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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

i dont remember what page i had commented on for the incomp. part and honesty i'm too lazy to ggo find it, but anywayss

wow comp. part was great!

and something is fishy about ridz...

why is she so scared of armaan? and why doesnt she have a last name?

cont soon! and as for posting parts, um ot an incomp. part if that means we get to read somethinggg while waiting for the full part lol

hmm why didnt i get a pm?

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Mona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Hey really nice update..hmmm i m wondering wat kind of relationship does ridz shares with armaan's mom??and like why is she so akward or rather scared of armaan??Cant wait to figure all that out..update soon and thankx 4 the pm..

❤️MONA

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nyxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

That was just marvelous!!!

Im already so into the ff even though its just the first part, youve described everything so nicely, especially Armaans views of "the stranger". And she definetely is weird, but im sure its something related to her past...and i found the last scene so funny, when riddhima ran away because armaan was checking her out ;) Also, im actually enjoying the ff as its in Armaans view, its different and unique, and finally ill get to read something from a guys view..lol

Im also questioning the bond Armaans mom and RIddhima has...but im sure all the questions that i have and armaan has will get answered as the story moves on. I have so much more to say, but its just not coming into my head right now lol

But GREAT PART as always!

Youre an awesome writer, and contunue soonn

and also, id like an incomplete part on wed/thursday :) that would be nice...nd much much better lol :)

Edited by Armaan-KSG - 14 years ago

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Usha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

wow!

this seems interesting!

i mean riddhima seems to be a strange character!

anyway, i also would like to have the incomplete part on wednesday/thursday!

the sooner the better!

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Aakansha Agarwal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

hey awesome part
loved it!!!!!!!!!
pls cont soon

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Zarqaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

great part!

i wonder wot kind of relationship riddhima n armaans mom shares..

continue soon x

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Sara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

congrats on the new ff

its really really awesome

thankz for the pm

i am looking forward to reading it

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Suvarna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Hmmm, surprising that Ridz has no second name/family name on her PAN card.

And what's with Armaan? Why is he scaring her? Poor soul.

Am getting as curious as Armaan to know more about Riddhima and her background.

Update soooon.

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Sunita Tandel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

amazing start.
their first meeting was quite funny haha .armaan hugged riddhima thinking that she is his mom n that 2 while she was brushing her teeth😆. loved the military shorts thing.
but i'm confused about riddhima's behaviour towards armaan.
cont soon waiting 2 see what happens further n thanks for pm😊

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anushkajain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#170

awesome , fantastic.........👏⭐️
loved it 😃
the goodnight scene between AR n armaan's mom was cute as well as adorable😛
would love to have an incomplete update on wednesday n than the complete update on weekends
continue soon😊

Edited by anushkajain - 14 years ago