Chahat -2(Raj and Naina) Updated pg. 64 Part 39

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: varshita
Lovely update i mean accha tha. 😉
Thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

Naina ko jab laga ki Raj dukhi ho raha hai ye soch kar ki Vyom ka role jyada accha tha at least Raj sab keh to leta tha na Naina se to Naina ne us ko daata ki kuch bhi ho us k pati jyada acche hain. 😆
Ye baat to hai kuch khoobiyan Raj me thi aur kuch Vyom ki acchi baatein hain. 😉 😉 😉

Raj ne bhi kaha ki us ki patni ko vo bahut pyaar karta hai, 😳😳😳 😳😳😳 sweeto chit chats of Raj and Naina and the whole night passed.😛
yeah those were lovely na? 😉 😉 😉

Huda called Alekh but good that Alekh didn't tell anything to Huda otherwise he gets impulsive after all he loves his phoolan a lot.
Accha kiya, baad me to vaise bhi pata chal jaana hai na. 😆 😆 😆

But Alekh bhi kam nahi hai us ne Anvesha k baare me yaad dila hi diya us ko aur sach me ab Huda ko us ki taraf dhyaan dena chahiye na. 😆
Sach me ab Naina Naina kyoun karta hai jab us k pass ab Vyom hai to? 😡 😡 😡

To RN reached Pune Academy and ab Naina surprise ho gayi jab pata chala ki BG jaante hai Raj ki true identity k baare me. 😕😕😕
😕😕😕
Hmm but not as Raj he is as Vyom 😃 😃 😃

Par ye hai kaun jo is baat se pareshaan hai ki Naina married hai Vyom se aur ab Naina k peeche kyoun pade hain? 😲
Sab pata chal jaayega jaldi hi 😉 😉 😉

Pls yaar tu bahut late karti hai update jaldi karna is baar. 😡

Koshish karoongi jaldi update karne ka. 😉 😉 😉
Thanks darls for the comment 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18
hello di !!!!!!!!!
how are you???????????
Hi dear i am fine 😊 😊 😊

very nice update again👏
Thanks yaar 😃 😃 😃

as now i am short of words so keeping the comment at sweet short and simple and also beautiful⭐️
and continue soon...

Thanks a lot dear for all comment 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: arpita25
Good update. 👏
Thanks a lot 😊 😊 😊

Raj aur Vyom dono kaafi jyada different hai nature me aur mai samajh rahi hoon ki Naina ne yahi point out kiya hai but Raj sab se accha hai ye baat to sach hai. 👏
Yeah he is awesome as Raj and no one can deny this fact. 😊 😊 😊

Vyom k role ko bhi us ne bahut acche se nibhaya hai.😉 Loved their small chit chats and cut scenes.😉 Song u chose was lovely.😃 It is one of my fav.
Mine too yaar 😉 😉 😉

Alekh n Huda ka convo kaafi accha tha aur Alekh us ko vapas track pe le aaya.😛
Alekh sab ko theek se track pe le aata hai 😆 😆 😆

Yahan Academy pahuch to gaye hain dono par abhi to bahut kuch baaki hai par i know is baar ye sab mil kar sab theek kar lenege. 😊
Bilkul karenge na 😛 😛 😛

Pls update fast.

Thanks a lot darling for all comment 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
superb updt indeed...👏

njoyed RN and gr8 flashback as well...👏

awesome updt...👏

Thanks a lot love for comment 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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#95

