Destiny's Play-Pt XXXIII(Pg 144) 4/3 - Page 42

Originally posted by: JayaR

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oohh god!!!
it doesn't seem to stop.....
i should refrain myself from reading these kind of touchy n emotional updates....
opti you are truly world class....
how beautifully you have explained Maan's pain n his reason to not to reciprocate....

this guy is surely something else...... he is in love n thinks that he he is not capable of commitment..... hahaha.... he is surely confused.....

but not now as Sam has put some sense in him......

lovely n touchy update....
thanks dear...

Originally posted by: zahra15

omg....wat will happen nw.....wen maan will go home..there will be no geet...........wat will he do........bt i think this serves himright....if he loves her so much....he cud hav atleast confessed..........

Originally posted by: Opti

Everyone is made differently. Some find it easy to open up and some don't. Maan is of the second variety. the problem is compounded further because he himself does not understand what is going on in his mind at times.

Originally posted by: nan_10

this part remained me of a proverb

"Make hay while sunshine"

hope geet has not gone too far

Originally posted by: red135b

Now that we know how Maan feels can he persuade Geet that he's moved on from sameera and will geet believe him ? . by the way I love the twist.

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

OMG Opti. I feel so bad for Maan now. See, your one update can change everything. I was left feeling bad for Geet just a few minutes ago. Now my heart cries out for Maan.

Well, now that his mind is clear, he will find Geet too. Brilliant.

I don't know if it is still early to judge Sameera's character. But if she is good, I hope she gets someone good and settles down too. Maybe Adi since Pinki is taken in this story?

Will wait patiently to read the next update.

Originally posted by: preethia

i am totally in love with this update.............................................

muah opti i loved it amazing...............................

u know wat some parts was exactly the same things i thought thats y i told on my 1st comment that i dont wanna think wat maan said after that sentence bcoz i expected him to say the same things....................i just didnt want to tell it out bcoz i wanted to know whether u think the same as i do..................i am glad at some parts v were....................

i didnt expect sam to knock his brain well i thought some one elder or rano wud do that...............but i am glad it was sam after reading their convo i am loving this ff more.....................

wat else to say each and every word of the ff was awesome............................

but maan is going to get his shock of his life when he opens his house..................

but seriosuly i am not hinking abt anything else now....................i hv nothing in my mind just the happiness that i am glad the way i hv picturised and characterised maan u hv done the same.............ppl were scolding him and cursing him that he was avoiding her but i didnt voice my negative thoughts @ all bcoz i knew for sure the reason for his behaviour................

i dont know if i will b able to sleep now as i am eagerly waiting for the next updates...................

thank thank u for this amazing and wonderful update opti........................

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, emotional update. loved it.
but when maan wil go back, there is no geet.
update soon.