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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

nice story....................
Maan is different in this fic..............
cont soon and pm me.............

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

geet should let things take its time n relax

n maan may become a gud frnd whom geet is really missing in her life

awesomee update

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

wow! so i just started reading this fan fic!! you're an excellent writer! great job on these four parts! i was hoping you could pm me whenever you continue again? thanks!!

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mishtib

@mishtib

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

hey nice ff
do add me to ur pm list

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

I liked the characters in this FF of urs Jia,all are sort of namunaas....I mean unique in their own way....... be it Pinky,Pammy,AA or our Maan who is a bigger flirt than Dev in many other FFs' 😆 and geet,she's so quiet in here whereas she's a complete chatter box otherwise 😆...sab ulta-pulta hai....but nonetheless I'm enjoying it....but u r not parting with the secrets of Geet yet,how am I supposed to assess her character with out knowing what it is that she has to decide about?Well AA are being the perfect couple here for a change,since our Maaneet are not at it for now....what with Geet guarding her heart so consciously n Maan trying to dig in to her secrets and not paying enough attention in winning over her heart....well well well see so much of action is missing here....action in my terms u know 😉....they all are just talking n talking endlessly with out getting to the point of interest here 😆....just like me...see I'm typing n typing with out having anything to actually say to u 😆😆.....so I'll put a stop to it here...but u better update this soon and at least give me a peek in to Geet's problems so that there is something for me to think about....

And yeah I quite didn't understand the last line....why does she feel its already too late....is she already falling for Maan??😕

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-jia-

@-jia-

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: esha143
I liked the characters in this FF of urs Jia,all are sort of namunaas....I mean unique in their own way....... be it Pinky,Pammy,AA or our Maan who is a bigger flirt than Dev in many other FFs' 😆 and geet,she's so quiet in here whereas she's a complete chatter box otherwise 😆...sab ulta-pulta hai....but nonetheless I'm enjoying it....but u r not parting with the secrets of Geet yet,how am I supposed to assess her character with out knowing what it is that she has to decide about?Well AA are being the perfect couple here for a change,since our Maaneet are not at it for now....what with Geet guarding her heart so consciously n Maan trying to dig in to her secrets and not paying enough attention in winning over her heart....well well well see so much of action is missing here....action in my terms u know 😉....they all are just talking n talking endlessly with out getting to the point of interest here 😆....just like me...see I'm typing n typing with out having anything to actually say to u 😆😆.....so I'll put a stop to it here...but u better update this soon and at least give me a peek in to Geet's problems so that there is something for me to think about....

And yeah I quite didn't understand the last line....why does she feel its already too late....is she already falling for Maan??😕

🤗🤗🤗🤗 Pehle jhappis...

Yep...all is ulta pulta here... LOL... that is one reason I am very scared if readers will like to read this particular FF.. I have always wanted Maan to be more talkative so I made him this way here...

He will do a lot more of talking before doing some action u want... LOL..... action will come soon...abhi to istory istart hui hai... wait karo... Geet is guarding her heart coz of a lot of reasons which will come out soon... and then u can speculate... I have given a little hint abt her own parents and family.. love was missing there too.... she never had a normal family so she is gonna be a little scared.

With the last line, she feels its too late coz even though everybody has warned her abt Maan, she feels she is taking a step towards him, like by going out of the house. She feels the more time she will spend with him, the more difficult it will be to resist Maan's charm. And NO, she has not fallen for him yet. he has done nothing other than flirt with her. 😆

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-jia-

@-jia-

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
wow! so i just started reading this fan fic!! you're an excellent writer! great job on these four parts! i was hoping you could pm me whenever you continue again? thanks!!

Thankyou dear...😊

U r added to the pm list 👍🏼

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Thanks for the elobarated reply to my comment darling...its as long as my own comment😆......but yes it answered my queries....and here are ur share of jhappis 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 and pappis too..u see bonus bonus

Edited by esha143 - 14 years ago

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

yaha bhi reserve 😆

aur ab firse un reserve 😉😆

the interaction between Maan n Geet during their trip to the garden was nice....it was light n pleasant... no trace of flirting from Maan n no fear of falling for him in Geet...though she did marvel about his physic....and the banter between the bro-sis is also homely....it do show the level of their relation.....I esp. loved Maan's witty comebacks...and then his efforts to lighten Geet's mood at dinner shows his concern for her,his care to bring a smile on her face....and he's realizing his feelings for Geet which have taken a deeper root in his heart than the casual flings of his past.....nice update Jia.....but still waiting for the secrets to unfold....and why was Geet so upset?

Edited by esha143 - 14 years ago