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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Res! =)


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Trishu, baby, triple bonanza.

@Part 17 : Ashi thinks that Daksh is feeding her maasi bhoot pret wali stories!? 🤣🤣 Aw, Meera calls Ashi lollipops. Just saying, I don't like lollipops. :P Aw, Daksh won't disturb Shlok and Asmin!? SERIOUSLY!? Okay, I want Daksh to ask her if she REALLY wants him to get out of her life? I mean, come on, we need her to fall for him as well. Not so soon, I know, I know. And.. wait, does Daksh come to know about Shlok's identity BEFORE Asmin? :O Aw, he will get in trouble. 😔 I love Asmin and Shlok! So .. I'm guessing she's got a crush on him? Or was she just generally asking him about his girlfriends!? Aanchal and Arjun were CUTE. :D

@Part 18 : Daksh follows Shlok!? Dude, you're following a vampire, and he loves your girl, bachke rehna. :P I love Asmin and Aanchal. 😳 Haha, I love the way she was teasing Aanchal, that's something I do. :P Aw, Daksh getting jealous..again. Him getting jealous NEVERR gets old. 😃 Oohh, he asked him directly what he was doing in the jungle..And Asmin didn't believe him. Trish, let me ask you again.. Can you bring in a girl for Shlok ? Who likes Daksh ? So that we can have Asmin jealous. ;D Arnab and Madhu were cute. Haha, I can imagine Arnab with his W*F is going on expressions. 😆

@Part 19 : This has to be my favourite part. :D It reminded me of the SaJan part where Samrat pops in Gunjan's house, and when she tries to push him away, he gives her his adorable smile and says, ''Ek ladka, ek ladki, raat ko akele, log kya kahenge!?'' 😆 Oh, Daksh is DEFINATELY in trouble, poor guy! Haha, Daksh .. Main apni girlfriend ke ghar se aa raha tha. 😆 Trust him to make an excuse like that! 😆 Awww, he's so adorable.. Tumse kaise kahoon main tumse milne aaya hoon. 😳 He wants to confess his love..let's hope it's soon.. But, not too soon, otherwise she'd slap him! 🤣

Itna BADA reply :O ^^ .. I expect a BIG comment, telling me if you're getting a girl or not, and and and.. will Daksh come to know about Shlok's mystery first? WAITINGGG. :P


oooohhh
itna bada reply😃but not as liz's reply in wtc😆
at 1st THANX alot🤗
didn't think yet about a girl for Daksh but now i've changed my mind.................it will b more fun
yes,Daksh will 1st come to know about Shlok then meera
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Akhi-wheres ur ff updt??
i'm hungry man😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey trishu.. nice update!!!!!!!!!!!
btw thanx (4 d PM)😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Asin.pkyek

hey trishu.. nice update!!!!!!!!!!!
btw thanx (4 d PM)😃

thanx😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Trish...

sorry for commenting so late...

Thank you for three updates...

I just love ur FF...

Update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Trish...

sorry for commenting so late...

Thank you for three updates...

I just love ur FF...

Update soon...

take ur tym han
thanx alot😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI TRISH
iam new reader and liked ur updates very much and poor daksh luves asmin who doesnt luv hm
really fab awesomest update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mangona

HI TRISH

iam new reader and liked ur updates very much and poor daksh luves asmin who doesnt luv hm
really fab awesomest update

hey thanx alot dear😃
i'll pm u the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part-20
(Daksh looked at her & got sleep again)

(in Daksh's house)

(Princi was very angry on him)

Princi:"yeh Daksh kaha hai,itni rat ho gayi or vo abhitak bahar ghoom raha hai"

(next morning)

(Daksh stood up & sat on bed front of her)

(he was smiling)

Daksh:"u r such a wacko……….itni jhalli ho firbhi kitni sweet ho,tumse to kisiko bhi pyaar ho jayega"

(he turned into serious mod)

Daksh:"lekin main tumhe uss Shlok ka hone nahi dunga…………..main uski asliyat pata kareke hi rahunga"

(in that time Aish raised up & start shouting at him)

Aish:"yeh tum kya kar rahe the?"

Daksh:"vo main……

Aish:"kya vo main?maine tumse kaha tha na k tum niche hi rahoge par firbhi tum upar aagaye or tumhari himmat kaise hui mere bed pe baithne ki"

Daksh:"kyu………tum koi maharani nahi ho"(he snapped)

Aish:"han main hoon……….iss room ki maharani"

Daksh:"fine toh main v iss room ka king hoon"

(Aish getting more angry)

Aish:"listen u………..

