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get well soon dear... i'll be waiting
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hey my Lovely Readers. Gud morning, going to update in few mins. nw. Get ready wid ur Lovely Comments.
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waiting dear as it is an SS how much parts it would have can u plz tell me

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dear i think u have one more FF which is left like that with 5 parts
THAT THING CALLED LOVE
when r u updating this one
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dear i think u have one more FF which is left like that with 5 parts
THAT THING CALLED LOVE
when r u updating this one



Well since Ehsaas is cuming to an end so i'll work on it after Ehsaas u knw m not Gud in handling so many FF's in one tym like Keyama nd Muskan
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Hey my Lovely Readers. thanx a lot for ur overwhelming Response so far. nd thanx for ur Wishes too. m feeling much better so without making u all wait any more m going to update d Part 11 of my SS. hope u all will like it too. pls feel free to criticuiseif u all dnt like it.


Part 11:

Maan was lying on his Bed closing his eyes but dis tym not in pain, not in loneliness but in happiness. In happiness of realizing his Feelings, his true feelings. He smiles whenever he thought of her. He opens his drawer nd takes out her Photo. D photo which he has taken wen he saw her first tym nd she still didn't have any clue of dat. He looked at her photo nd smiled. She was always real, always herself. She didn't believe in artificiality maybe datsy he got attracted to her on d very first sight of hers. He smiles remembering her Attitude towards him. He caresses her Photo wid his fingers nd smiles.

"I LOVE YOU GEET. I LOVE YOU" he murmured as he held her photo close to his heart nd dozed off to sleep. He dnt knw after hw many days he was actually sleeping peacefully

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Geet instantly gets up from her sleep. She felt an unknown feeling inside her. She switched on d light nd looked at d tym. It was 3.30 of night. She didn't understand y is she feeling restless that too at dis hour of nite. She felt like sumone is calling her. She gets up from her Bed nd moved towards her window nd looked outside more of searching sumone. Misha gets disturbed in her sleep due to lights. She opens her eyes a bit only to look Geet standing near d window.

Misha (sleepy): Wat happen Wildy? Y had u switched on d light? Nd wat r u doing near d Window?

Geet: Nothing Mish. I dnt know y but I suddenly had an unknown feeling in me. I felt like someone is calling me? So I thought of seeing it.

Misha (looking at d watch): Raat me 3.30 baje tumhe kaun bulayega Wildy. It may be just Ur Illusion. U must have some dream. Nw c'mon sleep nw nd Pls switch off d lights.

Geet: I think u r right. Gud nite

She said nd switched off d light nd laid on her bed once again but couldn't able to sleep. It was not her illusion, not at all. The feeling was real. She felt like Maan is remembering her. Yes dis is wat she felt. She felt him remembering her.

But den she shrugged off her thoughts. Y would he remember her? Dere was nothing between dem. Isn't it wat he said? She looked at d tym once again. No dis cant be him. Mish was right it was just her Illusion. He must have moved on by now nd she wont be surprised if he was spending his tym wid some other girl. She closed her eyes trying hard to sleep nd shrugged off her thoughts dat was arising for him.

Maan's Monologue:

I smiled lying on my Bed watching her photo. It being so Good being in love. yes m in love. I had Re-Fallen in love wid her. Actually I was always in Love wid her. May be datsy I approached her second tym even after her Cold Attitude towards me in d very first tym. I again looked at her photo. She was different, different from all other girls. Where other girls believe in artificiality she just believes in being real. Even after being in relationship wid me she never demands anything from me unlike my other Gfs. Oops! No I cant compare her to any of my other Gfs. It would be an insult to her nd our Love too. But ya dis is true she never asked me for anything. She never expected anything from me. Neither expensive gifts nor anything else. She demands only one thing from me, expected just one thing from me I.e. true love nd trust. This is all wat she demands from me, dis is all wat she expects from me nd I failed, I failed to give dis thing to her. I Maan Singh Khurana who can give anything that anyone can ask him for failed to Give True Love nd trust to d Girl whom he loves d most nd I hate myself for dat, I literally Hate myself.

