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perfectsmile

@perfectsmile

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Posted: 14 years ago

#651

Hey,

Sorry for commenting late, had been busy.
Just caught up with the last two parts.
very well written. Riddhima's thoughts were portrayed beautifully.
wow, he gave her a ring? Thats so sweet. I hope he comes back to her soon.

and then at her office, LOL Sid here? haha and that too like an exact copy of Muski. thats interesting.

and where did Riddhima land herself into? Arrested by Vivek?? Thats awful. Hope this vivek guy doesn't do anything to her.

Update soon...

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Rhea

@Rhea.KaJen

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#652

Wow!
Amal you are AMAZING!
This was srsly too good!
Hmm...
Ridhima and Amihdir...hmm...
I wonder wht will happen next!
Amal cont. soon plzz...
Love
Rhea

Edited by RheaKSG4eva - 14 years ago

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Euphoria.

@Euphoria.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#653

hey amal!
hehe i actually did read the part before you pmed me but i had been too busy to comment so am sorry for the late comment dear!
and hey coming to your part! gosh it was FAB! so i am guessing that armaan is involved in the smuggling business and that's why he told riddhima that it was not worth waiting for him!
and OMG you're brilliant! the part about the riddhima being the only link was completely unexpected! you are a fantastic writer and you really kept me hooked to the story from the very start to the end! great job and am eagerly waiting for the upcoming parts so do continue soon! do pm me when you update the next time :)

anu 😃

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Afia Aisf Mahmood

@-Afia-

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#654

Hey Amal 😊

Just Started Reading You FF Today and Its Really Good.

I Loved The Concept Its Unique

I Couldn't Figure Out "Amihdir" Is "Ridhima" Poor Her

Well Now Can't Wait For the Next Part Because I'm Blank I Can't Think Whats Goona Happen and I Really Wanna Know 😆

Looking Forward To The Next Update

Take Care 🤗

-Afia

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pari_044

@pari_044

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Posted: 14 years ago

#655

hey der just read de part...it was awesomee..luvd it...
looking forward to read the next parts.
continue sooonnn

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#656

nice part.
I hope everythng goes well with ridhima.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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abandoned

@abandoned

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: Medzi_ARian...
*GASPS* *FAINTS* *THUD*

Yeh kya tha?! 😲 Riddhima was "INDIRECTLY" related to that smuggling thing?! Aur kitne shocks dene hain? Jitne bhi dimaag mein ho na, abhi ke abhi bol! I can't handle too many massive heart attacks, alright!

Anyways, the part was awesome! Loved how you described Riddhima's feelings and her interaction with others. The last bit was a shock! Smuggling? Really? Amihdir? Please don't tell me the so called leader was ARMAAN MALLIK! Which reminds me missy. Armaan is a 'Mallik' in this FF right? Because if he is, then he's the son of Mr. Mallik. But if he's the son of Mr. Mallik, then there is no reason for him to get in that smuggling business because the smugglers, obviously, do that for money and if Armaan's a 'Mallik' then he doesn't need it! But if he isn't a 'Mallik' then he probably does have a reason. So if he isn't a 'Mallik' then most likely he's the leader of the gang. But why did he use the anagram of Riddhima's name? Amidhir? Did he come back to trap Riddhima by giving her the ring? Or did he just come to warn her to stay away from him?

UGHHH! MS. AMAL INSERT MIDDLE AND LAST NAME HERE! IF YOU DON'T UPDATE THIS FF IN LESS THAN A WEEK, I WILL SPAM THIS FF AND SEND YOU ONE MILLION PM'S TELLING YOU TO UPDATE! UNDERSTOOD!?

-Medzi ❤️

MEDZI DEAR🤗hru???Deary first of all super glad to see another long long long comment from you..You know you actually make me feel that what I am writing is a super best selling novel or something as huge as that..Yeh overaction..Hehe..I like it..😆..Well Ridhima is not in this thing at all..But she has been pushed into it..Well shocks toh abhi baki hai mere dosth..Thisis just the beginning of a saga baby..Tee Hee..Thank You soo much sweets..I am glad you like what I write..You think sensibly and all your questions will be answered..I dont want to reveal anything at the moment.You will have to wait a hell long for that..OOOHHH..You are soo demanding Ms.Mezi..Tee Hee...I dont know..I am not sure if I can manage to update within a week..Depends on the assignments coming up..Yayaya I understood..You are tooo demanding I tell you once again..I love you still..Muah honey..<3

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applepie

@-GoogleWithMe-

Trailblazer

Posted: 14 years ago

#658

Hey dear sorry for late comments

i really loved it

awesome update

gr8 part

this ff is getting interesting a lot

u have written it well

sid really cracked me up

ridz is arrested hope nothing hapens to her

continue it soon

thanx for pm dear

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abandoned

@abandoned

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#659

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar
wow
wasnt it just superb
i totally loved this
first yu described Riddhima's emotions so well
amazing
n then, siddhant, i actually liked him
n finally the twist
it was worth it
thanks for the pm

luv
pooja

Heyya Pooja diii..Thank You very much..Glad you liked the part..Thanks again..Yeah he isnt much of a nuisance at the moment..Oh..Thanks..I am glad you liked the twist..😳..Your Most Welcome..Thank You for commenting and that too immediately..<3

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abandoned

@abandoned

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: -RabiaKSGKaJen-
Chutkii. I Effin Loved The Part. The Way Yuw Described Riddhima's Feelings, How Shes Goin Through Is Amazing. Mwaahh. Babe Love It. Hmm Sid Is Nyc In Here And Hope He Remians Lyk Dat Only. :P OMG Riddhima Da Leader Of Da Gang. This Is Gettin F***in Intresting Man. God I Really Wanna Read Da Nxt Part.. BTW Yuw Are Cleva With Da Name Thing. Hehehe. Yuw Have To Update Sooon

Heyya Rabia DIi..Thank You so much..Super Glad that you loved the part..😳..I am flattered..Thanks a million..Hehe..keep hoping..I dont plan to get him so bad in this FF but lets see my heads working is weird and funny.No promises..OMG..No di..She isnt the gang leader..Its just a clue that came to the police..Please dii..Dont get confused..She is innocent..Tee Hee..I will update ASAP..Thank You..Glad you liked the name part..Sure will..<3

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