New Mayur FF: Just Business Updated Pg.84

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#371

Happy Friendship Day ria...
Nice part...Loved how u showed nupur's emotions...But im just pissed of with mayank's arrogance...I cant accept such behavior from an educated person...Why cant he give nupur one chance to explain...
Plz make his character more acceptable...
Cont soon...

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#372

wow...interesting part...

the precap would be more interesting...

have been waiting to read the past...

please continue soon...

and belated happy friendship day...:):):)

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#373

finally now it's happening me happy :D

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#374

awesum update ria!
so d past is gonna b reveald soon! cant wait 4 it!
cont soon!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#375

hey!
awesome updatep😊

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#376

superb update Ria!

finally the past is going to reveal

plzzz update the next part ASAP

nd thnx for the pm 😊

Edited by Favouriteofall - 14 years ago

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#377

Ria Ria Ria sachi mein sis I loved loved loved reading diz part to coRREEe sope Nupz mad @ Myu becuz she kan't believe Mayu would say something like dat to her n Rohan n he kan't help it

becuzz he just mad 2 see dem together !

N den Nupz outside in dark road n stupid peepzz bothering her n dey coming close to her

n shezz like U better stop or will face consequences

n dey like wat consequences🤔

n den Mayu our hero comezzz N

*dhushum dhushum*

n hezz like da consequence iz me

awww but den he tellz her dat dey'll go bakk to Mumbai n stop marriage !!!🥺

I just wish now she getzz chance 2 explain 2 him everything he thinkz ijjj W-R-O-N-G

n kyaaa????😲

Nupz waz helping Rohan get a gal

OMG kan't wait to read next part

2 know Mayu'zzz reaction 2 dat !!
plezz plezz plezz continue ASAP

-Linu

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#378

riaaa
waiitng for ur update
plz update dis f and also update crossed path

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saraaa.

@saraaa.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#379

beautiful update Ria 😊 I loved how you described Nupur's and Mayank's feelings in the beginning showing them get farther away from each other but more closer to darkness. And am looking forward to the past being revealed as well .. it's about time he listened