She always loves me, always trusts me, and always believes on everything dat I said to her nd wat I gave her in return Pain, tears nd sadness dat too cuming in d influence of those people who dnt even know me properly, who don't even know about my nature nd I hurt her. Y couldn't I understand dat dey were just jealous of us, just jealous of me for falling me for some other dat too so seriously. But not anymore nw. nw I know nd I m sure of my feelings. Nw I wont hurt her anymore, nw I wont let her cry anymore.

I'll go to her, ask her forgiveness, will bend down to my knees, will go to any extent just to win back her love, her trust again. I know dat it wont be an easy task. She wont give in so easily not after wat I did to her. but I too wont give up so easily. I knw my Geet. She'll definitely forgive me one day. By saying dis I looked one last tym to her pic nd placed it close to my heart nd had no idea wen dozed off to sleep.

(Maan's Monologue Ends)

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Geet's Monologue:

I woke up due to sudden unknown Feeling inside me. After Crying my heart out to my Best Buddy Armaan m feeling better. His words sooths me nd I feel like starting a new chapter of my life once again. But den wats dis unknown Feeling is dat makes me restless. Y I feel like someone is calling me? Y I feel like dat someone is remembering me? I switched on d lights nd looked at d tym. It was 3.30 of nite. Who would call me at dis tym of nite? But still I feel like checking it. I go near my window nd looked outside or should I say searching someone. Yes m searching of him. No I shrugged myself m not searching of him. In d mean tym I heard Misha's voice who gets disturbed due to Lights. She asked me about d reason of standing near d window wid lights on at dis tym of nite nd wen I told her about my restlessness she said dat it was an illusion. Well I couldn't expect anything else from her as she's not mature enough to understand things. She's wild just wild who can break someone's Teeth if he or she would hurt her or anyone close to her including me.

I closed d Light nd again laid on my Bed but couldn't able to sleep. again nd again my mind diverts me towards d direction of d unknown Feeling arising in me. It was not my illusion because if it is an Illusion den y I feel it so real. Y I m feeling dat Maan is remembering me? Y I feel dat he's calling me? No dis cant be true. Geet, u have lost it completely. Y would he remember u? dere's nothing called Love between both of u. dis is wat he said na. den y dis restlessness arising in me?

I thought of calling him, just to ask as sake of humanity if he's allright. If he's not in any kind of problem. But den I stopped myself thinking dat had I any kind of right of asking him about his well-beings nd y would he be in any kind of problem. He must have moved on in his lyf by now. May be appending his tym wid sum other girl nd has forgetten dat he has met any girl named Geet Handa. But den y he has came to meet me at college today? May be due to guilt.

Oh c'mon Geet wat r u thinking? Just shrug it off all ur thoughts. Remember wat Armaan has said to u. dnt live in d memories of dat person who just gives u pain. Yes I wont think about him. Dis was d last thought dat came in my mind nd I again tried to catch my sleep.

(Geet's Monologue Ends)

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Next morning bring a new ray of hope, a new ray of dreams, a ray of happiness along wid Sunrays for both of dem. Geet wakes up wid d new dreams in her eyes, to begin her Life fresh wid no traces of past, wid no traces of pain given by Maan. Maan wakes up wid d hope dat soon everything will be fine between Him nd Geet. Well dat was just a hope. He knows Geet's temper. It was nowhere less den him nd after wat he did to her due to his immature behaviour well he doubts dat she would even see his face. He definitely cant do dis alone he needs sumone to help him. Nd he smirks realizing who can it be none other den Yash.


(me pity on Yash bechara fir banega Bali ka Bakra🤔😕)

Geet on d other hand gets freshens up. She cames out from washroom wearing her Bathrobe nd opens her wardrobe to take out her clothes. She searched for a while wen something slips from d side nd lands up on d floor. She curiously picks it up nd was surprised to see wat it was. It was d same card dat Maan has given her on d B'day. She looked at it nd smiled remembering d moment but soon her smile fades wen she realizes d reality. She again glances at d card nd takes a deep breath. But den something started buzzing her. she has returned d gift nd Ring to Maan dat day only nd d rest of d things given by him she has given Yash so dat he can return it to Maan den hw cum dis card left over here nd she didn't even noticed it also in dis 1 month

Geet (To herself): hw couldn't I noticed it yet? Ye yaha kaise reh gaya? Nd I noticed it today wen I decided to have d fresh beginning of my lyf wid no traces of past. (den she looked upwards) Babaji, kuch kehna chahte ho aap?