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

nice again...
Thanks a lot 😊 😊 😊

naina ke dimag ki watt laga di raj ne oops...vyom ne...ha ha ha...!!! naina ka dimag vyom aur rajveer ke bich me ghume ja raha tha...!!! hona bhi chahiye...raj ne kitna bada plan banaya tha...aur naina ko bhi kano-kan khabar nahi hui is baat ki...!!! her baar voh doubt karti par us ke hath me kuch bhi nahi aata...!!! par plan bhi toh raj ka yehi tha na...😃
Akhir us ka mentor hai na jaanta hai ki kab kahan kitna dimaag lagati hai Naina to us k hissab se us ne sab lan kiya tha. 😉 😉 😉

par yeh bhi sahi hai ke naina her baar vyom ko raj samajhti thi par raj hi vyom bann kar itni bold acting karta k naina ko lagta hi nahi tha ke yeh us ke shy rajveer sir bhi ho sakte hain...😛
Sach me, Vyom k role me vo bilkul chnage tha Rajveer se to kaise samajh aata. 😆 😆 😆

naina ko raj ka propose karne ka scene baht achha tha...aur naina ka 'I LOVE YOU' bolna bhi...!!! song bilkul perfect tha situation par...koi kami nahi thi us scene par...ek dam mast tha...bole toh beautiful...😃
Thank u madam jee ki aap ko pasand aaya. 😳 😳 😳

arey haan...naina ka Raj bulana bhi baht achha tha...raj bhi kafi surprised tha par...yeh toh hona hi tha na...!!! ab kab tak naina apne pyare pati ko us ke pure naam se bulati...use toh short-cut toh karna hi tha na...😛
Na hi sir keh sakti hai ab vo Raj ko na to ye sahi hai Raj kehna 😉 😉 😉

chal ab jaldi se next part post kar...😃

Bus hone jaa raha hai update. 😉 😉 😉

Thanks a lot darling 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: pinka28
hey mahak
sorry yaar bhut dino se read nahi kiya

hopefully jaldi read ker paun

infact abhi yaad bhi nahi hai laast khan read kiya tha vo bhi dekhna padega

but bi will come back soon

Koi baat nahi aaram se padh jab time mile to. 😊 😊 😊
will be waiting for your comments. 😉 😉 😉

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Vertika Srivastava

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#97

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07
Sorry yaar,😭 u know na FC open karna aur Surya me jana mere liye to bahut jyada ho gaya na to yahan aane me late ho gayi.
It's fine yaar hota hai chal aa gayi na tu yahan ye kya kam hai.. 😊 😊 😊

Lovely and super cute update. 👏
Thanks a lot dear 😃 😃 😃

Firstly song selection was awesome and next i love all small talks of RN.😳 They are lovely and their bonding is growing stronger day by day.😉
Saccha pyaar hai, is ko koi rok nahi sakta grow karne se. 😉 😉 😉

Sach me Raj bhi na Naina k Raj ko aisa kaise bol sakta hai? 😆
ab kaun samjhaye us ko ye baat? 😆 😆 😆

Alekh bhi kaafi khush hai na dono kis shaadi kara k.😉 Huda bechara jab pata chalega us ko is baare me to kya beetegi bechare k dil par jo abhi bhi Phoolan ki itne fikr karta hai.
Haan us ko to jor ka jhatka bahut joron se lagega na. 😆 😆 😆

Par Pune Academy to kaafi jyada suspicious hoti jaa rahi hai day by day ab ye majra kya hai?😲
Sab pata chalega jaldi hi 😛 😛 😛

So BG jaante hain Vyom k baare me aur us k alawa aur koi nahi jaanta.🥱
Yeah but as Vyom not as Raj 😉 😉 😉

Hope ki aap jaldi prasaan ho kar update kar dein. 😕

Bilkul kar doongi. 😉 😉 😉

Thanks a lot dear for comment. 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh
hey ver!!!😃😃😃

i cacth this one 2!!!

now i am tooo eager to read the next part!!!

and yes...the update was fabulous!!!👏

plz try to update soon!!!😊😊😊

love u😍

esha

Hey Esha dear thank u so much that u caught the fic, hope i didn't disappoint u. 😉 😉 😉

Thanks a lot for comment.🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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#99

part 30

"Is baare me hum baad me baat kar sakte hain na Naina, pehle mujhe kuch jaroori kaam karna hai." And he took out an instrument in his hands and started searching the whole room. Naina knew that what was that and she knew why was he using all that. After a while Raj's instrument beeped at two points. Raj understood what does that mean and stopped at that point. Naina was in washroom than, when she came out Raj looked at her. Naina understood by his eyes movement that something like a bug or a camera is present in the room.

