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Posted: 14 years ago
waitin and waitin and waitin
waitin n waitin n waitin some more 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍
(but not for sam's parts...unless maan tells her about him & geet)
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Posted: 14 years ago
luved the update <3
cant wait to see maan and geet at the party together :)
waiting . . . .
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow weeee!! nice update!

thanks PM and update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting i really thought u r leaving for a while i understood study is more important. Well waiting for the update.

Raman
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Posted: 14 years ago



***PARADOX***
part 44
pls do comment & press the like button' ty for all the love and suport
xxx
I DEMAND COMMENTS & LIKES😆
LOVE u all……
THANKS FOR ALL THE LOVE & SUPPORT….



Shoria- mr mathoor held a party! I think it's something we all want to... I mean specially you... With maan! Geet looks at him & smirks! She takes her phone & calls him instantly....

It's a couple party... & god knows how many girls already asked maan to this party! Since morning sam kept saying no after no! To every girls! She was on her desk... With 4 phone... Just picking it up & saying no!

Maan looks at the invitation card... He wonders to make his & geets relationship! Maybe tell the whole world they were about to get engaged in this party... He flicks the card! Thinking if today! Or make it special... He concluded make it more special... But this couple party... He... Will she be free?... Maan closes his eyes! When did this formality came in between them?
Geet calls...
Maan smiles & picked it up…


Geet- hi...... I am missing you! She makes a baby face.
Maan- I love you...
Geet sat on her desk flicking the card... Thinking how to ask! But isn't a boy suppose to ask a girl! She hesitated! Anticipating! Waiting for him to start! Geet started to get confused with her own action! When did this hesitation came in? If she wanted something she will ask for it instantly...
Maan- umm...
Geet- ehh...

Both kept quit for a minute! Not exactly sure what's going on!
Maan- this party!
Geet- yes! She snaps instantly... When you picking me up!
Maan took a sigh relief... Few!- 10!
Geet- perfect! I have to go now! Maan could here Shoria Over the phone... Talking about some odd clints & meeting! Maan guessed she is really busy!
Maan wanted to talk more! He have missed her so much! But... He didn't like his wife being a business women! Busy 24 hours! But it's geet! He could never say no! She is cleaver! & Handa industry doing extremely well!
Geet- I will call you back! She hangs up!

Sam walks in! Sam- I hate your phone!
Maan- umm!
Sam- I have said no to 400 girls!
Maan- umm!
Sam- & it's still ringing!
Maan- umm!
Sam looks at maan! Who seemed lost somewhere!
Sam- are you alright?
Maan- yes! Maan looks back at some of his file!
Sam- maan! You can tell me! I am not just a employee! I am a good friend of your as well!

Through out this 2 years! Maan did keep his talk to minimal to everyone except geet & sam! He hardly gets time with geet! Even though he complained every second! But it seems like she is not that bothered!
Sam- maan!
Maan- yea! Just thinking! Nothing els! Anyway.... Umm... I am leaving early for the party!
Sam- umm... R u taking me?
Maan looked at her! She attended every single party since he have started business! It looks bad! But geet... She have never! In any way... It's geet!
Maan- if you want! But I....
Sam- that's perfect... See you there at 10!
Maan- umm....
Before maan could say another word sam walks out!

Handa office was crowded! Busy! Geet was Loosing her cool... While maan at khurana just couldn't concentrate! He shouted at everyone! There were no discipline. He scold shilla off! For not looking after it properly! He was in annoying mood! Not sure why! Was is because geet seems not to care of his restlessness & the urge of taking! Or was it.... He just want to shout at them! More like taking his frustration out on them!
Sam kept her distance! She knew well he probably had argument with his girl friend! He always like this when he talks to her on the phone! But failes to explain her anything & takes all the anger out on us! What's our fault? Sam wondered. Cursing that girl! Just getting them scold.

Shila stood in-front of maan. Twisting her high hill as she looked at the floor.
Shila- Ae aiti ku ahea? Her waqt dathi rahi ti hi!!!! Egg! Wish I could through some egg on him. Awww... Good idea. He will stink off egg & then stay in bathroom for week to wash it off! We are free. She smiled within!!!
Maan- SHILA! SHIlA! Are you listing? She was lost in her own world... Uhh...
Shila- egg!
Maan- what? He makes a face...
Shila- no! No.. Bro! I mean sir! Ehh...
Maan- whatever! Out from my side!
Shila- ok! Shila took a shig relive & walked out.

It was 7pm!
Sam- I will wait for you to pick me up!
Maan- umm!
Sam- is that alright?
Maan- yes! Sure! Maan wasn't sure exactly what to say... It looks bad if he say no...

Maan makes his way to khurana haveli... Geet calls...
Maan- hi jaan... He was dying to here her voice...
Geet- missing me? She smiles...
Maan- bohot.
Geet- acca suno...
Maan- bolo...
Geet- what colour you like on me the best?
Geet stood in-front of her big wardrobe in her bath rub! She wasn't sure what to weare. She wanted to wears what maans like the best. This will be there first public appearance togather. She wanted to be the best.
Maan- sabe. He smirks....
Geet- majak soro na.... Kanci colour?
Maan- I am not joking. Truly... Every colour.
Geet- maan.... She smiles & makes a baby face.
Maan- kha na Sab colours...
Geet- fine.... What type of cloths?
Maan- now you asking me everything? Like you don't know? He replies...
Geet- mujce pata hi... Per I like to here from your mouth over again & again...
Maan smiles- acca...
Geet- ha... Now kaho na....
Maan- umm... Sari!
Geet- tik hi... Ab jewlary!
Maan- if I tell you everything... What's the surprise?
Geet- maan!!!!!! I am the surprise. Whole geet Handa is the surprise...
Maan- acca....
Geet- ha... Now tell me what you like me on best....

Suddenly two hands hugs her from the back... Geet jumps then relax... Knowing exactly who it is. He inhales all her wet hairs fragments... Slowly untying her bath rub... & taking it off gradually. It drops round her feet.

Maan- I like you on your birthday cloths. He smirks….






next- before party…..
Thanks for all the love & support
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hope you all liking this'
heheh
pls do leave me some comments'
& sorry for the fals news earlier…..


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Posted: 14 years ago
Naughty naughty maan! This going gr8. Loving there love.
It's so beautiful. But scared about maans family! MD! Poast! Umm! Do update soon! Scary!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved da update
I don't like sam she goes wit Maan
She need a life
I hope sam doesn't fall in love for Maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
super awesome pls cont soonnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it..
but maan better be going to the party with Geet only no sam 😡
Edited by MsMovielover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe maan missing geet and thinks that geet is least bothered and also Sam from no where comes and asks if his going to pick her up and that to at the same time maaneet finalled looks like there's going to be some problem there and awe Sheila is so funny and cute and poor them masn taking his frustration out on them and last part naughty naughty anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

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