Her thoughts gets distracted wid d ringtone of her cell phone. She looked at it nd saw Armaan's flashing over dere. She has to go shopping wid him today since he's leaving in 2 days nd he has buy sum gifts for his family nd friends over dere nd she promised dat she'll definitely help him. But as usual he cant stop buzzing her until she gets irritated to d core. She rolls over her eyes nd picks d call

Geet: Ab kya hua?

Armaan: nothing

Geet: nothing? To itni morning me kya mujhse newspapers ki headlines sunne ke liye call kiya tha?

Armaan: Morning? Madam look at d watch its 9 am nd if u remember u have to go wid me to d shopping today

Geet: Haan baba I remember. This is d 20th tym u called in last 1 hr nd if u keep buzzing me like dis only den I wont be able to get ready.

Armaan: arey u dnt have to do much to get ready Afterall m going wid u to tumhe kaun dekhega

Geet: Armaan, phone ke under ghus ke marrongi agar bakwaas band nahi ki to

Armaan: acha baba sorry. Get ready fast.

Geet: Armaan, its only 9.15 ok nd shops at d mall will open at 11 am so we have enough tym to go over dere. Haan ab agar tumhara choro k tarah Shops ke locks tod kar things lene ka iraada hai den I can't do anything

Armaan: Geet...

Geet (giggling): acha nw keep d phone nd let me get ready warna late ho jayungi to tumhi mera sar khaoge.

Armaan: ok bye will see u in 1 hr.

Geet: hhmmm Bye

She puts d cell aside nd looks at d card once again nd den keeps it back at d cupboard nd thought dat she'll give dis back to Yash too to return it to Maan nd started getting ready.

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Yash: its really getting difficult for me to understand u now

Maan: nw wat I have done?

Yash: wat u have done? From last 1 month u r doing Roller coaster ride wid ur thoughts nd making me insane. First u said dat u love Geet even I told u to think about it twice nd wen I was sure dat u really love her den u came wid a logic dat it was not love but just a mere attraction nd wen I started to live by d fact dat u two broke-up den out of nowhere u again call me nd says dat u really Love her. I mean wats wrong wid u?

Maan: I knw Yash I bother u a lot nd more den u I hurt Geet a lot but nw I want to fix it. Dude I really love her yaar. I dnt knw y I was thinking it till nw dat it was not Love wen d fact is dat dere was always Love between us nd dis tym its confirmed no more confusion in it

Yash (shakes his head in disbelief): so wat r u going to do nw

Maan: well i m thinking of fixing it but for dat I need ur help

Yash: Hold on Hold on if u r thinking dat m going to talk to Geet about ur change of behaviour nd asks her to forgive u den forget it m not doing any of dese

Maan: pls Yash dnt say like dis. u have to help me

Yash: no ways Maan

Maan: wat kind of frnd u r dat u wont even ready to help me

Yash: m ur friend Maan but along wid dat m Geet's brother also nd few days it was me only who told her to move on in her lyf nd nw u expect me to go to her nd say her to forgive u. she would definitely wont see my face after dat

Maan: hhmmm. Well in dat case only one person can help both of us

"Meera" dey both said together

Yash: No ways Dude.

Maan: nw wats d problem wid Meera?

Yash: Dude tera break up ho gaya so u want my Break-up also.

Maan: Wat do u mean?

Yash: Meera dnt knw anything about all dis as Geet doesn't want her to know about all dis nd she was still in d believe dat u both r a Happy Couple nd nw wen I told her about all dat den she would definitely go mad on u nd after u d next person will be me as I was d one who convince her dat u truly loves Geet nd den she would definitely Broke up wid me. Waise bhi uska Gussa hamesha naak pe rehta hai nd in case of Geet she's extra sensitive. No I cant take d risk.

Maan: pls Dude. Acha I promise I'll handle Meera but pls yaar its my last hope

Yash has to give up on his friend's pleadings. Afterall he too wants the same, to see both of dem together. But Meera, he gulped his Saliva just only imagining her reaction after d out comes of truth.

(🤔Bechara Yash, doston ke liye kya-kya karna padta hai😕)


He took out his cell phone nd call Meera

Yash: hey Meera, hws u?... suno I need to talk to u sumthing important... no cant tell on call can u pls meet me at CCD in 1 hr... ya its urgent... cool den see u over dere. Bye nd Luv u Babu.