"Fresh ho jaaiye na, mai kuch khaane ka order karti hoon." She said.

"Fresh to mai aise bhi ho sakta hoon." And moving towards her he pulled Naina in his arms and started kissing her lips gently. Naina was too shocked to respond at that point and it happened all of a sudden so it became difficult for her to balance herself and she took the support of the table at her back and her back collapsed from the almira and something fall down and broke. After three minutes Raj left her, and Naina breathed heavily. She was surprised and was still unable to understand that why did Raj do it all of a sudden. She gave a questioning look to him and Raj just smiled in return.

"Kya mujhe apni biwi ko pyaar karne k liye vajah batane ki jaroorat hai?"

"Nahi, par...".

"Oh Naina kitna sochti ho tum, par chalo ready ho jaao mai fresh ho kar aata hoon fir hum canteen me chal kar dinner le lenge."

After sometime they were joined by Alekh and all three headed towards the canteen and reached there, Alekh brought them to the in charge of Canteen.

"Ye hai Subedaar Amar Sengupta humari canteen k incharge. Abhi bus kuch dino pehle hi posting hue hai in ki yahan. Aur ye hain Captain Naina Singh Rathode aur ye hain in k husband Major Vyom Rathode. Captain Naina yahan Psychology ki teacher hongi aur Vyom yahan History teacher honge."

"To ye Army me nahi hain?" Amar asked.

Alekh said, "Nahi actually ye Army me hi hain as a Major but in ko apne naam me Major lagana kuch pasand nahi hai." And all laughed. And they met after that they came to one corner of canteen and soon their food reached. After a while when they were having lunch they noticed someone who came in the Canteen and without even looking at anyone he got seated at a chair near Raj's table and soon his food arrived.

"What the hell is this?" that man screamed with anger.

"Kya hua sir jee, khaana pasand nahi aaya kya?" Dasgupta came to his table.

"Is ko khaana kehte ho tum, tumhe pata hai is se accha khaana to gaaiy (cows) bhaisen(buffallos) bhi khaate hongi."

"Sir jee maine khud khaana taste kiya tha aap ka." He was confused.

"Le jaao ye sab yahan se mujhe nahi khaana hai, aur haan kuch der me mere kamre me mera khaana aa jaana chahiye fir se dubara bana hua meri pasand ka." And he left from the canteen fuming.

"Kaun aadmi tha ye itna badatameej?" Naina asked.

"Tu tensin mat le khaali peeli aur khaana khaa."

"Nahi pehle mujhe bata ye kaun hai?" she asked again.

Alekh just gave a small smile and said, "Ye hain Major Viren Talreja, is ka yahi haal hai. Na to khud chain se baitha hai na kisi ko baithne deta hai. Apun aur is ki bahut acche se ho jaati hai aksar."

"Par ye aisa kyoun hai?" Naina asked. "Ab tere ko kya karna hai Naina kai ko itna tensin leti hai tu? Khaana kha na aur jaa k rest kar, kal se vaise bhi apne aap pata chalne lagega ki kaun kya hai?"

A while later all had taken dinner and left for their room when Raj said, "Alehk mujhe tum logon se kuch baat karni hai to kya tumhare room me chal k baat kar sakte hain?"

"Are sir ye bhi koi poochne waali baat hai kya? Chaliye na...", fir us ko kuch yaad aa gaya achanak se. "Par Naina dekh tu kuch kehna nahi apun ko."

"Kyoun?"

"Actually apun k room me sab saaman faila pada hua hai na aur tu to jaanti hi hai ki Neelu nahi hai apun se ye sab kaam theek se nahi kiya jaata." Naina laughed and Alekh made a face, Raj was again lost seeing Naina laughing like a small kid, "nahi mai kuch nahi kahoongi chal."

