in her hairs..taking all d deadly toxic scent of her body...
his heart throbbed in his chest making her hear his fast heartbeats...
soon his touch replaced by a gentle n smooth kiss...
d 1st intimate kiss..1st way to feel d pleasure of having each other close...
...
her heart stopped wid his kiss...gentle yet lusciosu..full of love n authority...
like he has d right to touch...
ofcorse he has...only he has...
he is so stubborn..so possesive dat he cnt even handle umbody looking at her...he vil

kill dat person on d spot..toucing is next to ipossible...
all he could understand is he is in love wid d most beautifull princess on d earth...his

princess...

his kiss seemed endless...as his lips made its ways down..kissing every inch of her

skin..down down...making her insane in his touc..making her react back..maon..breath

harder dan ever..feel his effect...
his kiss didn't end till it reach his way till d end of open chain...
he touched her...
he kissed her...
he made her his..she was alwz...
all words sounded sweeter dan honey...
d words dat dey touched each other blissed deir minds...
his kisses still didn't stop..as again dey made deir way upwrds..finding new corners..new

places...searching each n every single beat of her...
she felt as if she is lost under his spell..under his lagic...
he is actually a magician...
...
while maan was in d state of pleasure...
he is loving his love..sounded so soothing to his heart...
he grabbed her more toghtly in his emreace enough to make her open her eyes n get locked

in his gaze...
she feared to broke d gaze...
is it a dream..dat if i vil broke d dream n he vil vanish...
no...both cnt let dat happne...
it has to b truth...
having each other is all dey wanted till deir last breath...
...
maan kissing her madly...
heaven...!
could she ever ask for anything else...!
he kissed her gently..lovingly...exposing every part of her back to his eyes n

lips...he stopped at place where he stared...
he close his eyes...
he was panting..to get his breath back...
as far as he knows..he didn't even breaths between d kisses wid d fear of not having her

even for a secong...
geet glanced at eyes-closed maan...
she lovingly put her hand on his snaked hands around her waist...
tilting litle back..to access him more...
to let him know..how much she liked it..rather loved...
being loved by d person u love d most..sound most romantic thing in d world...
he slowly open her eyes to noticed her red pik combi cheeck wid blush n a pleasant

happiness n spark in her eyes...
he was totally mesmerized by her beauty...her red cheeck..her magical white milky

skin...everything seemed so beautifull to his eyes...
like he hav never seen anything beautyfull n delicate dan dis...
he alwz knew how delicate his princess is..but dis was far above his imagination...
he was sure she is made of milk n silk...dats only dese two things...nothing else...
he felt as if his lips has becum smooth dan ever b4 aftr toucing her skin...
his heart relished in happiness of having her...

...
he slowly slipped his head in d right hollow of her neck...adjusting himself proerly...
closed his eyes..feeling her to d core...
geet smiled...carrasing his hairs gently wid her fingers...
der didn't even bother about time...neither anything else...
maan gently bite her ear making her moan softly...n waited for her reaction in

mirror...
geet made naughty angry face...
making maan smile more kising dat bite part...
maan whispred in her ear teasing her senses - i wanna see u in dis dress...
geet sweetly smiled
but didn't know how to move towrds trail room...
as her back was bare n she cnt move like dis in front of him...
geet - wohh...
maan enjoyed her mumbleness...
maan seducingly whispered - woh kya...
geet didn;t know how to ans..top of dat his touch was making her creazy...
his tight snake on her waist..n his head in her neck...
she felt as if dis moment could last endless...
byt maan slowly turned her to face him...
she turned looking down due to blush...
maan made her chin up wid his finger...
her gaze meet his...
maan gently SAID IN VERY ROMANTIC BUT GENTLE words...

" geet...me MAAN...jiske dil me emotions ke liye koi jagah nahi thi...ya kahoo jiske

pass dil hi nahi tha...wo aaj in feeling me vishwas rakhne laga hai..aur iski vajah

tum ho...me nahi janta ke ye kaisa ehsaas hai..iska naam kya hai..is jatate kaise

hai..par kuchh to hai geet...kuchh to khaas hai...geet..tum mujse sharmane ki darane

ki koi jarurat nahi hai...tum mujhe daat sakti ho...mujhe zagad sakti ho...mere sath

kuchh b kar sakti ho...kyunki tume haqq hai geet..."

geet was totally lost into his eyes...
unknowingly her hand slided on his cheek giving him warm feeling...
maan smiled...