He said nd cuts d call nd den looked at Maan who was standing dere smiling.

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All 3 of dem were at CCD. Yash told Meera whole trail of incidents dat happened in dis 1 month silently praying dat Meera won't slap him nw for not telling it all before. Meera was shocked to know all dis. not her wildest dream she could think of all dis can happen nd most importantly Geet haven't told her yet about all dis but that could be tackle later on rite nw all she can think of is dat d person who has hurted her best Friend is sitting right in front of her nd asking for her help. She definitely cant control her Anger nw. Yash can see d change of expression on her face she tries to calm her down but she gave an angry glance to him which was enough for him to keep quiet

Yash (to himself): Lo wahi hua jiska darr tha. Yash beta tu taiyari kar le, agle 10 min me tera Break-up hone wala hai (den to Meera) Meera... Babu wo actually

Meera (giving another glare): not a word now(she said while pointing her finger on him) I'll deal wid u later first let me finish wid ur so much talented Best friend.

She said nd gave an angry glare to Maan who was just sitting over dere quietly. He knew Meera's temper very well nd dis tym even he dnt have courage to speak anything to her den forget about Yash.

Maan: Meera Actually...

Meera: Shut up! I haven't asked u to speak yet. Hw can u Maan, hw can u do dis to her? u didn't even thought twice before hurting her. Maan, I had seen d intensity of her luv, intensity of her trust that she had on u nd u broke dat trust only. U knew it very well na dat she was heart-broken, hw badly her trust has been broken before u came to her lyf nd still u managed to do d same thing wid her again.

Maan: Meera I...

Meera: had I asked u to say anything yet? Dnt say a word until I ask u to do so. Nd by d way wat will u say in ur defense just give me one solid reason y u did dat to her or wat had lead u to take dis decision? Just ur so called friends has said nd u break her heart (den she reminds of Geet continuing avoiding her) nw I understand y is she avoiding me nw a days. She knew it very well dat she cant hide it from me derefore she's avoiding me. U knw wat dis tym more den u m angry on myself. She was never ready for dis relationship neither wid u nor wid anyone else because she always had a fear dat she will again left heart-broken, den it was me who make her believe dat dis tym nothing would go wrong nd nw m cursing myself for saying anything like dat. Y Maan y had u done dis? nd nw u still have guts dat u expecting me to help u, to talk to her. Sorry Maan I wont do dis. Already m feeling guilty becoz she's in dis condition because of me nw I cant do dis again to her.

She said nd hides her face between her palms. Yash could sense dat she is crying nd he tries to calm her but she snaps away his hand

Yash: Babu pls.

Meera: u better dnt talk to me Yash. It was u only na who has make me believed dat Maan truly loves Geet. Was dis was d love u were talking about dat tym nd Tum jaante the na, u knw it from last 1 month wat has happened between Maan nd Geet. Still u haven't told me anything. Oh y would u tell me Afterall Maan is ur best friend nd hw can u see his fault rite?

Yash: Aisa nahi hai Babu (she again gave him an angry glare) I mean Meera. I wanted to tell u but Geet has stopped me tell u anything. She said dat she dnt want any kind of problems between us due to her

Meera: nd u agreed to it? u knw na hw she is? she always think about others before her. she was in so much pain in last 1 month nd i being her best friend was not dere for her just because u didnt told me anything. U consider Geet as ur sister rite den hw could u agree to it so easily or she was ur sister just for name sake

Yash: no Meera its not like dat

Maan was sitting quiet all dis while but nw he have to speak otherwise it would be worse for Yash nd Meera's relation

Maan: I m sorry Meera. I knw I was at fault. I knw I had hurted Geet a lot but trust me I dnt want to hurt her. I dnt knw y I had done all dat. I...

Meera: dnt clarify urself Maan because it wont help. Nd by the way u r u after Geet nw? y haven't u thought of all dis at dat tym wen u were thinking of hurting her? actually I knw y u did all dat, u must have thought dat Geet wont make a gud match wid u. Afterall u r a charmer nd she's a simple girl. She's not like ur other girlfriends na. nd nw wen she's not wid u den u r feeling guilty. But forget about her Maan. U knw wat dere's a friend of mine nd she had a huge crush on u nd ya not to forget she's very hot nd stunning too perfectly suits u. so main tumhe usse milwa deti hoon nd den u guys can hook up nd after dat if u leave her also na den also she wont get as hurted as Geet was. So wat say? Number doon uska?