"Nahi tu ruk ek minute mai sab check kar k aata hoon." And he left in a hurry to his room. Naina was still laughing and Raj was looking at her intently, but Naina stopped abruptly to see someone passing from there but her eyes noticed that person dropping something in Raj's pocket which Raj hasn't noticed. He was lost in Naina and now she understood and smiled at him.

"Major Vyom Rathode." She called.

Raj came back to his sense and said, "Hiii, yu naam mat liya karo mera apni jaban se lagta hai kisi kambhakt ne seene se dil hi bahar nikal diya ho."

Naina gave a laugh and said, "Bus kariye, apni biwi k saath flirt kar rahe hain."

"to kya kisi aur k saath karna chahiye?" he winked.

"Nahi, mujh se hi kariye. Accha jara dekhiye to ye Alekh kahan reh gaya hum ko yahan khada kar k?" she said.

"Kya jaroorat hai, aa hi jaayega jaldi. Tab tak u know hum yahan akele hain." And he preceded towards her.

"Vyom nahi yahan kuch nahi please hatiye koi aa jaayega." She tried but Vyom was too admanent.

"But mera mood abhi hi hai na." And he moved closer to her and now he was about to kiss Naina when he left her in middle. Naina was lost when he held her and closed her eyes but she was surprised when she felt that Raj has left her. She thought may be Alekh is here but when she opened he reyes Alekh has not come till that time and Raj was just smiling at her. Raj knew very well that in Naina's mind a lot of questions were pondering and as soon as she will find him alone she will shower all her questions on him. Just than Alekh came and brought them. After reaching in the room Raj instructed him to close the door.

Raj asked, "Alekh tumhara room safe hai na?"

Alekh got a bit confused, "Apun samajha nahi sir."

"Mai ye poochna chahta hoon Captain Alekh Sharma ki kahin yahan koi cameras ya bug to nahi plan hai? Aap ne lautne k baad apna room theek se check kiya ya nahi?"

Alekh samajh gaya, "Yes sir, aate hi sab se pehle maine apne room ko bhi check kiya hai us k baad kuch aur kiya."

"Good Captain." Raj smiled."Kaafi kuch seekha hai aap ne se."

"Sir apun ne jo bhi seekha hai sab apne mentor se hi seekha hai." And both shared a laugh.

"Raj pls mujhe jaldi se bataiye baat kya hai?"

"Baat ye hai Naina ki humare room me cctv cameras lage hue the."

'What?" she was surprised to the core.

"Kya baat kar rahe hain aap sir?" Alekh was shocked too.

"Haan...Naina tum ko yaad hai us din jab achanak se maine tumhe..." he looked at Alekh and said, "yaad hai?"

Naina was thinking or trying to recall when she found Raj signaling towards his lips and she immedieatly remembered but being Alekh present there se said,

"to?"

"To hum pe najar rakhi jaa rahi hai Naina ki vakai me hum pati patni hai bhi ya nahi?"

"U know Naina hum ne yahan as a husband and wife entry li hai."

"To, vo to hum vaise bhi hain na?" she questioned.

"Haan par un logon ko lagta hai ki hum sab ye bus natak kar rahe hain aur vo jaana chahte hain ki hum vakai me pati patni hain ya nahi."

"Par is se un ko kya fark padta hai?" next was Alekh to ask that.

"Padta hai Captain Sharma, Naina k baare me jahan tak mujhe lagta hai un logon ne acche se abhi tak pata lagwa liya hoga ki Army k kaafi top secreat missions me vo kaam kar chuki hai aur abhi tak jitne bhi misin us ne attend kiye hai sab sucessful rahe hain apart from the last misin, jahan sab kuch acahnak se khatam ho gaya tha. Mujhe poora yakeen hai ki humare aane k pehle se yahan humare aane ki saari planning ho chuki hai. Sab kuch pehle se hi fix kar diya gaya hai."

