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Originally posted by: -LoVe.KaSh-

OMG very nice update...liked the twist..cant wait for the suspense to unveil..continue soon :D

Originally posted by: Stupidcupid1234

Loved it
So many questions I have
Update soon
N thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: Simmy003

Amal!!!! I'm sooo friggen late, it's not even funny! Phew, I read all the chapters tonight, and that's what i get for not reading your FF on time mehh! 🤢 To say I LOVED your FF, would be the biggest understatement ever!! Seriously, this is not even a FF, more like a best selling novel to me!! And your updates, my god...so intense and beautiful at the same time! Riddhima and her story is so touching. And the part where her husband, who I'm guessing is our Armaan :) came...I stopped breathing for like a while haha I'm dumb ! And omg, he gave her a ring!! So sweet and heart breaking at the same time! And my god, don't tell me he's the gang leader :| which I think he is...hmmm this is getting so interesting! I swear, we can make a movie out of this one ;) Lol, but you write beautifully Amal no joke, I wish I could write as good as you :((

And thank youuu soo much for the pm, continue sending me them pweaseee

Love, Simmy<3

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

awesome part dear

Originally posted by: MaitreeluvKajen

SOMEBODY KILL HER! BEFORE I DO! I mean,Seriously!! KILL HER...'Coz Ms.AMAL IS KILLING MEEE!! NO NO NO NO NO You Can't kill me,I mean,DON'T KILL ME FOR CHIRSSAKE,DON'T!

You think this part wasn't good? What are you,Huh,Some kind of Crazy Insane Idiot whos fled from Ranchi's Pagalkhana? Okay Okay That was a bit of exxageration but whatever Ridzi,You CANNOT Underestimate Yourself like this! ( OMG,I didn't know I was so good at scolding,by God!😆) But its SERIOUSLY TRUE!

I mean,This is EVEN Better than the last part...You ARE A PRO Basket,Just admit it if you still haven't,'Coz you Totally are.The way you described Riddhima's feelings...right from the part where she's still occupied with his thoughts,his blue-eyes ( Sigh ) and HIM,then with the ring,You almost made my eyes moist..With Pride! I'm SO SO SO SO SO SO Proud of you Basket,My Bacchi <33 I LOVE YOU! You're like the best writer eveeerrr !! OMG What in the hell world was that? Indirectly involved in Smuggling..RIDDHIMA? OMGGG!! OH GOSHHH! 😲 Armaan is Mr.Mallik's son,or Mr.Mallik himself..and Chirst,What is this Arresting business? OMG PLEAASEEE Bacchi,Dun kill me!! This was one a very VERYY bad cliffhanger !! 😭 But it was so OUT-OF-THE-WORLDly written that Words aren't enough...As always!! ( Hey Bhagwannn!! Yeh ladki hamesha aisa hi karti hai,Makes me jaw drop! I can't help it !!)

Back to my Threatening Mode,UPDATE WITHIN THIS WEEK ITSELF 'COZ IF YOU DON'T YOU'RE SERIOUSLY GONNA BE KILLED. I'm With Medzi for Killing You! If You Dun update...I will NOT talk to you. Abhi bhugto!

Still,I LOVE YOU my Angel Basket! <33

Love,

Your Armaan/Bacchi Maitree😳

Originally posted by: shaaz_91

OMG...what a twist
u seriously hv got one creative mind...👍🏼
n u say dis part iz not as gud as d last one...so let me tell u ur ff iz reaching new peaks wid each update...woah
dis waz so unexpected
on d whole just luvd dis one...n surprisingly vivek seems 2 b a gud character in ur ff...well time will show his true self
n offcourse riddhima's husband is still being a mystery...but luvin each n every mystery in d story
cont soon...can't wait 4 d mysteries 2 unravel
tc
shaaz

Originally posted by: mijanur

excelent writing from you.you describe riddhima's situation beautifully.pleas update soon.thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: jiyaa

nice part but why police case all of a sudden????? bring AR face to face soon

update soon

Originally posted by: fatzfathi

hey amal tat was an amazin part...👏 n shockin too😲😛😆 poor girl stil couldn c him..!😭 wen r u plannin to make tem meet eachother??? ur readers r also waitin 4 teir face-to-face meetin along wit her..!😳

It killed me that I couldn't see him one bit..Not a glance..Not even a gaze of his eyes which starred my dreams so often..I wanted just one second of them..Just one second to thank him for lifetime of love..I wouldn't be able to thank him in words..Because English just couldn't put emotions in the right words..I was so against fate that he came so close to me and yet the prospect of seeing him was out of chance..😍

I touched the small rock that laid so gracefully upon my finger..I looked at it so lovingly that it be my child..It felt immensely great as much as i was Queen of the World..That little diamond there was the flawless reminder for me that he came back FOR ME..He came back TO ME..And that I wasn't dreaming..❤️❤️❤️

i simply loved d above 2 paragraphs...its really touchin n u wrote it so beautifully...!👏👏👏

hey y tis police case 4 her all of a sudden..??😲 ok i understand 'Amihdir' id d reverse of ridhima..but ter can b many of d same name naa...ten y did tey chose her?? is ter any other reason behind it??😕 now wil he come n save her frm police??😳 so many doubts...!! 😔 do continue soon..!

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

oh, wow!!!

that is very interesting!!!!!
I really want armaan in the story now!!!

pls bring him in!

Thank you for the update.