Yash: Meera...

Maan (intervenes): Meera pls. I said I m Sorry pls dnt say like dis. I truly Love Geet nd cant live without. In her absence only I realize wat she means to me. Pls help me Meera nd ya Yash is nowhere at fault infact wo to mujhe pichle 1 mahine se samjha raha hai it was only me who was fool to not understand anything. Meera I really really Love her nd trust me dis tym I wont do anything stupid

Meera: y should I trust u Maan? Hw should I believe dat u wont do anything like dis again

Maan: if dis tym I do anything like dis den I'll never show my face to any of u. "Geet ki Kasam" Pls Meera I cant live without her

Meera saw d sincerity in his eyes, he was definitely not lying nd cant swear false of Geet derefore she gave up. She gets agreed to help Dem Afterall she always wanted to see Geet happy nd dere was 1 thing she was sure of dat Geet too having a tough tym over dere nd derefore she agreed to help Maan.

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Armaan nd Geet were shopping from last 2 hrs but his list doesn't seems to end nd Geet was really tired nw

Geet: Armaan? Kitni lambi list hai tumhari? It seems u r buying gift for whole US

Armaan: tum pehli aisi ladki ho jo itni Shopping karne ke liye complaint kar rahi hai but wat to do yaar ab doston ne list hi itni lambi pakdayi. U knw na hw much Indian culture is valued over dere.

Geet: ya I knw

Armaan: hey Kiddo, I think u r hungry. Cum first lets have sumthing den we'll shop further

Geet: Lyf me pehli baar tumne akal ki baat ki hai

Armaan: excuse me

Geet: Let it be lets go fast m starving

Armaan smiled nd dey goes to d near by restaurant. Dey were having dere lunch wen Geet cellphone rang. Armaan looked at screen nd it flashes Meera's name

Armaan: Lo its Chunni babu

Geet (almost spills out her water): wat?

Armaan: o god! Her baar samjhana padta hai. Arey i mean its Meera. Since u r Devdas den Meera would be chunni babu only na Afterall she was ur best Friend like Chunni babu was of Devdas

Geet (rolling over her eyes): Armaan, u nd ur logic.

She picks up d call nd found Meera other side Weeping

Geet: hey Meera hws u... wat happen y r u crying?... nw... but m outside... ok ok don't cry m cuming... I'll be at ur home in half an hour... dnt cry I said na m cuming. Ok bye

She cuts nd wipes her hand wid napkin. Armaan looks at her questioningly

Armaan: Hello! Madam would u bother to tell me wat happen?

Geet: I need to go Armaan. Meera ka call tha. She was crying. God knows wat happen? Lagta hai fir se Yash se jhagda hua

Armaan (Dramatic): nahi Deva tum Paro ko chod kar kahi nahi ja sakte

Geet: Shut up Armaan! Mazaak ka tym nahi hai. Can u pls drop me at Meera's place

Armaan: ya sure, but wat about shopping

Geet: I'll help u for dat in evening nd jo reh jayega dat we'll complete tomorrow abhi really need to rush yaar

Armaan: chal ok my Dating Counceller

He said nd dey both leaves from dere after paying d bill.

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Geet was at Meera's home where she was crying. She was dere from half an hour nd Meera haven't said anything yet but just crying nd Geet was passing d wipes to her. she thanked God dat Meera is alone at home today otherwise her mother would get worried after seeing her like dis but least she knew dat she was not alone. Maan nd Yash was also over dere who was hidden in d nearby room watching dem far enough not to get noticed by Geet.

Geet: bas karo Meera. Hw much will u cry? Dekho ab to tissues bhi khatam ho gaye. Batao na kya baat hai?

Meera: nobody absolutely nobody care for me. U also

Geet: arey wat I have done nw?

Meera: wat u have done? M here from last 3 weeks nd u didn't got tym to meet me not even to talk me on call also. Everytym u just avoids me. Everyone avoids me. M really very much alone in dis world

Maan nd Yash r watching all dis nd tries hard to suppress their laughter by seeing her acting

Geet: Ab band karo apna yeh Emotional Atyachaar nd aisa nahi hai Meera. I was busy due to my presentation nd moreover Armaan was also over here from last 10 days so I was...