(she controlled her anger)

Aish:"subha ho gayi hai ab niklo yaha se"

(Meera was passing by……………she heard some noise from Aish's room so she went there……………..knocked her door)

Meera:"Asmin…sweetie kya hua?darwaza kholo"

(Aish was shockedly looked at the door)

Meera:"Asmin darwaza kholo"

Aish:"han massi(she screamed)Daksh tum yaha se jaao massi aagyi hai agar unhone dekh liya to boht problem ho jaygi"

Daksh:"accha"(devil smile)hello meera untie"(he shouted)

(Meera got confused)

Meera:"yeh voice toh………..Daksh ki hai"

(Aish was scared)

Aish:"yeh tum kya kar rahe ho??massi ne dekh liya to……

Daksh:"toh kya?"

Aish:"you….

(Aish going to say something but Daksh stopped her)

Daksh:"main kya?ab jaao darwaza kholo arre bechari tumhari massi kabse bahar khari hai"

(Meera called her again)

Meera:"Asmin jaldi kholo"

(slowly slowly came close to the door & then opened)

Aish:"hey massi,itni subha aap yaha??kya hua"(it was a fake smile on her face)

Meera:"dekho mujhe pata hai k Daksh tumhare room me hai…..mujhe andhar aney do"

(Aish stopped smiling & Meera entered in the room)

(Daksh smiled)

Daksh:"hi Meera untie"

(Meera smiled & Aish was looking at them strangely)

Aish:"massi apko shock nahi laga Daksh ko yaha dekh k?"

Meera:"bilkul nahi…….isski to adat hai"

Aish:"massi ye kyu bol rahi hai…………in dono k beech kuch to garbar hai(Aish silently said)

Whatever"(loudly)

(she left)

(Meera changed her expression into a angry women)

Meera:"tum meri mum mum k room me kya kar rahe the?"
Daksh:"mujhe apse baat karni thi…Shlok or Raichand's k bareme"

Meera:"bolo…kuch or pata chala?"
(Daksh looks tensed)

Daksh:"you was right………….vo log humans nahi hai…………..main aaj v Shlok ke piche uske ghar tak gaya tha"

Meera:"toh kya dekha tumne?"

Daksh:"kuch khas nahi but vo log kuch drink kar rahe the…….some thing like blood"

(Meera didn't said something & she turned back)

Daksh:"kya hua?ap kuch bol kyu nahi rahi hai?"

Meera:"tum jante ho vo log kon hai?.............vampires"

(Daksh shocked)

Daksh:"whattt???

Meera:"hmm………..khun pine wale darinde"

Daksh:"iska matlab Asmin ki jaan khatre me hai?"

Meera:"mujhe nahi lagta k Shlok ek dark vampire hai kyuki usne itne dino tak Asmin ko bilkul v hurt nahi kia hai"

Daksh:"lekin ap itne yakin k sath kaise kahe sakti hai"

(she took a deep breath)

Meera:"hume Shlok se baat karma hoga"

(Daksh confidently said)

Daksh:"main baat karunga"

(Meera turned at him)

Meera:"are you sure?"

Daksh:"yup………..Asmin ki safety k liye main kuch v karunga"(an everlasting confidence on his face)

Meera:"fine,toh tum kalhi usse baat karoge"

Daksh:"okay……….ab mujhe chalna chahiye"

(Daksh went to the window………….jumped out………….Meera was moving her hand & saying bye to him & that time Aish came there………….she saw her untie was saying bye with a cute smile)

Aish:"hey bhaggu……….yeh sab kya ho raha hai?massi aise kyu behave kar rahi hai…………..i'm sure inke beech me kuch chal raha hai"(she slowly murmured)

(Daksh was gone & Meera turned to her)

Meera:"chalo vanilla pie fata fat ready ho jaao…..college jana hai na"(she smiled & crossed Aish………..Aish gave a fake smile & holds her right hand with the left)

(in Daksh's house)

(his dad was sitting angrily in leaving room & Daksh entered in his own bed room though the window & suddenly his lag was trapped in a table and there was a pot on that table…………..the pot was fall down on ground & noised)

(Princi heard the sound & went to the Daksh's room……………Daksh locked his room door & entered in the bathroom………….his dad stood front of the door)

Princi:"yeh darwaza toh andhar se lock hai toh kya Daksh andhar hai?.......Daksh"(he shouted loudly)

(Daksh came out from bathroom wearing night suit & opened the room door)

Daksh:"ji dad?"

(Princi was angry on him)

Princi:"tum kaha the?"

Daksh:"yehi pet ha………..dad"

Princi:"jhut mat bolo……main kal tumhare room me aya tha par tum yaha nahi the"

(Daksh looking around)

Daksh:"vo dad main yehi tha…………..actually kal rat main bed se gir gaya tha or shayed issi liye apne dekha nahi hoga"(fake smile)

Princi:"really??"

Daksh:"ji dad"

Princi:"thik hai………college k liye taiyar ho jaao"

(he left & Daksh took a deep breath)

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow yaar!!! Awesome update! luv d 1st scene!!!

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