"..me samjta hu..ke humara rishta abhi utha gehra nahi ban paya hai...tumujhe samaj rahi

ho aur me tumhe..."
geet smiled...
maan naughtily.." haan wo alag baat hai ke tumhe samjhna matlabbb..."
geet wid funny angry expression.."mujhe samajhana matlab...kya..."
maan lovingly.." tum samjhna mushkil hai...har pal me ek naya andaz..pal me gussa hoti

ho..aur agle hi pal muskura deti ho..."
geet smiled...
maan wid seriousness..." geet...me hu tumhare sath..har lamhe ke liye..mujhe ajnabi mat

samjhna kabhi...ye jo badmash dil hai na tumhara..."
geet blushed...
maan..." wo sirf mere liye hai..sirf mera hai...hum dono me zizak..dar..shram in bemani

cheezo ke liye jaga hai hi nahi..."
geet's eyes litle filled...
maan naughtily..just to cheer up her mood.." jaga kaise hogi..tum etni motti jo ho..."
geet suddenly made gol-gappa face..looking at herself in d mirror...
geet - aye lo..me motti hu..??
maan smiled...hugged her from back..." jaisi b ho..meri ho..samajhi..."
geet looked down wid his wid his closeness...she instantly reminded of d moments dey

shared sum time b4...
her cheek went in dark pinkish shade wid blush...
maan knew wat is she thinking...
istantly turned her picking her up in his arms in a jerk...
geet surprised wid his sudden move...
b4 she could understand...
maan took her to d trial room...
n put her down...
geet was still blushing...
maan lovingly kissed her forehead..whispering in her ear.." i wanna see u in dis

dress..remember..only 5 min..i cnt wait more dan dat..."
geet just nodded...
maan left d trail room...
waiting out for his princess impatiently...
10 min...
geet came out...
in d trial room...she was busy in her thout..how vil he react watching her in dis

dress...her senses were already being higher thinking of love moments dey shared...vil

he b surprisedlooking me..vil he b happy..vil he like dis dress on me..how vil he

react...millions of questions were running in her mind...
n now she is out...
her eyes just popped out...
is she at same place from where she went to trial room 10 min b4...
aur dere is another door for trail room n she came sumwhere else...
her sensed defeated till she find maan...

d thing is room was far far diffrent dan how she left to trila room...
all collection of dresses...sofa...everything was disappeared...
dere was 1 dinnet table in d middle...
beautifully decorated wid white satin cloth wid 1 fresh red rose at d centre in a thin

slender vask...
room was lighetened wid spot lights of different shades n cadles at required

places...
her eyes blessed wid d sudden change in room n dat so beautifull change...
room was full of red n white roses...
geet was litle wondered y only two colors..y not other...
her all thouts were distracted by d person who very gently entered from dark shade to

lighetened area...
geet was mesmerized by his killer looks n burning eyes in spot lights...

on d other hand...
maan was totally thrilled wid d beautifull sight he was staring...
he was sure..he would never seen sumthing so beautifull..so delicate...just like onl fod

him..god has sent a angel to brighten his life wid love n only love...
he couldn't take of his eyes from her...
she was sparkling like a combnation of fresh white n blue combined flower which was

actually impossible...but it was happening..he was watching it...
d most beautifull rose of d world...standing in front of him..for him...
he was ready to hug all d thorns dat were alaround wid happiness for dis delicate

rose...
but to his surprise dis rose was thornless...
how could sum1 be so beautifull..so seren...so delicate..but he knew..its his princess..n

no1 can b ever like her...
she was uniqually came for him directly from heaven...
his princess...
D MAAN SINGH KHURANA started believing in fairytales...hmm..dats was sumthing

new.sumthing different..sumthing special...
but wen it cum to his GEET...nothing else matters other dan her...

...
his unlimited love thouts came to an end wen geet stpped further to decrease d distance

between dem...
finally dey moved near each other...
standing in front of each other...
d prince OF WORLD...standing infront d most gorgeous PRINCESS of whole world...d

most delicate 1...
is dere any need for sumthing else...
if possible..dey would just marry wid each other now itself to b each others forever...n

ever...

...
maan gently raised his hand in front of her...
geet just stared at him in amusement..

...

spoilers : y geet got amused...????..any1 knows...O_o

...

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love
MishTy

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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AWSOME ...VERY WELL WRITTEN...👏
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wow Fantabulous part
so romentic
loved it
pls cont sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx

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