Meera (still weeping): Dekha I told u, u dnt care about me. Tum itna busy ho gayi thi dat u dnt have even tym to talk to me on call also nd wat u have u said Armaan aaya hua hai? Hw mean u r tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi dat he has came. Actually tum chahti hi nahi ki main usse miloon tabhi tumne mujhe nahi bataya

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Maan: Ye Armaan kaun hai?

Yash: Geet's childhood friend. she must have told u yaar

Maan remembers many tymes Geet has mentioned his name.

Maan: ya I remember (den mutters) so dat guy was Armaan (den to Yash) y Meera is so much despo to meet him?

Yash: just like dat yaar. She's just trying to create d environment. Nd anyways my Meera is not like dat

Maan: So u mean my Geet is like dat

Yash: I haven't said dat nd anyways we can argue later also.

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Geet (irritated): ab tum pehle decide kar lo ki tum naraaz kis baat pe ho. Main tumse itne din se nahi mili is baat pe ya maine tumhe Armaan ke aane k bare me nahi bataya is baat pe. Nd wat have u said I don't care about u? if I don't care about u na den I wouldn't have leave Armaan in mid of d shopping to meet u ok. So better next tym think before u speak.

She said nd looks away nd Meera makes Baby face

Meera: I m sorry. I guess main zyada bol gayi

Geet: its ok. Nw tell me wats wrong?

Meera: Actually me nd Yash have a fight nd he broke up wid me

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Maan: u didn't told me dat u guys also broke-up

Yash: even I dnt knw till nw. god knows wats in her mind?

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Geet: wat fir se?

She nodded innocently in yes nd Geet rolls over her eyes

Geet: r u guys Mad or wat? 3 saal se tum relationship me ho nd 3 saal me 300 baar break-up kar chuke ho nd Everytym its only ur mistake Meera. Y cant u control ur temper yaar? Nd anyways is baar tumne kya kiya?

Meera: wo actually he was busy in his college assignments from few days so not having much tym to spend wid me nd I thought dat he was avoiding me due to dat Swati

Geet: Swati?

Meera: wo uski classmate who had crush on Yash

Geet: ya ok.

Meera: so I was saying dat I thought he was avoiding me due to Swati wo she's his partner in assignment na. so I thought dat ki Swati ko zyada attention de raha hai isiliye mujhe gussa aa gaya aur mera usse jhagda ho gaya

Geet: he didn't tried to defend himself? But y even I m asking dis tumne use apne aage to bolne nahi diya hoga hai na?

Meera: Main kya karoon? I was hell angry at dat tym. Mujhe laga ki uske paas mere sath spend karne k liye tym nahi hai nd us Swati ke liye hai. Aur humara jhagda ho gaya nd he gets so much pissed off on me dat he broke up wid me

Geet (mutters): Kaun si nayi baat hai?

Meera: yeh sab na us Swati ki wajah se hua. I wont leave her

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Yash: bechari Swati. Without any mistake she's getting cursed.

Maan: tumhe badi chinta ho rahi hai? Meera ko bolu? Sach me break-up kar legi

Yash: r u mad? Main to aise hi bol raha tha. Tu to sach me break-up karayega

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Geet: shut up Meera! Isme swati ki koi galti nahi hai ok

Meera: to kya meri galti hai?

Geet: yes. It was ur mistake only

Meera (innocently): haan to theek hai na. itna gussa kyun kar rahi ho?

Geet: den wat should I do? Meera mana ki tumhe us Swati pe trust nahi hai but Yash pe to hai na. from last 3 years u guys r committed nd he haven't done anything against ur wish. even ur temper is worse nd u gets Mad on him without any reason but still he always bends to pacify u without even his mistake. Nd itna sab karne par bhi if u doubt on him like dis den definitely use gussa aayaega

Meera: I knw Geet. But u knw na jab mujhe gussa aata hai to fir mujhe kuch aur samajh nahi aata.

Geet: Meera, Pls never ever doubt on ur Love. Love nd Trust r d foundation of every relationship nd if any of dese r missing in any relationship den dere would be no point of carrying it. If dere is no Love nd Trust in relationship den it'll become nothing but just a burden. Its really painful wen u see dat d person whom u love d most doesn't trust u or doesn't loves u


Meera looked at her. she very well understand wat is she feeling rite nw but to her luck she has to pretend like she dont know anything.