"Par abhi bhi mujhe ek baat nahi samajh me aa rahi hai Raj ki mere uper najar rakhne ka to reason samajh me aata hai mujhe par vo log tum par najar kyoun rakh rahe hain?"

"U know Naina, mere entry yahan as a Psycology teacher hue hai plus mai tumhara husband hoon aur third clue ki hum Academy me reh rahe hain." Fir kuch sochte hue Raj ne aage bola, "Kal tak i mean parson tak aap Captain Naina Singh Ahluwalia thi aur kal aap achanak se Captain Naina Singh Rathode ho gayi."

"Ye news tu kisi k bhi dimaag me shak daal sakti hai na."

"Haan Alekh aur jab un logon ko ye pata tha ki Naina yahan aane waali hai tab unhone Naina k baare me sab kuch jaane ki koshish ki hogi na aur tab Naina ka naam kuch aur tha aur jab Naina yahan aayi to us ka naam change tha aur even vo apne husband k saath yahan aayi hai ab."

Raj said. "Hmm, to ab?"

"Is se ek baar ye baat to clear ho jaati hai ki in sab logon ki pahuch bahut andar tak hai system me. Ab aage ka plan hume bahut soch samajh k hi banana hoga."

"Par sir apun ko lagta hai sab se pehle aap k room me pade camera ka kuch karna padega."

"Haan Alekh, ek baar vo camera bund ho jaaye fir hum aage k bhi plan baith k aaram se bana sakte hain."

"to kya karenge hum camera k liye?" Naina asked. "Karna ye hai..."

Here:-

"You idiots, fools. Lagta hai maine gadhon ki sena bana rakhi hai. Kisi ko koi kaam nahi aata hai. Tum bataoge mujhe ki kaise ek camera ne kaam karna bund kar diya?"

"Sir..." and he told how Raj managed to escape from one hidden camera.

"Vaah Major mai maan gaya tumhare dimaag ko. Tum ko kya lagta hai ki agar vo ladki Naina ne us se shaadi ki hai to aise hi kar li hogi? Jaroor kuch na kuch dekh kar hi ki hogi na, maine tum ko sab kuch bataya tha Major, Naina k baare me fir bhi tum itne laparvaah kaise ho sakte ho? Tum Captain Naina ko underestimate karne ki soch bhi kaise sakte ho Major?"

"Sorry sir, par mujhe nahi pata tha ki Vyom bhi itna Sharp ho sakta hai."

"Kya bakwaas kar rahe ho Major, tumhe pata bhi hai ki tumne kitne badi bewkuffi ka kaam kiya hai. Ab tak un ko sab samajh me aa chuka hoga. Kisi bhi halat me ye baat Brigedier Negi tak nahi pahuchni chahiye."

"Sir mai dekh loonga."

"Vo to tumne pichli baar bhi kaha tha itne badi bewkuffi karne k baad. Mujhe koi bhi problem nahi chahiye is matter pe." Aur ye keh kar he hung the phone.

After an hour in Raj's room:-

"Naina...kahan ho Huda ka call aaya hai?"

"Huda ka call par kyoun?"

"Haan Huda bol."

"Kaise hai Phoolan?"

"Bahut acchi, tu apna bata."

(Us k baad ka convo ab silent hai readers k liye 😉 😉 😉)

Next day:-

In morning Naina entered in the mess alone as Raj and Alekh were busy in talking so they were coming slowly whereas Naina was fed up with their convo so she walked fast and came in mess to have her breakfast.

"Subedar Saini, to ye aaj k baad mess k naye incharge honge Subdear Sengupta k baad."

"Welcome in our facuilty Saini jee."

"Thank u sir jee,"

"vaise is k pehle aap kahan posted the Saini jee?" someone asked entering in the mess and Naina was shocked to see the person.

Here Alekh & Raj:-

"Sir bahut mushkil hone waala hai ye Naina k liye."

