Destiny's Play-Pt XXXIII(Pg 144) 4/3

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#971

Originally posted by: ManEetkiDeewaNi
Thanks for the update...it was terrific...

It was very cute of Maan to buy the a sari for Geet and when she didnt know how to wear it but he did i was just laughing but at the same time it was cute....

and the temptation was their as well. When Maan did Geet's sari for her and when she accidentally exposes herself and Maan has to control....it was just superb.

And Geet understand the promise that they cant consummate until he can give her leisure. Their relationship has truly evolved.

And yes...Very young. will be in college in a year young. So marriage is a long way, true..One can manipulate in a story but has to face reality in plain truth...

Thanks for the update...cant wait for more

Yes, Maan knew how to drape a saree but Geet did not. Maaneet have truly evolved as a couple. So you are still in school? Then marriage is definitely a long way away. Reality is harsh. That's why writers like us escape into fantasy.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#972

Originally posted by: ammu5
lovely update maan can drape a saree also wow u r simply greatttttt.......

Thanks ammu. Maan has had enough training draping it for his kid sister. After all he preactically raised her up.

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vrsharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#973

hey opti

are you going to open new thread as we already reached 149 pages

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sharanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#974

Hey Opti have read all the parts over and over again!!

Ure a FABULOUS writer

Sorry that I'm not able 2 comment on each part cause i hv exams going on and access the FF thru phone

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monika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#975

awesome update dear i like it maan taking care both sweet lady this is nice and geet she is understand him more now ..awesome part like godbaharaye and sari scene he is so sweet ..

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swaram

@swaram

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Posted: 14 years ago

#976

They are so in love! Poor fellows, how they are holding back for the sake of each other!

Maan finding her irresistable in a saree !😳 Saree is such a beautiful garment, it brings out the full beauty of any woman! No wonder Maan can't keep his eyes of Geet today!😉

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#977

Originally posted by: vrsharma
hey opti

are you going to open new thread as we already reached 149 pages

I will open a new thread for the next update

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vrsharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#978

when we will get the next update :-)

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#979

Originally posted by: shaaranya
Hey Opti have read all the parts over and over again!!
Ure a FABULOUS writer

Sorry that I'm not able 2 comment on each part cause i hv exams going on and access the FF thru phone

Thanks shaaranya. No problem. All the best for your exams.