Geet: Meera, u r really very lucky that u had Yash in ur Lyf who loves u more den anything else. not every1 in dis world is as lucky enough to have true love. pls dnt let dis unnecessary Doubts of urs spoil ur relationship. he will never cheat on u, he'll never leave u by saying dat dere is no Love between u two.


She said painfully while looking lost nd a drop of tear came from her eyes which was not remained unnoticed by Maan, Meera nd Yash. Maan felt pain in his heart wen he heard Geet's words nd realize hw much he and hurted her. he closed his eyes regretting every word he said to her. hw could he hurt her so much. hw could he be so dumb to even think anything like dat. he just wanted to go to her nd hug her at dat very moment only nd apologise to her to hurt her so much.


Geet realized dat she's getting carried away she quickly wipes away her tear nd looked at Meera who was looking at her concerned


Geet: u understand wat i m saying?

Meera(innocently): Ab ho gayi na Galti. kya karu hoon main Tubelight

She couldnt help herself smiling at her friend

Geet: Well, ab aage kya socha hai. Hw will u manofy him?

Meera: Wo... I planned a surprise date for him. nd dere I will say sorry to him. But I want ur help in it

Geet: What kind of help?

Meera: Wo... if u also cum wid me over dere

Geet: arey it would be ur date main waha aake kya karoongi?

Meera: See Yash is hell angry wid me. I'll somehow convince him to cum over dere but agar waha pe kuch gadbad ho gayi to? I mean tu bas ek baar uska mood shaant kar dena after dat I'll handle warna agar mujhe Gussa aa gaya to baat aur bigad jayegi. Pls Geet Pls Pls Pls Pls Pls Pls Pls (she literally Pleads like a Kid) Pls maan jao

Geet: ok ok Fine relax. I'll cum wid u nd talk to him ok but last tym after dis if u'll do sumthing like dis again den I wont help u

Meera: oh Geet Thank u Thank u Thank u Thank u Thank u Thank u Thank u Thank u so much. U r really a sweet heart. U always help me yaar. I love u yaar

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Maan: I LOVE HER too

Yash (looking at him): Control

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Geet: but aana kaha hai.

Meera: dat I'll tell u at nite. Acha one more thing pls ache se well dress up hoke aana ok

Geet: Wait Wait Wait! Date tumhari hai Main kyun well drees up hoke aayu. I'll just cum casually nd waise bhi main thodi der baad waha se chali jayungi so it needs u to get well Dress up

Meera (mutters): yaar ye koi baat seedhe se kyun nahi sunti (den to Geet) arey m saying dis because agar tum ache se dress up hoke aayogi to aas paas ka environment acha hoga nd agar environment acha hoga to sab kuch acha hoga.

Geet (rolling her eyes): Seriously sumtymes I really dnt get urlogics. Fine main ache se well dress up hoke aayungi. Happy?

Meera: very Happy. Thank u Geet.

Geet: Acha if ur Emotional Atyachaar is over den can I go nw? Armaan needs my help in shopping

Meera: ok but dnt forget to cum tomorrow

Geet: haan baba dnt worry. Can I go nw?

Meera: ok Bye nd Thanx Geet

She said nd hugged her. nd Geet leaves from dere nd Meera gives a thumbs up to both Maan nd Yash.

Maan is happy as Geet agreed to cum without suspecting anything. Nw he has to make sure dat everything goes fine nd Geet gives another chance to their relationship

Precap:
Geet ka Emotional Atyachaar😕😲🤔

OK Guys so dis is it. hope u all will like dis part. pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like dis part. nd hit d like button if all like it. nd Do Leave ur Comment/criticism its necessary. actually it really motivates me a lot so dnt forget about it.😊

Luv Aakriti😊😊


Next - Part 12
Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update
maan realizes his mistake n now he is making up to it

looking forward to the next part
continue soon
thanks for pm
bye tc
luv you
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
so he lands up on yash and then in turn meera...
meera shud hv fussed some more time b4 giving him another chance...
meera kya drama karthi hain yaar but she wnats her friend to b happy...
i hope geet doesnt give him another chance to easily...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
love the update
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..
drama queen at her best..
plz continue soon

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