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Posted: 14 years ago
Sad update yar continue next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update.
plzz...let maan meet geet.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey it was amazing
Love it
Kuch karo i can't see maneet like this
Very nice part dear
Love this mauhhhhhhhhh
Wonderful
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Can't wait for the next
Plz update soon
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😍waiting 4 u to update
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i read the story.... i liked it so much... nice story line.😊....
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Posted: 14 years ago
IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me..

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...

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Part 27


maan reached HANDA haveli...
he himself was bleeding in hands...
his eyes were red wid pain oozing out...
he stopped outside d gate...
not understanding wat to do next...
he was shivering every second thinking of her away from him..in pain...hurt...
he very well new...he cnt just go inside n ask for her..knock her door..n say sorry...
...he was literally thoutless not getting a single way to contact her...
he wanted to see her.no matter wat others vil think...
he wanted to feel no matter how vil he deal wid others...
he wanted to touch..wanted to scream dat she is his...only his...he can never let her hurt...
as he has possessed her...her soul...
he wanted to make sure..she is fine...not even a single hurt...touched her petal body...
at times he knew..he is d reason dat is hurt..mentally physically...
his heart crushed in million pieces wen he heard from annie dat she didn't cum for lec...which he just presumed in his anger...
he gave importance to his mind...his anger...didn't think of her once...
wat might she ging through...
he didn't wanted to think anymore...
he knew..d more he vil think..d more he vil b blank...
he was just looking at her house..for a single look of her...
...
he has to meet her anyhow...
he went inside hidingly...
sumhow reached her room...
he was maan singh khurana...her love..he had to know her room..her place..every single think of her...even her soul...
for his luck..d window was open...

...
lights were off...
but few spot lights were still lightening...
all looked like haunting...tarrified...
his heart contradicted fear..feeling d surrounding...
...
he puts his foot on floar very calmly not to disturb her...
his heart knew..watever he doing may create a problem...
but at dat moement..nothing else seemed to matter other dan his angel...who was hurt...his princess...whose delicate heart was angry on him...
...
he was lost in her thout...
wen a broken glass peice injured his foot...
he made a small hiss out...
dat hurt made him realize...d whole room was filled..scattered wid broken things..most of glass...
few red marks were visible in spot lights...
his heart sinked watching dem...
he forgot his injury...
his body started paining wid d thout of her injury...
nothing was normal in d room...
her sweet...n princess types room had bcum like a haunting house..wid everything broken n scattered on floar including bedsheets..pillows...snaps...broken glass of dressing table...
every single thing was increasing his pain...
he closed his eyes feeling her pain...
wat she gone through from morning aftr he left...
he couldn't think of anything...
for a sec he hated himself for entering in her life...
being part of it n hurting..runing her life...
...
but his every beat knew...she is his...only his...she has to b his...
he cnt even share her shadow wid any single boody person...
...
he slowly opened his eyes...loOking up.

n he saw her...

PRECAP : he couldn't believe wat he saw...

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nxt pt - PART 28
IMP - reader, i need good response from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating...if u want more n more updates from me...dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec to LIKE n a min to COMMENT..dnt i deserve a min or ur time aftr d update ??...i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

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MishTy

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant update
luved it
way way way tooo gud do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part... plz update next part nowwwwwwwwwwww.......... plz plz pzl......... i want to see wat happend to geet... hope she'll be fine...plz update/....

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