"Jaanta hoon mai Captain par kabhi na kabhi Naina ko sach ka saamna to karna hi tha na."

"Par sir aap ko nahi lagta hai ki Naina ko kahin yakeen na hone lage is baat ka ki vo bunda...aap samajh rahe hain na sir ki apun kya kehna chahta hai?"

"Sab samajh raha hoon mai par aap bhi jaante hain na ki...", tab Raj aur Alekh ne Naina ki scream suni aur dono daudte hue vahan pahuch gaye.

"Naina...kya hua?" par saamne ka scene dekh k dono hi hairaan the. "Aisa nahi ho sakta hai...aisa nahi ho sakta hai mere saath. Nahi tum vo nahi ho sakte...kaun ho tum batao mujhe?" she was almost shooking that man badly holding his color.

"Excuse me are you ok, aur aap hain kaun jo mere saath is tarah se behave kar rahi hain?"

"Kaun ho tum..." and she panickly looked here and there and she found Raj standing there,she rushed to him and asked Alekh, "Tum jaante the na ye sab Alekh...batao, jaante the na. Fir mujhe kabhi kyoun nahi bataya bolo?" Alekh has no answer now and he was feeling guilty for Naina's such condition."Bolo Alekh, sab jaante hue bhi sach kyoun chupaya mujh se bolo?" she was shaking him badly.

"Naina just calm down, samhaalo apne aap ko Naina aise sab kuch khatam ho jaayega."

"Mujhe nahi sun na hai kuch, mujhe bus jawab chahiye is baat ka ki mujh se ye sach kyoun chupaya gaya." She was looking the same Naina to whom Raj has seen many times in KMA when it came to her brother.

"Naina...tum ko jo bhi baat karni hai Alekh se tum kahin aur bhi kar sakti ho na. Ye jagah theek nahi hai. Chalo yahan se." She was fuming with anger and she was unable to control her tears too which made her cheeks wet very soon.

Soon she understood Raj's view and rushed out from there. All people standing there were in shock and they don't know why Naina behaved liked that. "What is this Mr.Vyom, aap ki wife kuch psyco hain kya? Mujhe dekh kar is tarah se behave kyoun kiya unhone? I suggest agar un ko kuch problem hai to aap un ko Doc ko dikha sakte hain. Yahan bhi Pune city me aap ko acche docs mil jaayenge aur i think aap jaante hi honge ki ek Army academy me is tarah ka civil behavior accha nahi lagta hai." And he left saying that.

"Sir aap jaaiye Naina k pass, jab us ka gussa toda thanda hoga to apun us se baat karega." Alekh suggested and Raj nodded quitely.

In another corner of Academy:-

"Sir maine aap ko ek khaas information dene k liye phone kiya hai."

"Bolo Major."

"Sir aaj jab mai lunch time pe mess me jaa raha tha..." and he told her everything which he saw there. "Sir bahut kuch golmol chal raha hai."

"interesting major, kaafi kuch bata diya hai tum ne mujhe us Captain Naina k baare me. Let me do investigation about her. Tum bus us par acche se najar rakho aur haan koi bhi important baat ho to mujhe fauran inform karna."

"Ok sir."

After five minutes:-

"Sir aap ne jaisa kaha tha maine vaisa hi kiya hai par ..."

"Par kya?"

"Sir ye khel bahut khatarnak hota jaa raha hai."

"Mujhe pata hai par humare pass koi aur raasta bhi nahi hai na abhi."

"Naina ko khatra hai ab." "Samajh raha hoon mai, par jaante ho na bina risk k hum kabhi us insaan tak nahi pahuch paayenge jo in sab k peeche hai."

"Par din par din badhta risk aur aaj jis tarah se Naina ne sab k saamne...sir aap samajh rahe hain na?"

"Mai samajh raha hoon Captain aap fikr mat kariye."

That's it for now i think i didn't disappoint u guys with the update.

Till next update bye and take care

Don't forget to give your precious comments.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago